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Some poems of mine...Nothing special.

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Now I am starting to love you more-

Yet your breathing has eternally paused - cold to the core.

I wish I could turn back time as we'd run away-

To fulfill our wildest dreams, throwing all our fears aside.

But now that you're gone, I have nothing left to hold - I have lost control.

Those three final words that slipped from your lips I'll forever keep-

Now you shall sleep.








=An eternal sanctuary.




My soul speaks so sliently

But I just can't hear it anymore.

Ever since you've been gone,

Not once have you escaped the chamber of my throbbing heart.

You broke open the lock of it-

Even though I knew it'd be hard to do.

My spirit still bleeds from the pain and hurt you've caused me to now know-

I've never felt so alone.

Your harsh words from a far-off memory still burn like venom in my core.

Even from all those months...years,

You still made me feel in such a way I thought I'd never remember-

Yet now my most inner dreams have been finally regained.

Do you hear me whisper your name in the stillness of night?

I try to walk away - I can no longer stay under your spell.

These memories of those days hidden deep in the hollows of my heart seem to stalk me; No matter where I run to, your image remains.

I must forget you, and though it is far beyond a goal I have to eventually reach that is near the word impossible, I swear I will someday.

A lack of hope will no longer cause this healing wound to stumble.

I need to leave behind the past that I've shed so many tears about - Yesterday will become never.

Forever will I remain in my, and not your sanctuary of which I used to know.

An eternium, one of my own.

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.......i have a problem with relating poems..........

the first one reminds me of Namine to Sora

and the second one reminds me of Sora to Namine



...............i relate poems too much, sometimes its SCARY





*kinda off topic here*


my friend made SUCH a beautiful poem.......until i read it............it was about her and her old boyfriend....but to me i thought it was Akuroku (which i dont care for).........i laughed at her until she re-read the lines that just SHOUTED it which were: "I was your Mentor, Lover" and "your eyes blue mine green" "Your hand cold mine warm" and so fourth xD ..........lets just say that i tramatized her after pointing that out xD



xD jes. now I'm not allowed to read her poems or else i'd tramatize her again

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