CRIT, YES?

An old hag version of Namine?

Her back is too far out, make it more curvy, the anatomy is off a bit in that area and she looks flat-chested. o3o the breasts look triangular (sorry just had to say it) but I'm loving the hair and facial expression.

Omg Cricket found out my secret! D:

Truth is, when I draw, I tend to focus more on the face and hair more than anything else

The boobs were curvy at first but when the hair overlapped with it, they became triangular

Namine looks pretty flat chested to me ._.

IFAKKINLURVEYOUBETCHILOVEANYTHINGYOUDRAW<3

 

I like her eyes, but something seems off about the way her neck transitions into her body.

Her nose is flat and her neck is really wide.

Derp.

Face is off, hair doesn't swoop enough on one side, her body looks thick, she has no evidence of boobs and her mouth is just line. Derp.

O.O

Thanks for the crit!

It seems I have a lot to work on hehe ^^"

Sorry/bitch mode = harsh crit

It's not horrible/forgot to mention this

but it can be alot better.

Nahh it's cool l0l

 

That's the best kind of crit! It goes into a lot of detail to find stuff wrong

 

I'll do my best to improve (:

It looks pretty cool. The back is a little bit too far out owo

Thanks l0l I'll have to redo it though haha