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Vulpix's poetry megathread

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What's up, everyone. Its the wonderful fire type here with something new. Poetry. I decided to give this a little!e stab, and I'm making a megathread for me to post poetry on.

 

Our first one begins with the narrator struggling to maintain between two personalities. One is positive and friendly, one is negative and hostile. In the poem, he tries to hide it, but he knows he has to confront it

 

 

 

Two personalities

 

I need to hide it. This being that isn't me.

I need to remove it. This is a monster.

 

I am a being of light, he is a being of dark.

I wan't to be friendly, he wants to be hostile.

 

This personality can be seen, it must be hidden.

He's not a person, he's me. But not.

 

No, I can't be that person.

I can't be that way.

 

I look into a mirror, and turn away.

The horrid monstrosity I see isn't me.

 

It looks like me, and I want him out.

 

I throw the mirror onto the ground, the shards flying everywhere.

 

That monster isn't me, but he is a part of me.

I regret becoming him, I want him gone.

 

I want to be me.

 

 

There's plenty where that came from. And as always, comments and feedback is optional, but highly recommended.

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Ooh, that was a very nice poem! I find that it's about the inner struggle we all face within ourselves. All of us have that side that we don't like anyone else to see, the side we want to keep to ourselves. Inevitably, we have to confront that side of ours and either embrace it or destroy it! But can it be destroyed? I do not know!

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I am a being IS light, he is a being of dark.

I WASN'T to be friendly, he wants to be hostile

 

 

 

Are these spelling errors or am I not getting it here? They seem like errors to me, but I can't tell if they really are or not.

 

Other than that, this is really good and delivers the feeling one has when fighting their inner demon. Good work here! :D

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I am a being IS light, he is a being of dark.

I WASN'T to be friendly, he wants to be hostile

Are these spelling errors or am I not getting it here? They seem like errors to me, but I can't tell if they really are or not.

Other than that, this is really good and delivers the feeling one has when fighting their inner demon. Good work here! :D

Typos. They are fixed now, hanks for pointing them out.

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