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Okay I know I should be working on my other story Bring me Salvation but I just had to post this up. It was a dream I had last night. A pretty weird one too; that's the last time I'll eat cake before bed... Anyways I hope you like it and tell me what you think. By the way, if I remember right this is a SoRiku story so if you don't like yaoi then I suggest you not read this story. Also it's AU.

 

Chapter 1: Penalty

 

"Hell no."

"C'mon, you have to! You lost the bet!"

"I didn't think this was the kind of penalty you'd think of!"

 

Sora was NOT in a good mood. His twin brother, along with their cousins Ventus and Vanitas as judges, made a bet with him a while back. The bet was that Roxas could go without eating Sea-Salt Ice Cream while Sora had to go without eating his favorite chips. It wasn't long until Sora caved and ate a bag of Doritos when he thought no one was around. Unfortunately for him, Vanitas saw him and blackmailed Sora for the next few days before telling Roxas. Talk about being manipulative...

 

"Aw, come one Sora, it's not that bad" said Vanitas, a mischievous glint in his bright yellow eyes. Sora shot him a glare. There was no way hell he was going to wear that... thing Ven was holding. Roxas let out an irritated sigh. Why was he being so stubborn? They both agreed to each make a penalty that the other didn't know about. Besides, like Vanitas said, it wasn't that bad...

 

"Just put it on Sora, at least a few minutes"

"There's no wasy I'm dressing like a girl!"

"Why not? Afraid you'll look like one?"

"Shut up Vanitas, you're not making things better."

"Come over here and make me Ventus."

 

After barely being able to keep Ven and Vanitas from grabbing each other's throat, Sora reclunctantly agreed to put on the outfit. When questioned on how he managed to get it without being looked at weirdly by the other customers, Ven responded with "I have my ways" and left it at that. That left the others wondering what kind of ways he uses. Ven handed Sora the outfit and he trudged towards his room to change.

 

Roxas and Ven became worried after nearly an hour went by. Why hadn't Sora come out of his room yet? Vanitas rolled his eyes when they were pacing around like headless Chocobos. "If you're so worried about the idiot, then go and check up on him" he said, annoyed with their mother hen act; sometimes he couldn't help but think he was surrounded by idiots. But before Ven and Roxas could run to Sora's room, they heard footsteps heading in their direction. All three of them turned their heads and had very different reactions

 

Roxas' jaw nealy dropped to the floor, his eyes wide in disbelief.

Ven kept rubbing his eyes every ten seconfs to make sure he wasn't imagining things.

And Vanitas... well he was laughing his ass off.

 

"Stop looking at me like that! And it's not that funny Vanitas!" exclaimed Sora, his cheeks were colored a bright shade of red. He was so going to get them back for this. Vanitas was practically gasping for air while clutching his sides. Oh God, this was too funny; Sora seriously looked like a girl! A very flat-chested one. He even managed to straighten his spiky, gravity defying hair, although it did spike up a bit in the back.

 

The outfit was pretty simple. It was a short-sleeved form fitting black shirt with slightly loose white sleeveless shirt over it with a fancy blue butterfly design. He had on a tutu skirt with shorts underneath. To finish it off, Sora had a pair of boots that reached up to his shins. His now straightened hair brushed against him shoulders slightly.

 

"Aw, is the princess having a temper tantrum?"

"Shut up already!"

 

Sora bit his lower lip, trying to hold in his tears. Sometimes Vanitas took his 'teasing' too far. Ven gave Vanitas a look that said 'Don't push it' but it didn't look like he noticed. So he continued in his merciless teasing of his younger cousin.

 

"Now, now there's no need for you to cry. Your make up might start running"

 

That was the last straw. The tears started to run down Sora's cheeks before he ran out of the living room and out of the house. He faintly heard Roxas call out from him to come back but he didn't pay any attention to it. Roxas was beyond angry; he was furious at Vanitas.

 

"What the hell's your problem dude?!"

"Hey, it's not my fault the crybaby can't take a joke"

"Yes it is!"

 

It didn't take long for them to start fighting, leaving poor Ven to try and pull them apart while worrying about Sora. It was pretty late and who knew what kind of creeps laid in the dark. Hopefully Sora would come back soon.

 

And that's the end of Chapter 1. Tell me what you think and state any mistakes that I might have made. I hope you enjoyed it! ^_^

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write more plz

 

okay i'll have it up as soon as i can

hurry it's sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo good, + i love story's like this

best story everrrrrr

  • Author

Okay! Here's Chapter 2 for LMFWIA! Sorry for the wait, school robs me of my free time DX Anyways I hope you enjoy it and tell me any mistakes so I can fix it.

 

Chapter 2- Encounter

 

'Stupid bet. Stupid Vanitas' thought Sora as he sat on one of the vacant swings in the park not too far from his house. He didn't want to go back home since Sora knew that Vanitas was just going to pick on him for being a crybaby. He really wondered if there was some kind of trauma Vanitas had gone through that made him act the way he did or if he was just born that way. Oh well, what does it matter?

 

He wiped away some of the tears that were still running down his cheeks. What good will crying do for him if it makes him feel worse? Sora took a few deep breaths to help calm himself down. 'Relax, crying is not going to make things better' thought Sora, feeling himself relax little by little and his tears starting to stop

 

"Hey"

 

"GAH!" Sora nearly jumped out of the swing, his heart beating rapidly from being started. He looked up to see a boy around his age, maybe a little bit older than himself, with silver hair and aquamarine eyes. He was wearing a black polo shirt that had the first few buttons left undone with with white long sleeved shirt underneath that reached up to his elbows. There were at least two dog tags around his neck and had on dark blue skinny jeans that went along with his black combat boots. All in all, he looked hot.

 

Sora immediately shook his head rapidly; he did not just think the guy in front of him was hot. There's no way its possible, Sora liked girls not guys!

 

While Sora was having his internal debate about his sexuality, Riku raised an eyebrow at the girl's reaction. But he was curious about why she was sitting in the park alone at night. Didn't she know that there were perverts lurking around in the dark? It was then that he noticed that her bright blue eyes were red and puffy.

 

"Were you crying?" asked Riku, as the girl looked up him with surprise written all over her face. Sora didn't expect him to ask that question at all. His eyes wandered to his lap, and seeing the skirt reminded him that he ran out the house being dress like a girl. Great, now Sora was being mistaken as a girl. Then again, maybe it was better this way; he did NOT want the silver haired teen to think of him as a crossdresser. Sora noticed that said teen was waiting for a reply to his question.

 

"Huh? Oh, no I wasn't! I just had something in my eye!"

"Really?"

"Yeah really! You don't need to worry about me..... uh"

 

Sora trailed off, not knowing what the other's name was.

 

"Riku"

 

He looked at him with a questioning look before Sora realized the teen just told him his name. So his name was Riku; if he remembered right , didn't 'Riku' mean 'land'? It seems fitting seeing how the other teen seemed to be strong.

 

"Well, Riku you really don't need to worry about me. Honest"

"I can tell that you were crying because your eyes are red and puffy."

 

Riku leaned in closer to Sora, making said brunette's face turn as red as a tomato. "Um... Riku? You're a little... to close for comfort" he said, while trying to fight down the blush that practically recolored his entire face. Riku blinked owlishly before realizing that he leaned in too close. He pulled back while muttering an apology.

 

"Don't worry about it. Besides I've got to get going." said Sora before getting off the swing and making his way around Riku and walking away as quickly as he could. Sora felt something grab his wrist and when he turned around slightly to see that it Riku.

 

"Wait, you didn't tell me your name." he said, his aquamarine eyes looking into Sora's bright azure ones. Sora bit his lower lip, unsure if he should tell Riku his real name or a fake one. But he figured that Riku wouldn't believe him if he told him a fake name anyways. Besides, it wasn't like Sora was going to meet him again right?

 

"My name's Sora"

 

And with that said, Sora managed to free his wrist from Riku's grasp and walked away without breaking into a run. Riku stood there, his arm still stretched out like was holding Sora's wrist. A faint smile appeared on his otherwise stoic face.

 

"Sora, huh?" he said softly before turning around in the opposite direction, hoping to meet Sora again in the future.

 

Finally! Chapter 2 is up! Sorry it's short than the first chapter. If there's anything wrong, tell me and I'll fix it up when I have to time.

 

By the way, I put all the words that refer to the female gender in italics just to keep my readers from getting confused.

that was a some plz plz write more

Okay! Here's Chapter 2 for LMFWIA! Sorry for the wait, school robs me of my free time DX Anyways I hope you enjoy it and tell me any mistakes so I can fix it.

 

Chapter 2- Encounter

 

'Stupid bet. Stupid Vanitas' thought Sora as he sat on one of the vacant swings in the park not too far from his house. He didn't want to go back home since Sora knew that Vanitas was just going to pick on him for being a crybaby. He really wondered if there was some kind of trauma Vanitas had gone through that made him act the way he did or if he was just born that way. Oh well, what does it matter?

 

He wiped away some of the tears that were still running down his cheeks. What good will crying do for him if it makes him feel worse? Sora took a few deep breaths to help calm himself down. 'Relax, crying is not going to make things better' thought Sora, feeling himself relax little by little and his tears starting to stop

 

"Hey"

 

"GAH!" Sora nearly jumped out of the swing, his heart beating rapidly from being started. He looked up to see a boy around his age, maybe a little bit older than himself, with silver hair and aquamarine eyes. He was wearing a black polo shirt that had the first few buttons left undone with with white long sleeved shirt underneath that reached up to his elbows. There were at least two dog tags around his neck and had on dark blue skinny jeans that went along with his black combat boots. All in all, he looked hot.

 

Sora immediately shook his head rapidly; he did not just think the guy in front of him was hot. There's no way its possible, Sora liked girls not guys!

 

While Sora was having his internal debate about his sexuality, Riku raised an eyebrow at the girl's reaction. But he was curious about why she was sitting in the park alone at night. Didn't she know that there were perverts lurking around in the dark? It was then that he noticed that her bright blue eyes were red and puffy.

 

"Were you crying?" asked Riku, as the girl looked up him with surprise written all over her face. Sora didn't expect him to ask that question at all. His eyes wandered to his lap, and seeing the skirt reminded him that he ran out the house being dress like a girl. Great, now Sora was being mistaken as a girl. Then again, maybe it was better this way; he did NOT want the silver haired teen to think of him as a crossdresser. Sora noticed that said teen was waiting for a reply to his question.

 

"Huh? Oh, no I wasn't! I just had something in my eye!"

"Really?"

"Yeah really! You don't need to worry about me..... uh"

 

Sora trailed off, not knowing what the other's name was.

 

"Riku"

 

He looked at him with a questioning look before Sora realized the teen just told him his name. So his name was Riku; if he remembered right , didn't 'Riku' mean 'land'? It seems fitting seeing how the other teen seemed to be strong.

 

"Well, Riku you really don't need to worry about me. Honest"

"I can tell that you were crying because your eyes are red and puffy."

 

Riku leaned in closer to Sora, making said brunette's face turn as red as a tomato. "Um... Riku? You're a little... to close for comfort" he said, while trying to fight down the blush that practically recolored his entire face. Riku blinked owlishly before realizing that he leaned in too close. He pulled back while muttering an apology.

 

"Don't worry about it. Besides I've got to get going." said Sora before getting off the swing and making his way around Riku and walking away as quickly as he could. Sora felt something grab his wrist and when he turned around slightly to see that it Riku.

 

"Wait, you didn't tell me your name." he said, his aquamarine eyes looking into Sora's bright azure ones. Sora bit his lower lip, unsure if he should tell Riku his real name or a fake one. But he figured that Riku wouldn't believe him if he told him a fake name anyways. Besides, it wasn't like Sora was going to meet him again right?

 

"My name's Sora"

 

And with that said, Sora managed to free his wrist from Riku's grasp and walked away without breaking into a run. Riku stood there, his arm still stretched out like was holding Sora's wrist. A faint smile appeared on his otherwise stoic face.

 

"Sora, huh?" he said softly before turning around in the opposite direction, hoping to meet Sora again in the future.

 

Finally! Chapter 2 is up! Sorry it's short than the first chapter. If there's anything wrong, tell me and I'll fix it up when I have to time.

 

By the way, I put all the words that refer to the female gender in italics just to keep my readers from getting confused.

 

OMG PLEASE DONT MAKE THIS IN TO A YAOI DX

Sora was NOT in a good mood. His twin brother, along with their cousins Ventus and Vanitas as judges, made a bet with him a while back. The bet was that Roxas could go without eating Sea-Salt Ice Cream while Sora had to go without eating his favorite chips. It wasn't long until Sora caved and ate a bag of Doritos when he thought no one was around. Unfortunately for him, Vanitas saw him and blackmailed Sora for the next few sat before telling Roxas. Talk about being manipulative..."

 

I think I read that part somewhere else. Maybe on fanfiction..

Nice story though!

  • Author

@ Aqua7KH

Sorry but I was already planning on making it a yaoi fan fic. Besides, I put in the first post before chapter one that it was going to be SoRiku and that anyone who didn't like shouldn't read it

Riku better not kiss Sora! :s

  • Author

*twitch* Did you not see the top of my first post? It is a SORIKU fanfic, meaning that it is yaoi and that there is a good chance that Sora and Riku will kiss.

 

I'm sorry if I sound mean but I don't like repeating something that I have typed up before the start of the first chapter that way the reader (you) will know whether or not if they should read it.

@ Aqua7KH

Sorry but I was already planning on making it a yaoi fan fic. Besides, I put in the first post before chapter one that it was going to be SoRiku and that anyone who didn't like shouldn't read it

 

can you atleast make it a accident thing :D

You guys, she's not gonna change her story just because you don't like yaoi.

She warned, you ignored.

So either stfu or gtfo because it's annoying for a writer to be pestered not to do something just because the readers said so.

She's writing a yaoi and that's that.

 

On topic:

I love this, I really do. Mostly because I love Soriku <3

you dont got to be all mean about it and i didnt know it was a yaoi because i read it mistakenly and its not i dont like it i mean i dont really care if its yaoi or not its just that i think it would be a little better if its not. but if she wants to make it a yaoi go for it!

forget i even made the last comment :D

srry feli :D

*twitch* Did you not see the top of my first post? It is a SORIKU fanfic, meaning that it is yaoi and that there is a good chance that Sora and Riku will kiss.

 

I'm sorry if I sound mean but I don't like repeating something that I have typed up before the start of the first chapter that way the reader (you) will know whether or not if they should read it.

 

Well I just read the thread and then skip to the story. So sorry.:s
  • Author

@Hinako_U.

I'm glad you like the story ^_^

 

@Aqua7KH

Don't worry about it~ I forgive you

 

@TJwolf13

That's okay

@Hinako_U.

I'm glad you like the story ^_^

 

@Aqua7KH

Don't worry about it~ I forgive you

 

@TJwolf13

That's okay

 

lol idk why i even made a big deal about the yaoi thing xD i dont think i was sober at the time (jk)
  • 4 weeks later...
  • Author

Sorry I haven't updated this yet and my other story but school is seriously cutting off my creative juices needed to create this chapter. So behold the third chapter~

 

Chapter 3- Surprise, Surprise

 

When Sora came back home after his encounter with Riku, he didn't expect to see Roxas and Vanitas sitting on the couch with Ven bandaging said relatives. "Do I want to know what happened?" he asked, making the other three look up at him, not expecting to see Sora back so soon. Ven was relieved to see his youger cousin safe and not being surrounded by some thugs in an alley, trying to do who-knows-what to the naive brunette. "Sora! You okay!" he said while dropping the bandages in his hand, abandoning his role as nurse for his look-alike cousin and sadistic brother in favor running over to Sora before giving him a bone-crushing hug.

 

"Ven... can't... breath!" That was all Sora managed to say before Ven let him go, grinning sheepishly. "Sorry about that. I was worried that something bad happened to you. Especially since your dressed like that" replied Ven, adding the last line as an after thought, oblivious to Sora's red face. Roxas got up from the couch, wincing slightly as he did so. He knew that Vanitas could put up a fight but he hadn't expect him to hit him so hard. It was like Roxas was one of those gang members that Vanitas liked to beat up just for the hell of it. Sora noticed this and repeated his question.

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