PrincessToriAlly15 2 Posted September 7, 2009 With each passing day as I wait for you The flowers around me,endlessly bloom The memories chained deep inside my heart Because of Namine's actions,they were torn apart Bit by bit,they were scattered,then collected But as time went by,I knew she felt neglected So I stayed with her,until it was done But then Diz betrayed her,kep't saying "She's shuned" As that year went by,memorization supressed I always kep't hidden,a girl depressed Then I fought Nobodies,Humanoids,Heartless too I wanted the feeling back,being right beside you Now the journey is over,peace is restored The enemies supressed forevermore As our hearts intertwined,with memories new Let me tell you this.... I'm still waiting for you Well....what do u guys think? I wrote this poem Saturday when I went to my mom's mom's house.This kinda tells a story.....It's about me searching for Riku up until KH2.I was waiting for him on the Destiny Islands in a different version of my stories..... Anyways,tell me what you think! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
im-axel-fear-me-NOW 10 Posted September 7, 2009 thats really good!!!!!!!! i luv it ^^ Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sneezes 73 Posted September 7, 2009 that was absolutely great X3! keep writing!! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kairi-loves-Sushi 15 Posted September 7, 2009 So pwetty! I luvs it Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
PrincessToriAlly15 2 Posted September 7, 2009 Thank you all!!! That's excactly the kind of encouragement I need to keep writing! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
PrincessToriAlly15 2 Posted September 7, 2009 Thanks Blaze... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Dani_Dancer_13 1 Posted September 7, 2009 That was awesome (I kept on spelling awesome wrong U_U It was annoying.)! *Facepalm* I suck at poetry. It's good to know that someone can actually pwn at it http://kh13.com/forum/public/style_emoticons/default/happy.gif Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
PrincessToriAlly15 2 Posted September 7, 2009 Thanks! Hey....I'll call u....DD13! Is that cool? Oh and thanks 4 the compliment!I'm just barely taking up poetry in my brain. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Larxene12 86 Posted September 9, 2009 i liked it good job! keep writing! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
PrincessToriAlly15 2 Posted September 25, 2009 Thanks Larexene12! I entered this poem in a festival: Poetry and Prose. They gave me an excellent on my certificate.Surprisingly enough,there was a lot of little kids there,and they were all entries. My friend Trinity was the olny other 8th grader that represented our school.Her poem was about Jenova,from Avdent Children.TIt turns out,she likes Final Fantasy too! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites