Text Fanfic: Kingdom Hearts [Riku/Sora] : Saving 1

[bonbonpich 6]

Hello everyone, so I've posted some fanart and wanted to go for a fanfic too, then doujinshi later. I'm not sure if there are much Riku/Sora fans here, but I just wanna give it a try.

Please click on the link?>> Saving Chapter 1: Saving

Full Summary: A Nobody-vampire Riku was tired of his immortal life and was about to burn himself under the sun, was unwillingly saved by the mortal Sora. Riku was led to the light within Sora. While they started to remember their prior encounter years ago, Riku's darkness began to take its toll on Sora.

Warning: Shonen-ai content @Rate PG

Main: RikuxSora. Side: AxelxRoxas. Slight: RoxasxSora (brotherly, Roxas's got this brother complex thingy).

Any critiques are welcome!

Also I'm looking for beta-reader for this. I'm not native-english and I'm sure you can probably tell by the look at my writing. If anyone could, then please let me know.