Shard the Gentleman 2,891 Posted March 12, 2012 First of all, here is the link to part one: http://kh13.com/foru...783#entry593783 ---------------------- "...learn a tiny worlds history. Sora, I'm very disappointed in you. I'm afraid, I'm going to have to send you to military school." "Dad, I've already fought in a couple of wars." Sora responded, glad that he had a way to disown that punishment. " Then, how about this? I won't allow you to see your friends." " He already went on numerous journeys to find us. He has dealt without us for almost two years." Riku responded. Sora was happy to see that Riku was on his side. " Ok, Fine. I won't allow you to enter your room for 3 days." " He has a Gummi ship, you know. And let's not forget that he hasn't slept in his room for 5 years straight." Even Kairi was joining in, it seemed. " What haven't you done?" Alan yelled in anger. All three of the teenagers pondered on this for quite awhile. Sora had an Idea, but he wasn't about to say it. " I have one. You have to walk to school, everyday, with no help, wearing a sign that says " I'm a class Clown" and on the other side, it will say " I will never amount to anything in my life." Alan said, with a grin on his face. " Dad, I have already amounted to many things. Including saving your life." Sora snapped back. Sora, too, had a grin on his face. " Don't get smart with me, young man! How about this? On the other side, It will say 'I have a crush on-" " Dad, No!" Sora yelped. Kairi was RIGHT THERE. There was no way he was going to let his father get away with this. " -Kairi, and she will never love me, because I fail" Alan finished. His face beamed from his cunning decision. Kairi stood there, with no changed emotions. Riku collapsed laughing and howling at Sora's embarrassment. Sora grimaced. Alan ran off into his bedroom, and let the three teens there alone. " Ha! This HAS to go on KH13.com." Riku blurted, still laughing, turning blue, as if he was going to die of laughter. Riku pulled his laptop out, and started typing. " Riku, You don't HAVE a kh13 account." This was true, Riku did not even realize this site existed prior of yesterday. " That's fine. I'll just hack my friend Tycen's account. He is going to LOVE THIS!" Riku exclaimed, and thus, Sora learned his lesson. Don't fail, or have your most embarrassing moment posted on the internet. --------------------------- Did you enjoy it? I feel horrible for breaking the fourth wall, but I finished. I really need to work on my writing skills. Anyways, thanks, and TTFN! Ta ta for now! 2 King Demise and 4Everbee reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
XIIISwords 1,059 Posted March 12, 2012 Alan named his son Sora? Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shard the Gentleman 2,891 Posted March 12, 2012 Alan named his son Sora? Apparently. Alan is my staple. He is always the father of the main character in all my stories. I guess it's because I like references. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
4Everbee 1,365 Posted March 12, 2012 -gets knife- I'm going to kill Sora dad. Kairi'Why?" Cause he mean to my boyfriend. FAN GIRLS NOW! Anyways Awesome story but... Did you really have to make it like the that dude who failed? Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shard the Gentleman 2,891 Posted March 12, 2012 -gets knife- I'm going to kill Sora dad. Kairi'Why?" Cause he mean to my boyfriend. FAN GIRLS NOW! Anyways Awesome story but... Did you really have to make it like the that dude who failed? It was sort of supposed to be that way. Just referencing where I got it from. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Queen Tery 4,591 Posted March 13, 2012 lol the last part was epic, but that dad was much more of a douche than the real dad he's based of. 1 Shard the Gentleman reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
