'Into The New World'

 

A KH13 Original Story

 

This is the very first time I'm writing a fanfic so you will see some trial and error here and there, but I will try my best to make it an interesting story!

 

In this fanfic, I want you guys to imagine that these characters will be talking in Korean, because I will be posting korean songs as part of the plot and make the story go by.

 

That is all. Hope you guys enjoy!

 

Main Characters:-

 

TheApprenticeofKingMickey - Apprentice

Shana09 - Shana

Think Pink - Lexi

Koko - Koko

 

Supporting Characters:-

 

KH13 Members

 

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Prologue

 

4 tickets was purchased. A concert to a popular Kpop group called 'HerShe'.

 

"Hurry Up! We're gonna be late!" Shouted Lexi from faraway.

 

"Yeah! Coming!" Replied Apprentice, who bought the tickets for the concert.

 

"I've waited 2 years for this! HerShe! In our town! I can't wait!" Said Shana with an excited voice.

 

"We must thank Koko for this. Without her fabulous skills to track the buyer down, we won't be getting the ticket now." Said Apprentice

 

"Oh Fabulous Koko! Thankyouthankyouthankyouthankyou!" Screamed the 2 girls.

 

"Hehe~ Your Welcome~" Koko Giggled.

 

"Hurry! Lets go! The concert starts in just one hour!" Said Lexi with a hurried voice.

 

"Alright alright.." Sigh the other 3 girls

 

**

 

**

 

As they walk into the indoor stadium entrance, Apprentice saw baylaust.

 

"Hey.. Isn't that baylaust? baylaust!" Shouted Apprentice to get baylaust's attention.

 

"What are you doing here? Don't you have a part time job?" Asked Apprentice

 

"I am. I'm handling the crowd for the concert." Said baylaust

 

"Oh? So you won't be inside the stadium later?" Asked Apprentice

 

"Nope. We're gonna hangout here until the show ends, plus the pay is worth the wait." Said baylaust

 

"Hey! baylaust! we need to open the stadium entrance now!" Shouted another guard that were handling another crowd of people.

 

"Alright! You girls go enjoy the show. I'll see you in class on monday." Said with a rushed voice before handling the rest of the crowd.

 

"Yeah! We should hurry to the waiting line too." Said Shana.

 

**

 

**

 

As they enter the indoor stadium, the place was filled with people. Everyone was getting ready for their banner and lightsticks.

 

"We should get ready ours too!" Said an excited Shana.

 

They got out their lightsticks and went to an appropriate area of the mosh pit to get a good view of the famous Kpop Group later.

 

"Ican'twaitican'twaiticantwait--" Excited Shana.

 

"Alright alright, we're here already, we're gonna see them soon." Said 3 girls to calm Shana down.

 

As they were calming Shana down, the lights went dim and the crowd switched on their lightsticks and went wild.

 

"HerShe! HerShe! HerShe!"

 

As the crowd chant their name, there were lasers shooting out and smokes coming out from the ground.

 

The projector screen flashes a name 'HerShe' and the crowd goes wild once again.

 

3 silhouettes appeared from the stage below, making the crowd scream even louder. And so, begins their concert with their first song.

 

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XwEzrIAE9eQ

 

The crowd goes wild.

 

**

 

**

 

After 2 and half hours, the concert ended with a beautiful note.

 

"I am going to be a singer after I graduate from high school!" said Apprentice.

 

"Me too!" Said Shana

 

"I'm going to be the best dancer there is!" Said Koko with an enthusiastic voice.

 

"I will support you no matter what you do Apprentice." Said Lexi.

 

Lexi went closer to Apprentice and kissed her forehead.

 

"Daww~" as the 2 girls look at them.

 

 

As the scene fate to white, we jump 4 years later as they will begin their university life. This is where the story of 4 individuals unfolds.

 

Into The New World.

 

To be continued.

 

Edited July 4, 201213 yr by kalnet

ME!? HOSHIT

 

8D But yay!

 

You sneak, putting Gennbay in there.

that's interesting

Please add me in the story(well if you want to )

"Nope. We're gonna hangout here until the show ends, plus the pay is worth the wait." Said baylust

 

 

Oh god I'm so sorry! I must be careful next time. Really sorry about that.

 

I will post chapter 1 later today. Need to spell-check and polish the script.

 

And yes. There will be more Gennbay soon. kalnet's mind is full of it.

 

 

Oh god I'm so sorry! I must be careful next time. Really sorry about that.

 

I will post chapter 1 later today. Need to spell-check and polish the script.

 

And yes. There will be more Gennbay soon. kalnet's mind is full of it.

 

My friend, Gennbay is compromised of sarcasm, sexual innuendo and honesty. Keep that in mind.

 

You might also want to refer to Think Pink as Lexi, because that's what she usually goes by.

 

And don't forget to use gender neutral pronouns for Koko.

I was surprised I was in there. o_o

I never though of me being in an fanfic.

/FLATTEREDASHELL

 

I can't wait for the next part

 

By the way, HerShe...it reminds me of:

 

Anyways, I found my new favorite song~

 

 

Add more Gennbay, I want to mess with bay in this fanfic //shot

 

Just do whatever you like though~ <3333333333333333333

 

 

EDIT:

 

INTO THE NEW WORLD

CHOCOLATE WORLD

 

:OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO/shot

Edited July 3, 201213 yr by Shana09

I was surprised I was in there. o_o

I never though of me being in an fanfic.

/FLATTEREDASHELL

 

I can't wait for the next part

 

By the way, HerShe...it reminds me of:

 

Anyways, I found my new favorite song~

 

 

Add more Gennbay, I want to mess with bay in this fanfic //shot

 

Just do whatever you like though~ <3333333333333333333

 

 

EDIT:

 

INTO THE NEW WORLD

CHOCOLATE WORLD

 

:OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO/shot

 

Into the New World is a reference to Girls' Generation. Their debut song was Into the New World.

Into the New World is a reference to Girls' Generation. Their debut song was Into the New World.

 

Off to hear it~ 8D

 

 

 

EDIT:

 

It's a beautiful song~ :'D

Edited July 3, 201213 yr by TheApprenticeofKingMickey

Oh god I'm so sorry! I must be careful next time. Really sorry about that.

 

No problem.

 

And yes. There will be more Gennbay soon. kalnet's mind is full of it.

 

Add more Gennbay, I want to mess with bay in this fanfic //shot

 

This should be good...

Edited July 3, 201213 yr by baylaust

My friend, Gennbay is compromised of sarcasm, sexual innuendo and honesty. Keep that in mind.

 

You might also want to refer to Think Pink as Lexi, because that's what she usually goes by.

 

And don't forget to use gender neutral pronouns for Koko.

 

Ok. Noted. Will change the character names.

 

I was surprised I was in there. o_o

I never though of me being in an fanfic.

/FLATTEREDASHELL

 

I can't wait for the next part

 

By the way, HerShe...it reminds me of:

 

Anyways, I found my new favorite song~

 

 

Add more Gennbay, I want to mess with bay in this fanfic //shot

 

Just do whatever you like though~ <3333333333333333333

 

 

EDIT:

 

INTO THE NEW WORLD

CHOCOLATE WORLD

 

:OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO/shot

 

hmmmm... Hershey~ Yeah. I will. Adding more KH13 members into the story as the chapters go by. =)

Edited July 4, 201213 yr by kalnet

Chapter 1

 

"Uwahhh~ Finally! I'm here! Teihan University!" Screamed Apprentice.

 

"You mean we." muttered Shana.

 

"Yesyesyes. We!" said the excited Apprentice.

 

"I'm really curious how the theatrical department will be.." with a questioned apprentice.

 

"I'm sure it'll be fun." said Koko.

 

As they were talking, Lexi comes over.

 

"Hi guys!"

 

"Hey Lexi~"

 

"Nervous Apprentice?"

 

"Yeah..."

 

"Don't worry, I'm sure things will go well."

 

"Don't forget what I told you last night. Keep a steady head."

 

"Yeah I know. Thanks Lexi.."

 

"Now lets go!"

 

"Don't you have class Lexi? You're majoring in arts right?"

 

"Oh! I have class right after lunch so I'm able to stick around to see you guys with the theatrical auditions."

 

"Alright then. Lets go!"

 

**

 

**

 

As they went into the entrance building,

 

the place was filled with students practising their singing, acting, dancing, and murmuring to themeselves.

 

"The atmosphere sure is heavy here.." said a worried Shana.

 

The entire hallway is filled with tense air and everyone is on their edge.

 

"It must be very hard to get in the theatrical department..." Said the worried Shana.

 

Lexi pats her back.

 

"Don't worry don't worry. You'll do fine! I'm sure of it!"

 

As Lexi is calming Shana down.

 

"With that worry look of hers, I don't think she'll ever make it to the audition round!" Said a mysterious girl.

 

As she walks through the entrance, Girls and Boys alike all gazed their eyes on her and started screaming.

 

"Oh my god! It's her! Flaming Lea!"

 

"Flaming Lea?"

 

"She's that contestant who won third place in that Super star contest last year! To think I'll be in the same university as her..." said a random girl.

 

As Lea walk pass Apprentice, Lexi, Koko, and Shana with her 5-inch high heels, a brand clothing with an expensive looking jacket, and A blue jeans.

 

She is also being escorted with another 2 girls.

 

"Good luck in your auditions, freshmans. Don't come crawling back to this place when you're rejected."

 

"Why you-" As Lexi nearly pushed her, Koko rushes in to stop her.

 

"Stop it Lexi! Let her go."

 

"What are you gonna do? push me onto the ground? I'm your senior. You don't have the courage to push me in front of all these people. hahahaha!"

 

Apprentice walks over and pushes her to the wall.

 

"what- what are you-"

 

"You don't mess with Lexi and my friends!"

 

"How dare you! I can get you expeled here you know! My father's friend owns this place!"

 

Koko drags Apprentice away from Lea.

 

"That's enough Apprentice. No use on using our strength against her."

 

Lea dust off her jacket and looks at Apprentice with a disgusted face.

 

"You may be a push-over, but I'll doubt you pass the auditions with that attitude of yours. Girls lets go!"

 

"Ma'am!"

 

As she and her 'lackeys' walks deeper into the hallway, Apprentice sigh and the rest of the students murmured to their friends and were judging her.

 

"Huh.. She's kinda right. I don't really think I can face the judges like this. I may act powerful in front of you guys, but I'm not sure about facing the judges."

 

"As I said, you'll be fine. Just remember what I've said."

 

"But how? The last time I went for an audition, I left the place crying. I don't want that to happen anymore."

 

"That is why I am here for you."

 

Lexi kissed Apprentice's forehead to calm her down and make her feel secured.

 

"Thank you Lexi. You're always there for me."

 

As the rest of the girls were talking. A woman comes out of the audition room.

 

"Koko! You are next!"

 

To be continued.

 

Edited July 4, 201213 yr by kalnet

Lea, the stereotypical westernized white girl ngl.

That's how I see her in this.

 

 

Sounds good though~ 8D

Also, Lea wearing 5 inch heels.........*EAGER TO TRIP IF INTIMIDATED*

Lea, the stereotypical westernized white girl ngl.

That's how I see her in this.

 

 

Sounds good though~ 8D

Also, Lea wearing 5 inch heels.........*EAGER TO TRIP IF INTIMIDATED*

 

Good thing I put that in. =)

 

I'll try my best to keep the characters interesting throughout the story.

All you have is dialogue. You need to put description. I'd say start the chapter by describing the surroundings and then the situation the girls are in. And then as the girls communicate, describe small aspects of their appearance, such as hair, eyes, faces, height, clothes and even mannerisms. It would also help if you extended the chapter. In the end, you'd give more depth to the characters and story.

My friend, Gennbay is compromised of sarcasm, sexual innuendo and honesty. Keep that in mind.

 

I like how we're giving people tips on how to do Gennbay properly now.

I like how we're giving people tips on how to do Gennbay properly now.

 

nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

All you have is dialogue. You need to put description. I'd say start the chapter by describing the surroundings and then the situation the girls are in. And then as the girls communicate, describe small aspects of their appearance, such as hair, eyes, faces, height, clothes and even mannerisms. It would also help if you extended the chapter. In the end, you'd give more depth to the characters and story.

 

Ok noted. I've been trying to give more character development, but yeah. I will balanced things out and focus on the surrounding. Thanks for the critic. Will try to improve on the next chapter.