Posted April 16, 201015 yr Standing amidst the falling pieces of my life Meant to fall into place but merely falling to the side I look around hoping to find that single ray of light Only I find engulfing darkness The life that I once had is no more than a lingering dream Broken at the seam and falling apart beyond all mend Hope eludes me as it always has Leaving me stranded beside all that I fear Pulling me down farther And as I fall I see my world spirling out of control A black abyss endless in sight It's all but meaningless to fight back Tears break loose as I begin to realize The life that I had The life that I loved Maybe even sometimes took advantage of is gone Fading away before my very eyes So I keep falling When will it end
April 16, 201015 yr You make poetry too? I loved it, you write very well. Almost everyone here knows how to make poetry, but I can't.
April 16, 201015 yr Author Yeah I write poetry, songs (Bad ones) and fanfictions. It's all that I have left for me in the dismal place that I live. It's practically the only thing that keeps me sane.
April 16, 201015 yr I write storys and draw when I'm bored at school.But I don't know why I can't do fanfiction either.
April 16, 201015 yr Author Oh yeah, I draw as well. Sometimes I'm good at it, sometimes I'm not. Once I drew an awesome looking Marluxia!
April 16, 201015 yr I'm not very good, I've been trying to draw Anime, but I don't know how to draw hands and feet.
April 16, 201015 yr Author I draw anime/manga style. I suck when it come to drawing real life. But Repliku can draw REALLY well!
Standing amidst the falling pieces of my life
Meant to fall into place but merely falling to the side
I look around hoping to find that single ray of light
Only I find engulfing darkness
The life that I once had is no more than a lingering dream
Broken at the seam and falling apart beyond all mend
Hope eludes me as it always has
Leaving me stranded beside all that I fear
Pulling me down farther
And as I fall I see my world spirling out of control
A black abyss endless in sight
It's all but meaningless to fight back
Tears break loose as I begin to realize
The life that I had
The life that I loved
Maybe even sometimes took advantage of is gone
Fading away before my very eyes
So I keep falling
When will it end