WARNING: This fanfic will contain sexualmaterial which is not safe for young people, reader discretion advised

 

Plot synopsis: Aqua is reviewing test results, and Xion, one ofher best students is going to have some interesting ways of bribing her to geta good grade…

Edited June 10, 201312 yr by Villi1997

Cancelled? Was looking forward to this

Here I was all ready for Xion cuteness and you cancel it.

 

Such a troll.

Cancelled? Was looking forward to this

 

 

 

Here I was all ready for Xion cuteness and you cancel it.Such a troll.

i didnt mean i was gonna cancel it

i didnt mean i was gonna cancel it

My hopes are restored.

My hopes are restored.

i just dont know what to write

i just dont know what to write

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*Sigh*

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*Sigh*

And I was preparing myself for Xion cuteness as well. Dammit Villi

Chapter 1.... 

Aqua was reviewing math tests at her home, as shewas going to finish reviewing the tests, she was shocked to see that Xion, oneof her best students did poorly… ‘’Its not possible, she is one of my beststudents…’’ she gave the test an D, as soon as she did that, Xion walked in,she was in a black shirt, and jeans she usually wore at the school. ‘’Hey,about that tutoring you talked about’’ Xion said, ‘’Yes, come in’’ Aqua said ina cheery tone, and asked her for a seat next to her. They studied a bit of mathfor an hour, and then Aqua said ‘’I know it's a bit early but here is yourgrade for the math test you took last week’’ she handed Xion the test and sawthat Xion had a worried look on her ‘’Is this true… A D???’’ ‘’Yes’’ Aqua said.Xion said ‘’This cant be real, I’m very good at math and I’ve studied real hardfor the test’’ then Aqua said ‘’that's probably the reason you get poor grades,a study says too much studying can cause stress and it could cause a bad grade’’Then Xion said ‘’Well… I think we can some sort of agreement to this matter’’as she put her left hand on her shoulder and right hand on her lap ‘’Ummm…Xion, what are you doing’’ she said awkwardly ‘’Come to your room and you’llfind out’’ xion said in a lovey-dovey tone. Aqua was a bit suspicious abou Xion’sbehavior, but she decided to go to her room as xion did assuming this wasnothing suspicious… She would be very wrong about that… cause she would havethe time of her life when she would step in the room

Edited June 10, 201312 yr by Villi1997

You get full support from me.

If you want, I could improve the spelling and grammar, PM it to you and you can edit your posts? Want me to do that? I really want to do that for you

It a little poorly written, but it's good.

This is so going to be a lemon...

 

Not that that's necessarily bad, just don't be surprised if it gets taken down.

This is so going to be a lemon...

 

Not that that's necessarily bad, just don't be surprised if it gets taken down.

It has a warning, though. If kids complain about it to their mothers, it's their fault for ignoring the warning.

I find it pretty stupid that a lot of sites get all worked up on mature things because of kids seeing these things..

Not all kids are immature, there are ones that can deal with it just fine. If there are ignorant kids that don't care about any warnings,

that's their fault. One of my favorite RP games has this dumb rule. RPs or fanfics should not have such rules, imho.

There are ways to censor it actually, but if it gets taken down, it's best to write it completely and pass it out to those who want to read it.

 

And as Toby said, I'll look at it and help you with grammar and stuff as well

 

Also, good so far. But the flow is a bit choppy. Try spacing it a bit. Make more paragraphs and try to avoid run-on sentences.

There are ways to censor it actually, but if it gets taken down, it's best to write it completely and pass it out to those who want to read it.

 

And as Toby said, I'll look at it and help you with grammar and stuff as well

 

Also, good so far. But the flow is a bit choppy. Try spacing it a bit. Make more paragraphs and try to avoid run-on sentences.

It's nice to see others want to help out, too

There are ways to censor it actually, but if it gets taken down, it's best to write it completely and pass it out to those who want to read it.

 

And as Toby said, I'll look at it and help you with grammar and stuff as well

 

Also, good so far. But the flow is a bit choppy. Try spacing it a bit. Make more paragraphs and try to avoid run-on sentences.

This. Also, for fics such as this, details are REALLY important here. Describe as much as you can that's relevant to the story without overdoing it.

Seduction:

 

 

Aqua followed Xion to her bedroom, she thought toherself ‘’What’s gotten into Xion, this isn’t like her. I might find out why ifI play along,’’ when they got near the door, Xion opened it slowly and said‘’Please, sit on your bed.’’ Aqua did as she asked her to do, she felt verynervous. As soon as she sat down, Xion told to Aqua ‘’I know this may soundweird but… I like you Aqua… I like you a lot…’’ Aqua blushed ‘’What are youtalking about Xion.’’ Xion sat next to her ‘’I mean it. I liked you ever sincethe first day I saw you teaching me, now please. Let me show you something’’Aqua tried to resist as Xion, shockingly, started to take off her clothes. Soonshe did the same for Aqua. As soon as she was undressed by one of her beststudents, she started to make out with her. Passionately, when she was done shelicked her all the way from her neck to her navel and started licking it,slowly. Aqua tried to resist, but she started to like it. ‘’Yes, so good!’’Aqua let out. ‘’I knew you would like it’’ Said Xion, she then lowered hertongue from the navel to her feet. She licked every part of her feet like itwas sea salt ice cream. ‘’Now your turn’’ Xion said. Aqua started licking Xion’sfeet. When they were done, they realized it was almost midnight. ‘’Uhm, I waswondering’’ Aqua let out ‘’Maybe we could sleep together tonight, its gettingkinda late.’’ Xion then answered without hesitation ‘’I would like that verymuch’’ As they got under the blankets, they started cuddling before gettingtired and soon…. They fell asleep