Posted May 7, 201015 yr I see the moonlight touch your pale skin, I wonder how something so subtle can make even horrid things seem more beautiful
May 7, 201015 yr This seems like an interesting poem. It's good but it's just strange. Some parts don't mesh.
May 7, 201015 yr Yeah I know it doesn't mesh at all o3o Meh, oh well, thanks you two!! :] I find that the best writing that people do is when they just sit down and write....write and not think about what it is that's going onto that paper. But that aside: Kudos for the poem.
May 7, 201015 yr I agree with Brixta, true poetry is not about rhymes or versus. NO! True poetry comes from the heart, that is all that matters.
I see the moonlight touch your pale skin,
I wonder how something so subtle can make even horrid things seem more beautiful