Summary of Chapter 1

 

There was a boy named Nitsua.He had pearly blue eyes and green hair.The full moon was out.He was in his cabin,washing his hands.He looks at the full moon.The next thing he knows,he is knocked out and wakes up the next morning.His camp was destroyed!

"I'm going to kill whoever did this!"he yells.

He itches his head.Weird...he thought.He scrambles up the broken stair way.He couldn't find anyone.He rubbed his eyes.The world was topsy turvy to Nitsua.He grabs his stomach.

"I need something to eat and fast!"he yells.He walked to a bathroom.

"What is happening."he yells.

He clutches his head.

"AHHHHHHHHHHHHHRAHHGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!"he yells into tears.Punches the wall and it crumbles.

"WHAT IS WRONG WITH ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"He yells.He Jumps in the air and kicks the sink.The pipes burst into flames.

"Yessss...."says a raspy lady voice.

"Let your heart....fall.....into the clan....."she says.

He yells and yells.Once he calmed down,he sought out for the nearby city ,West City Lake while the flames were still on his camp.

good start. poor Nitsua though.

thanks!

when will u write more?

ill write real story tomorow.

Meet Our Friend,Nitsua

 

April 17,2010

It's been cold...My brother Nitsua is very sick right now.But his blue eyes shine light to his pale white skin.His brushy,green hair hid in the leaves tangled in his hair.It's been a week since his camp blew into flames,or as the rumors say.Nitsua said that he was out cold during the fire.No one else survived,and we are driving home then to the funeral.My brother's been sick,so he was going to stay home.Our cousin will take care of him.Well actually,she isn't our cousin but a very close friend to us.She lives all the way in America and we live in the Philippines.While we dropped him off,we got to the funeral.It was about 2 hours,and I didn't know half of them,so I was mostly sleeping the whole time.If they want me to say something,I'd say,"Oh yeah.Those people were great and I didn't know half of them even though I miss them".Once I got home,Nitsua was watching through the window,not even moving.

wow he sounds really sick

Chapter 2:Camp?

 

April 16,2010

Nitsua is a little better today.He's talking now.

But one thing that got my mind.It's buzzing inside my

head over and over again!It's making me crazy!I heard my brother saying,"Timmothy...come in here...I need to tell you something"he said.

As i walked in i said,"What'd ya need bro?"

"I need to tell you...something...."he said.

"What is it?"i asked.

"At camp...I was knocked out..."he said.

"Umm you told us.."

"I'm so mad at her...."he said.

"WHO?"i asked.

"The woman."he said.

"A woman?What did she do to you?"I asked.

"She-she messed up my mind..."he said.

He was about to roll over but he stopped.

"What's wrong?"I asked.

"Nothing"

"Show me please!"i said.

"Fine."he replied.As he rolled I noticed something green.A tail?Naw...I lifted off the covers.Oh...It was a tail.I mean IT WAS WHAT!?

"Nitsua!How did this happen!?"i yelled.

"Her....."he said."and her follower...Terra........"he said.

 

Give me the mic,Tim!

April 17,2010

Ok yeah.So my brother Tim told you what I said,"The follower Terra"is the guy who gave me my tail!I mean,how will i go to school now!?What's next,my hatred for bananas will go to loving bananas?Well,right now,the funeral for all my dear friends was over.Stupid Terra started all of this and also the lady.Yeah,i know,i first was sick but now I'm doing great.But now,I have something to do.My brother fell asleep.I'm going to go to a wishing well,where all my friends hang out.So now I'm walking.I see my friends who didn't die at camp.Actually who didn't go to camp.

"Hey guys!"i yell.

"Nitsua!Something is down there!?Can you get it?"one of my friends asked.

"Sure?Why not?"i asked.I look down the well.Nothing.All of a sudden my friends scare me!They pull my tail.

"what's this?"they asked.

"OUUUUCHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!"i yell.

I fall into the well.

It sound really interesting and is keeping me close to the screen.

Poor Nitsua

...Not Knowing the Time

A note was falling down the well.I snatched it.It read,I want your heart.

"M-my heat?"I asked.Another note.This time it appeared in my other hand.

Seduce Justice and Peace

"WHAT DO YOU MEAN!?"I yelled.

You do not know anything but yourself...said a voice.

I didn't know what he meant.

"What are you saying!?"I yelled.

"Climb up the well....let the Days of sleep come upon you"the voice replied.

"The days of sleep?What's that!?"I asked.

"Nothing you'll ever know"said a man looking into the well.He dropped a body into the well.It was dead

"WHAT!!!???????????????????"I yell.I jump up.My focus is only on him.I hate him!!!He doesn't just mess with my friends!Why did he do that!?A discovered I was covered in an Aura.I'm so mad right now!!!!!!

"STOP IT!!"I yell.I feel something in my hand.A blade. Designed like a key.

This was colored black.Another one in my hand.It was colored..white....

"Light and darkness intertwine!!!!!!!"i yell.They create ball of light and darkness.The inside was light and the outlines were black.

"GET OUT OF MY FACE!!!!"i yell.The ball hits the man and explodes.I get knocked out.

this is getting more interesting

April 18,2010

 

I just woke up.The whole town was destroyed!I walked around and i saw a man just sitting on a bench.

"What happened?"i asked.

"A terrible beast came...."he said.

"What is your name?"i asked.

"Bart...."he replied.

I looked around and saw a blade that looked like a key.Bart saw what i was looking at.

"Ohhh...the keyblade.It's free just for you."he said.

"why me?"i asked.

"You seem to have light in your heart.And darkness..."he replied.

"Darkness?"i asked.

He handed me the keyblade.

"Now the keyblade has a great responsibility to be wielded.

"The Keyblade?"i asked.

"It can open any lock...It also is used to destroy the heartless,nobodies and unversed."he whispered.

"Unversed?Is this a dream or something?"I asked.

"Maybe it is...maybe it isn't..."he replied.I held my keyblade up.A light shone from it and hit the sky.Light came.It carried me up.

"WAIT!!!!!HELP!"i yelled.

"Don't worry...Nitsua...."he replied.