Soul_Seeker 753 Posted December 6, 2015 (edited) Removed Edited May 3, 2020 by Soul_Seeker I don't want the original content to exist anymore 3 The Transcendent Key, Felixx and Spades Lunn reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Felixx 6,646 Posted December 6, 2015 Very cool man I really enjoyed reading this. Keep it up 1 Soul_Seeker reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
KingdomHearts3 2,591 Posted December 6, 2015 Interesting. I assume this takes place before Ventus had his darkness taken from him when he was Master Xehanort's apprentice. 1 Soul_Seeker reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Soul_Seeker 753 Posted December 6, 2015 (edited) Removed Edited May 3, 2020 by Soul_Seeker I don't want the original content to exist anymore 3 Felixx, SnowPint7Fourths and The Transcendent Key reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
KingdomHearts3 2,591 Posted December 9, 2015 (edited) Hmmm... interesting. Not bad. And this comes from someone who has been writing his own story for almost a year come January and has been successful thanks to the fans. Edited December 11, 2015 by KingdomHearts3 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Soul_Seeker 753 Posted December 12, 2015 (edited) Removed Edited May 3, 2020 by Soul_Seeker I don't want the original content to exist anymore 2 Felixx and The Transcendent Key reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
KingdomHearts3 2,591 Posted December 12, 2015 Uh huh, I see what this is. This is all supposedly an untold story when Ventus was Master Xehanort's pupil. This is something Nomura has not told us about Ventus's time as the bearer of pure light and darkness. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Felixx 6,646 Posted December 12, 2015 I really like this story so far And your writing style is very good. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Soul_Seeker 753 Posted January 9, 2016 (edited) Removed Edited May 3, 2020 by Soul_Seeker I don't want the original content to exist anymore 2 Felixx and The Transcendent Key reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
The Transcendent Key 12,109 Posted January 9, 2016 I just read all the chapters you've posted so far, and I've got to say, this is quite the interesting story! You've managed to put Kako into the timeline before Birth By Sleep's events, and it all fits in perfectly! I could definitely imagine Ventus having gotten along with Kako, and I like the idea of Xehanort wanting to make Kako into a pure darkness to clash with Ventus's pure light. Hmm, I wonder what happens next!? Also, I feel flattered and honored that you took a page from me in terms of the music! It makes me happy that you're reading my story as well! Funny enough though, including music in my chapters was something I began doing after reading Lu-Xun's stories. After seeing how awesome it was to read a story with music accompanying it, I thought I'd do so as well, and it seems that now I've passed on the torch to you, kind of like the Keyblade Inheritance Ceremony! I feel old! Haha, but yeah, this story is great! I can't wait to read more! 1 Soul_Seeker reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Felixx 6,646 Posted January 9, 2016 Awesome chapter man! And the music fits very well, I like it. Can't wait for the next part 1 The Transcendent Key reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
KingdomHearts3 2,591 Posted January 9, 2016 I got to say, like The Transcendent Key here, I too am getting intrigued. You're doing a not bad job. Keep it up and don't stop because of no motivation. Seeing as how both him and I are liking your story, that's a huge compliment. 1 The Transcendent Key reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Soul_Seeker 753 Posted January 17, 2016 (edited) Removed Edited May 3, 2020 by Soul_Seeker I don't want the original content to exist anymore 1 The Transcendent Key reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
KingdomHearts3 2,591 Posted January 17, 2016 Nice. I wonder if this is the story of how Ventus obtained pure darkness in his heart. 3 The Transcendent Key, Emrys and Mirajane reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
The Transcendent Key 12,109 Posted January 21, 2016 Oh wow, this was a great chapter! I think that my most favorite aspect of it was when Kako heard the voices of the tormented souls of the past Keyblade Wielders that died in the Keyblade War! That was definitely eerie and somber! I really loved the battle against the Darkside, it was badass, and having the song playing in the background made the battle even more exciting! I also loved that small nod you made to Birth By Sleep when Ventus and Kako performed the X attack, kind of like how Terra and Ventus did to the Trinity Armor Unversed in Radiant Garden! Great chapter! I'm looking forward to more! 1 Soul_Seeker reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Soul_Seeker 753 Posted January 30, 2016 (edited) Removed Edited May 3, 2020 by Soul_Seeker I don't want the original content to exist anymore 1 The Transcendent Key reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
KingdomHearts3 2,591 Posted January 30, 2016 Huh... interesting. Now I am not sure where this is going. Interesting. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Soul_Seeker 753 Posted January 30, 2016 Huh... interesting. Now I am not sure where this is going. Interesting. Don't worry, I plan to have this make as much sense as possible. I won't pull a Nomura on you. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
KingdomHearts3 2,591 Posted January 30, 2016 Don't worry, I plan to have this make as much sense as possible. I won't pull a Nomura on you. I look forward to it. Just like I hope you look forward to more content of my story I am writing. 1 Soul_Seeker reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Soul_Seeker 753 Posted January 31, 2016 (edited) Removed Edited May 3, 2020 by Soul_Seeker I don't want the original content to exist anymore 1 The Transcendent Key reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
KingdomHearts3 2,591 Posted January 31, 2016 Huh. Nice. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Soul_Seeker 753 Posted February 24, 2016 (edited) Removed Edited May 3, 2020 by Soul_Seeker I don't want the original content to exist anymore 1 The Transcendent Key reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Soul_Seeker 753 Posted February 24, 2016 (edited) Removed Edited May 3, 2020 by Soul_Seeker I don't want the original content to exist anymore Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
KingdomHearts3 2,591 Posted February 28, 2016 (edited) Interesting. Who is this Twilight Knight and what secret does he hold? I must say, you in your writing are reminding me of when I first started the My Kingdom Hearts Story series. I sense you will develop more over time. Mind you that this comes from someone who is writing a (in my opinion) surprisingly successful series. Keep up the good work. Edited February 28, 2016 by KingdomHearts3 1 Soul_Seeker reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Soul_Seeker 753 Posted March 7, 2016 (edited) Removed Edited May 3, 2020 by Soul_Seeker I don't want the original content to exist anymore Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites