Jid123 2 Posted July 13, 2016 Hello everyone. I as a big fan of Kingdom Hearts, have always asked, what would have happened if Kingdom Hearts ever became a TV series. Well sadly we would have that answered back in the day. But the past is the past but i have decided to try and answer that question myself by making my own Kingdom Hearts Series and posting the screenplays on Deviant Art. So i am here to show you guys, and hopefully get some comments, constructive criticism and lots of input. Hope you enjoy LINK http://jid1234.deviantart.com/gallery/?catpath=/ 2 Awesome Sauce and Songbird Rebel reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Awesome Sauce 634 Posted July 13, 2016 Welcome to the site! I've only read chapter 1, but I thought it was good. Props for not directly lifting the script from the game and coming up with original dialogue. Your descriptions are decent enough to get a general sense of the character's actions and the environments but not overly detailed. There are some punctuation errors here and there, but overall I thought it was pretty good. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Songbird Rebel 151 Posted July 14, 2016 (edited) Sweet, I have an account on Deviantart (So I'll go check it out) and count me in please (if you'd like, of course ) And Welcome to KH13, BTW!!! Edited July 14, 2016 by Songbird Rebel Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
