Posted September 10, 201015 yr Can someone help me with this? Something about it is wrong and I cant put my finger on it...
September 11, 201015 yr :'o i'm thinking it's the scribbles in the middle. something about it throws off the picture even though it looks awesome. remove the scribbles and maybe make the white line separating him a bit thinner. other than that, love the effects you added. you have amazing talent. ?
September 11, 201015 yr Ventus' face looks stretched on one side, not sure if the dividing of the image was supposed to be uneven or not, but the scribbles are a bit distracting and I think if it were a name inbetween them or something less sharp in the middle then it would not cause the rest of the project to lose it's focus, but my eyes directly go to the scribble. I really love the other parts though and the pixel effect. 8D
September 11, 201015 yr The scribbles and the white line are the problem I think... Try making the line thinner. I also agree with Cricket about the stretchy side. Or maybe that's just me. =P
September 11, 201015 yr Yeah, Probably the scribbles. And it does in a way look stretched a tad on one side. But that is a cool image.
September 11, 201015 yr I think it'd be pretty cool without the scribbles ^^ Just make the line a little bit skinnier, too. I love how you flipped the eye color.
September 13, 201015 yr Can someone help me with this? Something about it is wrong and I cant put my finger on it... It's definitley the grey eye on the side thats suppose to be colored, right?
September 15, 201015 yr ^ I don't think that's messing it up. It gives it a really cool effect. Plus, the grey side would be kinda bland and boring. It looks more, I dunno, balanced with the color switched. I like how it was done. But the scribbles are the problem
September 15, 201015 yr If it's gonna go without the scribbles, why not remove the line all together? ._.'
September 15, 201015 yr If it's gonna go without the scribbles, why not remove the line all together? ._.' Because then it'd be just a random change in color. The scribbles are distracting. Make the line thinner. I think that should do the trick. Can someone help me with this? Something about it is wrong and I cant put my finger on it... It's definitley the grey eye on the side thats suppose to be colored, right? It's suppose to be that way :B
September 25, 201015 yr Author REDEMPTION Ill fix the other one later, now, imma showcase my newest one. Crit?
September 25, 201015 yr I don't wanna say the yellow bugs me, but it does. [/shot] Uhm...a little too much glow. Other than that, it's cool. d(^-^)b
September 25, 201015 yr REDEMPTION Ill fix the other one later, now, imma showcase my newest one. Crit? i think thats freakin amazing.
September 26, 201015 yr Author I don't wanna say the yellow bugs me, but it does. [/shot] Uhm...a little too much glow. Other than that, it's cool. d(^-^)b I made it yellow because its Sora in master forum. Blue wouldn't work for me. As for the glow, its to catch others eyes so they actually pay attention to the signature. Yellow also catches they eyes. Its quite popular in signatures actually. Thanks for the crit. @Jenaynay Thank you. I was just testing with these brushes I found. If you want, I can give you the links. They come in photoshop brush format. I just have a script that reads them as regular brushes in gimp.
September 26, 201015 yr @Jenaynay Thank you. I was just testing with these brushes I found. If you want, I can give you the links. They come in photoshop brush format. I just have a script that reads them as regular brushes in gimp. : DD omg please <3 i will love you forever if you do so ?
September 27, 201015 yr Author http://artatm.com/2010/05/44-sets-of-photoshop-lines-and-vector-brushes/ I found alot of good ones here. You might need to make sure you read the terms on each of the brushes though.
September 27, 201015 yr http://artatm.com/2010/05/44-sets-of-photoshop-lines-and-vector-brushes/ I found alot of good ones here. You might need to make sure you read the terms on each of the brushes though. thank you <3333333 i can assure you i'll do so, finding this crap is hard enough lol. ?
October 11, 201015 yr How so? I mean, which parts do you like the most? /Wantingcrit C: well, i just really love the image in general. you seem to really understand the object of blending, using colors wisely, and good creativity. the blue-ish effect looks amazing, the glowy effect giving off a sort of dreamy haze. i like the text you used and the sort of grain-looking effect on the right. the arrow looks awesome there for some reason. i wish i could edit like you.
October 12, 201015 yr I just don't get that blotch right on top of the arrow. Other than that, it's amazing
October 18, 201015 yr OH GAWD. <3 It looks like you missed a little spot while cutting out Sora's head, but that's about all the crit I can give. :'D
Can someone help me with this? Something about it is wrong and I cant put my finger on it...