Web
Analytics Made Easy - StatCounter
Jump to content
  • Sign Up

The Transcendent Key

Member
  • Content Count

    16,740
  • Avg. Content Per Day

    4
  • Joined

  • Last visited

  • Days Won

    236

Posts posted by The Transcendent Key


  1. Hey guys, sorry for taking so long, my wifi has been slow these days and school is just so hard! But here is chapter fourteen, enjoy! http://kh13.com/forum/public/style_emoticons/default/happy.png

     

    Chapter Fourteen: Encounter with the Deadman, Davy Jones

     

    Ventus, Ethan, Trish and the gang are on the Black Pearl, sailing over calm seas. As they plan their next move, Jack Sparrow and Will Turner speak alone in private.

    Jack Sparrow: Now then, Will, this key has the power to save your damsel in distress. I require of your help to obtain it.

    Will Turner: What do I have to do? Where do I search for it?

    Jack Sparrow: You will find out soon enough.

    Will Turner: Stop talking in riddles! Just tell me where I need to go.

    Jack Sparrow: Patience, William, patience...

    Meanwhile, above deck, Ventus looks towards the horizon, deep in thought.

    Ethan: Hey, are you allright?

    Ventus: Oh... yeah. I'm just a little tired, that's all.

    Ethan: Look, I can tell something is wrong with you. I can see it in your face.

    Ventus: It's nothing. I just want to be alone for a while.

    Ethan: Look, if this is about the whole Vanitas coming back thing... I'll help you through this.

    Ventus: You-- you will?

    Ethan: I may not like you that much, and we may have our differences, but you're one of us. We have to look out for each other.

    Ventus: Right...

    Ventus just stays silent, thinking about what would happen once Vanitas comes back. As Ventus stares to the horizon in silence, Trish tries comforting him.

    Trish: Hey, Ven, please, can you tell me what's wrong?

    Ventus: What if, I can't stop him....once he comes back? What if he takes over me... and everyone I care about dies?

    Trish: Please don't despair, you must have hope.

    Jack Sparrow: What your little lass says there is true mate. When the odds are striking against you, take charge and keep that little flame of hope alive. Savvy? Sometimes the real fight is inside of you.

    Ventus: Thanks, Jack.

    Jack Sparrow: It's captain Jack, to you!

    Dexeres: Quite everyone, I hear something!

    And in the blink of an eye, Unborn appear in front of the ship's deck.

    Dexeres: Guys, go, I'll take care of these, go to the cargo hold.

    Ventus and the others heed Dexeres's advice and go to the cargo hold.

    Jack Sparrow: This is my ship, and I'm the captain, I'm not gonna cower away from these demonspawns.

    Dexeres: All right then, let's do this.

    They fight the Unborn with great might, and swiftly defeat the more weaker ones. Dexeres uses the power of darkness to make duplicates of himself and strike at every turn.

    Jack Sparrow: Interesting, a power like that is a good one indeed.

    Dexeres: Behind you!

    Before Jack turns around, Dexeres slays the Unborn that was behind him.

    Jack Sparrow: Thanks for that, mate, but I could have handled that slimy thing.

    Dexeres: Yeah, right. All right guys, you can all come out now.

    Shortly after the battle, the rest of the gang come up on deck and they decide to be high on watch for more Unborn obstructing their path. But just as everything seems to be calm, a familiar voice can be heard.

    Mysterious Figure: Ha ha ha, Dexeres, we meet again. It has been a while.

    Dexeres: You again!!! Everybody stand back! I'll take care of him!

    Mysterious Figure: Be at ease, you fool. I have not come to fight you, on the contrary, I am here to help you ease your burden.

    Dexeres: Burden? What are you talking about?

    Mysterious Figure: Can you not see? Your dear friend Ventus, I could smell his darkness from miles away. His true power is about to be unleashed soon. Hand him over to me, and I will spare your lives when I take over Kingdom Hearts.

    Dexeres: Never!

    Mysterious Figure: Ah, well, I tried to reason with you, but it looks like I will have to take drastic measures.

    The Mysterious Figure slowly raises his hand, and in the blink of an eye, a giant Unborn Behemoth rises from the sea, and looms over the Black Pearl. He dissapears, and just when the Unborn is about to destroy the ship, it goes back into the sea.

    Will Turner: What just happened?

    Ethan: It must have heard something.

    Jack Sparrow: Aye, it did. Even the mightiest of sea creatures cower away when Davy Jones is near.

    Ethan: Davy Jones?

    Will Turner: Yes, one of the most feared pirates over the seven seas.

    Just then, ominous winds blow over the sails of the Pearl, and from a distance, Davy Jones's ship rises from the water.

    Ventus: Whoah, it came from under the sea!

    Ethan: This can't be good.

    Jack Sparrow: Will, go over to Davy Jones, he has the key we are looking for. Tell him that I sent you to settle my debt. That'll surely save your skin, and you can focus on finding said key and saving your dearly beloved strumpet.

    Will Turner: All right, I shall.

     

    Trish: Good luck!

    And so, Will goes over to Davy Jones ship, only to see ruins.

    Will Turner: What? I could have sworn that i saw a ship in when I was in the Pearl.

    Sailor: We must keep the ship afloat, we must keep the ship afloat!

    Will Turner: Sailor, there is nowhere to sail to, your ship has crashed.

    Sailor: No! We must keep sailing!

    Suddenly, creatures come up the ruins of the ship and surround Will and the other unfortunate sailors. And up after a few seconds, the fearsome Davy Jones himself appears in front of them. Slowly he approaches one of the sailors and looks at him dead in the eye.

    Davy Jones: Do you fear death?

    Sailor: I do...

    Davy Jones: I can give you an escape from death, if you serve by me for 100 years.

    Sailor #2: Don't listen to him!

    Davy Jones: And you, do you not fear death?

    Sailor #2: I'll take my chances.

    Davy Jones: Off to the depths with you!

    And in the blink of an eye, the servants of Davy Jones kill the man and send him to the depths.

    Davy Jones: Now then, will ye serve.

    Sailor: I will serve.

    Davy Jones: Good.

    As the fearsome captain walks to return to his ship, he glances upon Will Turner, and stays looking at him for a while.

    Davy Jones: You are neither dead nor dying, what is your purpose here?

    Will Turner: Jack Sparrow sent me to settle his debt.

    Davy Jones: What is your purpose here?

    Will Turner: Jack Sparrow... sent me to settle his debt.

    What will happen now? Will Davy Jones spare Will's life? What is Jack's intentions for sending Will to the deadman? Find out in chapter fifteen: The Truth Behind the curse...


  2. Ok, I have mixed feelings for this. I won't say yes and I won't say no. Don't get me wrong, I would love a Kingdom Hearts movie, but the thing is they have to do it right, because most movies based on games are crap. I get scared at the thought that they would do the same with Kingdom Hearts, which is a game series I hold closely to me. If they made the movie in CG graphics, like Final Fantasy VII Advent Children, then I would watch it. But for now I remain skeptical about that.


  3. Lu-Xun, once again, your talents as a storyteller have boggled my mind. Brother, you truly have an amazing gift. You have the potential of being a best-selling author. Wow, man, just wow! I can't wait for the next chapter, the story has me on the edge of my seat!!!! Anyways, that was my logical side thinking, my crazy side says: " Oh snap, holy mother of f'ing awesomeness, make more!!! More!!!!".


  4. Okay, as all of us know, next year marks the 10th anniversary of the Kingdom Hearts series. That's been putting me to think, since next year Kingdom Hearts 3D is slated to come out on spring, Square Enix should also do a conmemoration of the series by putting the Final Mix games in one package, and should be called Kingdom Hearts Final Mix collection. And they could make it for PS3. I think it's a good idea, plus, it would rake in lots of cash for Square Enix. Who here agrees with me?


  5. Ok, let me shed some light on this subject. Firstly, I saw the trailer and it's epic!!! Secondly, Xehanort is a badass bastard who must die!!! And thirdly, he will rot in a sad nasty place! Poor Braig, he got stabbed lol. Braig got toast! Crazy side of me aside, anyways, my logical side agrees with what everyone here says about the organization theory.


  6. OH snap! Dude, you got serious potential. This story is so epic! It makes my jaw drop! You really know how to craft a unique story with intriguing characters, and you seamlessly string the events together. This story makes me stop and think what would happen to the world if we, mankind keep damaging it. Well done dude, you got a follower in me! I'm gonna keep this story close on my watch. You were the one who inspired me to write the Keyblade War! Man, I salute you, your talents are nothing less than incredible!


  7. Aaron wakes up a little dazed, and puzzled. He looks around him only to find that he is alone. -Huh? Where am I? Who am I?- he thinks to himself. He walks around for endless hours, trying to solve the mystery of his own self. What he doesn't realize is, that, during the great struggle against Xehanort, he was swept away by an inmense, ominous darkness, and so it caused him to lose his memory. Now, he does not recall who he is, or even why he exists. "What happened to me? Where did I come from?", he asks himself, when suddenly, he feels a great pain in his heart, and he starts to see daunting flashbacks of horrible events. "Ah, what's, happening to me!? Why am I seeing these things? Damn it! Argh!!!", he says as he struggles to walk. Suddenly, strange new enemies appear before him, and suddenly, he summons his keyblade. " Huh, what is this? It feels familiar", he wonders, for he doesn't even remember that he is a keyblade master. He then fights off the strange enemies and comes out victorious from the fight. " This strange feeling, it's like, there is something that I must do. I must keep moving forward, and fight to keep the light safe", he says as he continues on his long and lonely journey into the unknown.


  8. Honestly I gotta tell you, when they do make KH3, they had better make it a PS3 exclusive. KH1 and 2 were on PS2, so KH3 should be on PS3. With a game of this high caliber, they should focus it on one platform. Anyway, that's just my logical side thinking. Crazy me says" Nomura, get on with KH3 already!!!!! I can't take it anymore!!!!! The wait is too long!!!! Ahhhh!!!!!". Anyways, back to my logical side, um, uh, yeah i got nothing. Crazy me has won this round.

×
×
  • Create New...