Well this was a long and enduring...

[Antrium 10]

I have nothing against this girl but she seems to be trying to cut me down about my writing style. I try to be nice but we just kept on having opposite opinions on every aspect. This will really intrigue fellow writer's btw

 

Here is one of our convo's...

 

The following goes me then her unless specified differently.

 

 

Abby, Abby, this is not a competition but a symbolic act of the bond between fellow authors. Me and Kevin are known for our works of poetry and literature not only here but around the world. We never try to outshow eachother, we just mingle words with our passion and create worlds with our past, bending reality itself with nohting but the simple and innocence of the written word.

56 minutes ago

[Protoman 1,974]

Hey, at least shes looking like shes being NICE to you about it. A little critisim goes a long way, but at least she isn't putting you completely down in every way possible. Your Mileage May Very, as it is said by TVtropes.

 

Maybe you're being a little soft an unexceptive to the critisim shes giving you? Just because shes trying to help you dosen't mean you have to change your style in every way, shape, or form. You can still use simple aspects in your poetry or mix it up from time to time. Of course there is many things I agree with the female about, every single stroke comming together like a painting of sorts, huzzah to different styles, most writers loving constructive critisim, etc.

 

At least shes saying you have potential and not ripping you apart, lol.

[Antrium 10]

Hey, at least shes looking like shes being NICE to you about it. A little critisim goes a long way, but at least she isn't putting you completely down in every way possible. Your Mileage May Very, as it is said by TVtropes.

 

Maybe you're being a little soft an unexceptive to the critisim shes giving you? Just because shes trying to help you dosen't mean you have to change your style in every way, shape, or form. You can still use simple aspects in your poetry or mix it up from time to time. Of course there is many things I agree with the female about, every single stroke comming together like a painting of sorts, huzzah to different styles, most writers loving constructive critisim, etc.

 

At least shes saying you have potential and not ripping you apart, lol.

 

I know she was really nice about it and I loved the crit she gave me. I just kinda thought that she was acting high and mighty but these messages were at midnight so I may have been a little out of it. I know I loved her style.