Sorry! If it sucks I'm not much of a writer but if you can tell me if the story is good that would be great! Thx! Ty sat on a bench in the middle of an overly crowed train station reading a news paper, the head line almost made Ty cry has his eye saw the black latter TWO DEATH AND ONE SURVIVOR IN A DEADLY CAR CRASH read the head line He placed the paper next to him and stared at a big clock hanging on the station wall. "Where is my train" thought Ty. For about two hours Ty been sitting waiting for a train to take him some place he never heard of or can even pronounce, to stay with an uncle he never know or heard of! Has these thought ran around in his head, a cold chili ran do his spine. Even the station became ice cold. Ty put his hands into his jacket and looked around. The feel faded away and a new one awoke, it was like summer sun warm fully hope, It walked right behind him. He turned around to see a tell young woman wearing a black coat. Ty tried to see her face but, her coat's hood was up with a purple scarf wrapped around her collar. "Did that feeling.. come from her..." thought Ty. His thought were interrupted when a boy a bit older then him with blond hair that covered his left eye sat next to him on the bench. " Don't worry your safe" he said in a whisper. " what!?" asked Ty " It's OK train aren't that dangerous" he said looking at a train that just pulled in. " What's your name?" asked the boy. "Ty" he replied. " Not to be rude but usually when people ask for your name you give your last" said the boy. Tyler Lionheart replied Ty hoping his train would get here fast. " Let me guess spelled has one word" he said. Ya said Ty looking at him " Ever one spells it as two separate words." thought Ty "well Tyler Lionheart do you know one point five percent of people who board train go to a magical world" He stared at Ty and looked so serious that Ty thought he was crazy! "Train 358 has just arrived all passengers come to deck 2" said the loud voice of the conductor. " Oh that me said Ty getting up and grabbing his bag." sorry I have to..." the boy was gone! This place is filled with creeps thought Ty. He made his way throw the crowds to deck 2. He entered the line of passengers showing there tickets. Ticket demanded the Conductor. Ty reach in to his pocket and gave him the ticket. The Conductor stamped his ticket and handed back to him. Ty reach out to grab it but, has soon has his finger touch it an icy pain filled his hand! Don't worry kid I don't bite said the Conductor, has he spoke the pain stopped. Ty grabbed the ticket from him and board the train. To his surprise the car was empty, He put his bag up on the shelf and sat down by the window. " What is going on!" Ty thought, has the train push off. If only Ty knew what was about to happen!
Sorry! If it sucks I'm not much of a writer but if you can tell me if the story is good that would be great! Thx! Ty sat on a bench in the middle of an overly crowed train station reading a news paper, the head line almost made Ty cry has his eye saw the black latter TWO DEATH AND ONE SURVIVOR IN A DEADLY CAR CRASH read the head line He placed the paper next to him and stared at a big clock hanging on the station wall. "Where is my train" thought Ty. For about two hours Ty been sitting waiting for a train to take him some place he never heard of or can even pronounce, to stay with an uncle he never know or heard of! Has these thought ran around in his head, a cold chili ran do his spine. Even the station became ice cold. Ty put his hands into his jacket and looked around. The feel faded away and a new one awoke, it was like summer sun warm fully hope, It walked right behind him. He turned around to see a tell young woman wearing a black coat. Ty tried to see her face but, her coat's hood was up with a purple scarf wrapped around her collar. "Did that feeling.. come from her..." thought Ty. His thought were interrupted when a boy a bit older then him with blond hair that covered his left eye sat next to him on the bench. " Don't worry your safe" he said in a whisper. " what!?" asked Ty " It's OK train aren't that dangerous" he said looking at a train that just pulled in. " What's your name?" asked the boy. "Ty" he replied. " Not to be rude but usually when people ask for your name you give your last" said the boy. Tyler Lionheart replied Ty hoping his train would get here fast. " Let me guess spelled has one word" he said. Ya said Ty looking at him " Ever one spells it as two separate words." thought Ty "well Tyler Lionheart do you know one point five percent of people who board train go to a magical world" He stared at Ty and looked so serious that Ty thought he was crazy! "Train 358 has just arrived all passengers come to deck 2" said the loud voice of the conductor. " Oh that me said Ty getting up and grabbing his bag." sorry I have to..." the boy was gone! This place is filled with creeps thought Ty. He made his way throw the crowds to deck 2. He entered the line of passengers showing there tickets. Ticket demanded the Conductor. Ty reach in to his pocket and gave him the ticket. The Conductor stamped his ticket and handed back to him. Ty reach out to grab it but, has soon has his finger touch it an icy pain filled his hand! Don't worry kid I don't bite said the Conductor, has he spoke the pain stopped. Ty grabbed the ticket from him and board the train. To his surprise the car was empty, He put his bag up on the shelf and sat down by the window. " What is going on!" Ty thought, has the train push off. If only Ty knew what was about to happen!