i don't really have a tittle for this yet but if u have something plz blog it thankyou!

 

chapter 1 good friends!

dairy entry 1

one day I don't really now what happen but I think I fell off my really tall chair but all I can remember is #14's face. She looked at me and smiled it was a little weird but i liked it, that sounded weird didn't it oh well only i'll see this!

Roxas woke up on his 8th day and he went to the lobby. "hey Roxas doing ok?" It was his best friend Axel. Roxas just looked down, Saix walked over. "Hey Roxas you mission will be with Axel today" WHAT!!! Saix you can't do that he might get hurt again" saix looked down "oh Axel Axel Axel that's why your going with him I'm not a foll, Roxas when your ready come see me".Roxas nodded. He went to go talk to Larxene.(he didn't know that she's a witch) Larxene noticed Roxas "what are you looking at? O dream on it's never gonna happen pipsqueak". Roxas didn't really care about what she said. Axel walked over to larxene "O please no man would EVER go there"! Larxene gave Axel a nasty look. "come on Roxas let's go" Axel opend a dark path.

 

sorry if this is a bad story plz plz write you coments.[/size]

It's a good story. Just work on your grammar a little bit

Awesome story. Although try to make it a little more original, and work on your grammar more.

i know but it was like 3 in the morrning so it's really bad but if u want more i'll make them better + I had my friend telling me 2 write faster so yeah plz say if u want more

 

o i posted that one there's another one i didn't mean to post that one plz plz plz plz read the other one

 

go 2 my kingdom hearts love story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! P.S. I was bord and stuiped stuf come out sooo both of them r really bad so sorry!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

don't ever read my storys unless someone esle says it's good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

That was pretty good just work at your gammar a little like they said, but still very good.

ok I'll post the next chapter l8ter

still don't have a tittle, sooooo any idea's?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

chapter 2

 

Then they were in a world call Twilight Town. Axel, and Roxas were in the tunnle's, Axel looked at Roxas. "Okay Roxas today is just gonna be a practice mission, so it's nothing big okay?" Roxas looked down and said "okay." Axel jumped, flip, so he would land on the top of the stairs. "Okay Roxas so just... um....... you know what, just flip up here we don't have all day." Roxas nodded, then he did exactly what Axel did, but faster. "Wo-wow that was fast" said Axel with a suprized look on his face. "Okay Roxas, so.... um... you need to fined a chest, but on the way you will need to destroy box's because they will be in your way." Roxas looked up at Axel, "how do I destroy the box's?" Axel crossed his arm's. "Um..... with your key blade." Roxas gave a confused look on his face. "A what blade?" Axel snapped his finger's, ' That's right, Roxas doesn't know what the keyblade was.' "Um..... that big key you have" said Axel as Roxas summoned his big over sized key. "This?" asked Roxas, Axel nodded. "Yup, that's it" said Axel pointing to the key blade. Roxas nodded, "Okay" so they went to go fine the chest, but it wasn't long till they found the box's, Roxas destroyed the box's and they went to fine the chest as they planed. Then they finally found the chest and Roxas said "okay found the chest, time to go." Roxas started to walk off till he Axel pulled him back. "Not so fast there, you need to open it" Roxas gave Axel a confused look. "So we have to open it?" Axel nodded, "yup, and we get to keep what we find." said Axel with a smile. "Cool" said Roxas with a smile. So he opened it and then they started walking to the portal, then Axel clapped his hands.

"Well well well, how was the first day?" Roxas looked down. " I cound have done that blind folded." say Roxas felling like a five year old. "Well I don't think we want an blind folded zombie on the lose, come on let's go get some ice cream." Roxas turned around, "But don't we have to RTC?" Axel looked at Roxas, "later, don't you remember our spot?"

 

 

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