Posted January 7, 201114 yr Feel free to criticise or troll! I hear it tugging there feeing that despair coming near deep, jet blackness i fear pain seeps, extracts its tole drives its way in, how is here? strength slips, sparing little power slower now the drum's eternal beat my current weeps for its relief. dark beautiful waves flash its sweet. hello? i see your azure gift a kind, somber serene.. this serenade brings it here a parade of hope bursts fear pain's lost to patience float Im still there longing, I hope... see you soon!
March 2, 201114 yr Author Depressing is my life... especially depressing poetry I was quite depressed and bleak writing this.
March 2, 201114 yr Author its a good poem, didn;t know you were a poet! hope your feeling more happier now. Im grand now but I was just really depressed about something at the time
March 3, 201114 yr I write my feelings in poetry so it's too bad I'm usually always depressed most of the time ^^'. However, I like this poem because it captures the feeling of sadness.
Feel free to criticise or troll!
I hear it tugging there
feeing that despair coming near
deep, jet blackness i fear
pain seeps, extracts its tole
drives its way in, how is here?
strength slips, sparing little power
slower now the drum's eternal beat
my current weeps for its relief.
dark beautiful waves flash
its sweet.
hello? i see your azure gift
a kind, somber serene..
this serenade brings it here
a parade of hope bursts fear
pain's lost to patience float
Im still there longing, I hope...
see you soon!