ok so im really bored so here's a story here it goes Sora in kh II looking for Kairi so here it goes there's gonna be like part 2 part 1 so enjoy (part 1)

Sora''*walks thourhe portle*

girl pops up

Sora'who are you?

Girl'no need to know *pops out Keyblade*

Sora'what! *attacks*

Girl'*hits with Keyblade*

Sora'*gets knocked out*

Girl'*Leaves*

Sora'who was that?

Goofy' who are you talking about Sora

Sora' that girl in the black hood like Org#13 but the org#13 is gone so i don't know what just happend

Donlad'Sora i think you need some rest

Sora'ya i think your right

To be in part 2 tell me if i should make part 2

Cool story, It was kinda hard to read but other than that it was good, And I think you should make a part too

Cool story, It was kinda hard to read but other than that it was good, And I think you should make a part too

 

thanks

This isn't anything close to a story. It's a dialogue, if you even want to call it that. You did not use proper punctuation, proper description...proper anything. I don't even see the need for a "part II" to be created when you haven't even finished this part..

 

If you think a 13 line dialogue deserves a part two though, go for it.