This is just me taking a shot at the writing section of the forums

-this is what happens when i played kh, watched 49 days(korean drama), and get really bored in church.

 

 

Chapter 1

3pm at Destiny Islands and Sora, Riku and Kairi were walking home from school. This was the only time they could live their lives as normal teenagers and escape the chaos that was the Heartless and the Worlds.

“Finally school’s over.”

“Jeez, Sora, only you’d be glad” Riku said mockingly to his best friend.

“Oh I just remembered, we have to leave soon to do the Mark of Mastery” Riku mentioned it because Sora always forgets everything and this was really important. Sora’s smiled turned into a frown. He didn’t want to leave Kairi or the Islands again. The walk home suddenly became quiet.

Meanwhile a girl was playing with a ball until it slipped out of he hands.

“Hey comeback ball” the girl gleefully skipped after the ball but little did she know a car came zooming a long. The girl was in the middle of the road about to pick up the ball.

Kairi was the first to see the girl “Sora, Riku look!”

They both turn to see the girl “She’s not going to make” Riku said as he watched in horror in the disaster to be.

“ Hey kid, watch out!” Sora yelled to the girl hoping that she would hear.

Then Sora did the only thing he could do. He followed his instinct.

“ Sora!”

“Sora, what the hell are you doing?!” Riku tried to run after him.

The car was honking its horn. The girl saw the car and was frozen stiff and in the midst of the moment Sora ran in and pushed the girl away. There was the screech of the tires and the girl landed on the side of the road.

“Sora!” Kairi screamed in horror, as her friend lay lifeless on the road.

Riku lifted his friend of the ground and suddenly he felt blood coming from his hand. “Someone, call an ambulance!”

Sora opened his eyes to see his friends worrying and crying.

“ Hey guys what’s going on?” No body answered him. Sora tried to Ask again. “Guys!” Sora tried to nudge them to get their attention.

Sora gasped. His hand went straight through them. He got up quickly and looked around to see an ambulance and a people crowded over the scene. Sora saw himself on the ground, unconscious.

 

'scuse my grammatical or spelling errors. my english is not very gooderer.

Chapter 2

“ But how is this possible… am I… dead?” He was wearing simple white clothes, clothes that dead people wear. He saw his body being carried off in the ambulance along with Riku and Kairi and he decided to follow them. He sat in the ambulance and seeing Kairi crying made him feel bad.

They were finally in the hospital room. Sora was connected to many machines and his wounds were tended to and his head was wrapped in bandages. He wanted to be alive again but how? Then bursting in the room were his parents.

“Sora, my baby boy!” Sora’s mother ran to his side and hugged him like she was never going to let him go.

“What happened here?” Sora’s father turned to Riku and Kairi looking angry.

“Sora was trying to save a girl. W-We tried to stop him but…”

“I knew you kids were a bad influence on Sora.”

“Now, Honey. It wasn’t their fault. It was a freak accident, all we can do now is hope for the best.” Sora’s Mother held his hand and shed a tear.

“Hoping for the best won’t bring our son back!” Sora’s father stormed out and slammed the door.

Sora felt his heart was breaking, he didn’t like seeing everyone fight. When someone opened the door he walked out but is sadness for everything was overwhelming and collapsed against the wall and burst out in tears.

“ Everything’s my fault. I wanna live so I can fix everything, But HOW CAN I!?” Sora shouted at the top of his lungs even though he knew no one could hear him.

“So, you wanna live?

Sora heard a voice, someone was replying to him. He turned around to see someone leaning against the wall beside him.

“ R-Roxas? But how?”

“ The reason why I’m out here is because of the accident. They only way you can live again to regain the pieces you have lost; strength, memories, and heart.”

Sora was confused “ Wait I understand strength, that come from you Roxas but what about memories, I can remember everything and heart don’t I already have a heart”

“What you said is true but you’ll find out what I mean. You need to complete these tasks for me if you want me to rejoin you.” Roxas walked away and Sora followed behind but he was worried about Kairi, Riku and his parents.

“See you soon.”

 

woah this is like really crap, i'm glad i'm not going to be an author when i'm older. sigh

hey vivi111, i think yuor strory is cool, please write more