Plz don't tell me none of you guys know about Spider Riders.... Anyway, all new characters with original characters... Enjoy.

 

Chapter 1:

 

I stand out of the castle, staring at the beautiful flowers before me. There sweet scent comfort me, and I just want to fall asleep in a beautiful place like this. I smile, a slight breeze cooling my face. I look up at the sun, my silver eyes twinkling in its light. The flowers wave in a cool breeze. My Monacle shines in the sun's light. I close my eyes, laying down in the green grass. I take in a deep breath, the flowers scent filling my nostrils. I let it out, calmly and slowly. I sit up, my green hair flowing in the breeze. I stare at the flowers, slightly closing my eyes as I take in another deep breath. I begin to feel relaxed, relieved. I stare off in the distance, smiling with delight. The flowers continue to flow in the breeze, there sweet scent making me feel drowsy. I yawn, laying down and closing my eyes as I begin to drift off in a peacful sleep.

I'm bored...

 

Chapter 2:

 

Soon I wake up, greeted by the sweet scent of the flowers. I stand up, turning to the castle and smiling. "now time... To train." I say, walking towards the castle entrance with a smile. My Monacle blinks as my spider speaks. "Lets just hope Hunter dosen't beg us to battle..." she says as I walk.

 

"Nina, you're back!" Hunter greets me as I walk into the room. I stare at him and smile happily. "yes. And quite refreshed as well." I say to him, turning to Prince Luman. "so how was your patrol?" he asks. "it went well. Nothing suspicious, I should say." I reply. Corona stares at me menacingly. "why are you late? Please don't tell me you were snoozing..." she asks, turning her head away. I only smile. "well, how could I resist?" I laugh. Corona sighs, resting her head on her hand. We all laugh. "sorry, but I have to go." I say, walking down a hallway to my room.

(I love Spider Riders.)

 

Your chapters are really, really short, you should consider putting a little more effort in it.

Sorry, I don't have a computer right now.

 

Chapter 3:

 

I soon arrive, opening my doors to be greeted by a vase of flowers sitting on my desk. I smile, walking over to them. 'now who gave me these?' I think. I look out my door to see Hunter standing there. "oh, hello, Hunter." I greet him, smiling. "hello Nina. I wanted to ask you something." he says, smiling back at me. I tilt my head a bit, turning to him. "yes?" I say. "well, I wanted to ask you if we could battle." he replies. I freeze. 'a battle? Boy...' I think. He stares at me with a wide smile. "so? Yes or no?" he asks. "er... What do you think, Somura?" I ask my Spider, holding up my Monacle. "I don't mind. As long as its a challenge..." Somura replies. "then it's settled. I battle you, Hunter Steele." I agree, smiling at him. "ya!!" he yells excitedly, jumping up.

 

 

At the stadium, Hunter enters first. "boy, this should be interesting." Corona says from the stands. I soon enter, smiling at Hunter from the other end. "I'm ready." I say, holding up my Monacle. "Spider, out!" I yell, my green spider appearing next to me. "Spider, out!" Hunter yells, holding up his Monacle. Shadow appears next to him. I hold my arm in the air. "Arachnapower!!" I yell, my Monacle glowing. I am soon covered in armor, a shield and a sword on each arm. I jump on my Somura, smiling confedently at Hunter. Hunter repeated my actions, jumping on Shadow. "alright, I won't hold back!" I yell, Somura and me getting into a battle stance.

I like the story...wonderful imagery!