Here's my first photoshop image.

What do you think of it?

It isn't a professional one but I think it's good.

Broken link? :S I can't see anything.

For your first this is pretty good I like it but it feels like there's something missing, almost like the image is a work in progress rather than a completed piece. Cause just now it seems like a picture of Kairi with Sora,Namine,Riku and Mickey as extras so it doesn't really have a concept. What are you trying to convey here?

 

I'd suggest:-

 

-Either adding a white border to Kairi to make them all look even or removing the white border from all the others.

-Mickey looks out of place D: (I don't know why, he just looks that way to me) so maybe you could take him out or alternatively enlarge him more and lower his opacity into the background?

-Feather out the bottom part of Namine, the sharp edge looks strange like that.

-Add some text to show your concept? Or whatever conveys the idea you're trying to create through this image.

-Maybe a border or some colour adjustments to the image might make it look a bit sharper and nicer ;D I'd recommend a light texture overlay, or whatever blending mode looks the best.

 

Anyway I'd say just play around a bit more with Photoshop just now cause this is really good for a first picture but it just lacks that special something to make it awesome

Thanks,I'll do that.Then I'll put it here.