This is a science fiction story that I created last year. I been expanding the story ever since I wrote. Do I need to make any changes? Please feel free to criticize or make suggestions.
OBLIVION DOMAIN
Before the universe existed, there was a realm called The Oblivion and in that realm lived Iratus, the god of anger. He had black hair, icy blue eyes, and wore a blood red robe. One day due to his loneliness, Iratus decided to create a female deity. He named her Avaritia, the goddess of greed and jealousy. She had silvery blonde hair, violet eyes and like her father she wore a green robe with elegant geometric symbols of gold.
Iratus would treat Avaritia as his own daughter. After the creation of Avaritia, there were three crystal orbs that appeared mysteriously. The color of one orb was violet, the other was pale aqua and the last one was carbon black. The three orbs were capable of creating life, especially human life, but for the orbs to work properly they needed to be placed on a powerful machine called DEAL meaning Dark Energy Array Launcher. The DEAL machine could convert dark energy into dark matter, shoot a beam of dark matter that could strike a planet and destroy all the atoms of the planet except the carbon atoms.
If the carbon crystallizes over time, they become diamonds and can be used to power machines much like the three crystal orbs. Because of the great amount of power that the orbs possessed, Iratus knew that one day his daughter would steal the orbs and use them for her advantage due to her greedy and jealous nature. Iratus became the protector of the three orbs. As expected, Avaritia became jealous of her father and began planning to steal the three orbs for her own use. By accomplishing her goal she would activate the DEAL machine to create the first human beings and make them her slaves.
By making them her slaves she would be able to command them to mine the diamonds until end of time. She would forge the diamonds into orbs and use the machine to change the appearance of the realm any way she liked and command the humans. Avaritia was able to steal the orbs and activate the machine but Iratus tried to stop her before the machine could reach its full charge. Avaritia stabbed him in the back with an energy weapon. All of a sudden a bright golden light flashed from the orbs and six figures materialized on a platform.
The three crystal orbs disappeared from the realm. The only thing left were three fragments with a small amount of energy. Before Iratus died, he gifted the humans with free will and cursed them with anger but Avaritia did not realize that they were granted free will and cursed with anger. When she commanded the humans to worship her, they refused to do so. She somehow knew that her father had done something wrong to her new creations.
She became afraid of her own creations. Since fragments had so little power, Avaritia decided to use them to create three worlds so she could place two humans on each planet before the consequences worsened. The first planet was called Aequora. It had oceans with many islands; the next planet was called Ligneus, a desert planet. It was a very harsh and dry place.
The planet’s only main sources of water were lakes and rivers. The last planet was a paradise called Elisium. It had a pleasant climate, beautiful landscapes and rich vegetation. In the core of these three planets were hidden DEAL machines the size of moons capable of creating life and destroying planets with beams of dark matter. The DEAL machines would activate again in the year 220AD by an automated timer.
In that same year the three machines would combine together to become more powerful and carbonize the three planets, Avaritia could then restart her plan to create humans making them her slaves once again without any meddling of anybody. Days before the final countdown however, humans will learn about their true origins from ancient scriptures. They would learn that six chosen ones from a prophecy written in the ancient scriptures would try to stop mankind’s demise once and for all. During the events of the three planet’s final days, the scientists of planet Aequora discovered that the DEAL machine was an ancient cosmological mega-structure weapon constructed by an ancient advanced civilization from another universe described in ancient sculptures discovered by Aequoraian archaeologists. They discovered the DEAL machine had a computerized operating system and a timer that would activate the weapon’s converting process of dark energy and start carbonizing planet Aequora.
The archaeologists contacted scientists to immediately notify the federal government that they only has two hours to evacuate Aequora. The Aequoraian government informed President Relius to alert the citizens to prepare for evacuation and go to the spaceport of Primus; the capital city of Aequora. Twenty years ago, a group of aerospace engineers had built starships the size of large cities in case of global evacuation. All the citizens were inside the ships and began to take off when the machine started the process of converting dark energy into beams of dark matter. Two more ships were about to take off when all of the sudden the machine began blasting beams of dark matter on the surface of the planet.
By the time the ships exited the atmosphere, half of the west hemisphere of Aequora was already carbonized but for unknown reasons the machine stopped carbonizing the planet. The machine had just entered into meltdown mode. There was only thirty minutes before the machine collapsed onto itself. Right before the ships entered into the wormhole, the machine began to collapse onto itself creating a black hole. The ships started to activate their warp drives to warp to another part of the galaxy by creating a wormhole.
The ships quickly escaped into the wormhole. The black hole started to consume all the material of the infinitely crushed DEAL machine and of planet Aequora. Everything was gone in seconds. The Aequoraians unsure of where to go next were headed to the unknown of the Milky Way galaxy. For millenniums the Aequoraians had heard about a legendary world described in ancient scriptures and that one day it would be their only hope for survival.
The only thing left from their planet was galactic coordinates that would lead to a mega-structure written in the lost ancient scriptures that could support life. In the year 240AD, the Aequoraians had reached the strange but somehow familiar world called Orbis Rota. The ships landed on an island called Domicilium. They settled down and called Orbis Rota their new home. The Aequoraians technology advanced and had just mastered intergalactic travel, colonizing several planets.
Around the year 355AD the Aequoraians were on the brink of extinction. Eventually other civilizations declared war on Aequoraians due to the religious beliefs of Iratus and Avaritia. The Oblivion gods were actually two advanced ancient civilizations. One of the two civilizations was from another universe. Iratus was the civilization from the other universe and they were the one that built Orbis Rota and the three DEAL machines. Two hundred thousand years ago, the Avaritia civilization declared war on the civilization; the war lasted for five years.
The Iratusians eventually destroyed all of the Avaritiaians, leaving Orbis Rota intact. They stole the machines and hide them inside the three different planets. The only way to deactivate the machines if they were ever reactivated was by finding three key devices. These three keys can only be found on Domicilium, an island on Orbis Rota. By the year 220AD, six chosen heroes, Orbis Rota and the three keys would be the only hope for the Aequoraians survival.
This is a science fiction story that I created last year. I been expanding the story ever since I wrote. Do I need to make any changes? Please feel free to criticize or make suggestions.
OBLIVION DOMAIN
Before the universe existed, there was a realm called The Oblivion and in that realm lived Iratus, the god of anger. He had black hair, icy blue eyes, and wore a blood red robe. One day due to his loneliness, Iratus decided to create a female deity. He named her Avaritia, the goddess of greed and jealousy. She had silvery blonde hair, violet eyes and like her father she wore a green robe with elegant geometric symbols of gold.
Iratus would treat Avaritia as his own daughter. After the creation of Avaritia, there were three crystal orbs that appeared mysteriously. The color of one orb was violet, the other was pale aqua and the last one was carbon black. The three orbs were capable of creating life, especially human life, but for the orbs to work properly they needed to be placed on a powerful machine called DEAL meaning Dark Energy Array Launcher. The DEAL machine could convert dark energy into dark matter, shoot a beam of dark matter that could strike a planet and destroy all the atoms of the planet except the carbon atoms.
If the carbon crystallizes over time, they become diamonds and can be used to power machines much like the three crystal orbs. Because of the great amount of power that the orbs possessed, Iratus knew that one day his daughter would steal the orbs and use them for her advantage due to her greedy and jealous nature. Iratus became the protector of the three orbs. As expected, Avaritia became jealous of her father and began planning to steal the three orbs for her own use. By accomplishing her goal she would activate the DEAL machine to create the first human beings and make them her slaves.
By making them her slaves she would be able to command them to mine the diamonds until end of time. She would forge the diamonds into orbs and use the machine to change the appearance of the realm any way she liked and command the humans. Avaritia was able to steal the orbs and activate the machine but Iratus tried to stop her before the machine could reach its full charge. Avaritia stabbed him in the back with an energy weapon. All of a sudden a bright golden light flashed from the orbs and six figures materialized on a platform.
The three crystal orbs disappeared from the realm. The only thing left were three fragments with a small amount of energy. Before Iratus died, he gifted the humans with free will and cursed them with anger but Avaritia did not realize that they were granted free will and cursed with anger. When she commanded the humans to worship her, they refused to do so. She somehow knew that her father had done something wrong to her new creations.
She became afraid of her own creations. Since fragments had so little power, Avaritia decided to use them to create three worlds so she could place two humans on each planet before the consequences worsened. The first planet was called Aequora. It had oceans with many islands; the next planet was called Ligneus, a desert planet. It was a very harsh and dry place.
The planet’s only main sources of water were lakes and rivers. The last planet was a paradise called Elisium. It had a pleasant climate, beautiful landscapes and rich vegetation. In the core of these three planets were hidden DEAL machines the size of moons capable of creating life and destroying planets with beams of dark matter. The DEAL machines would activate again in the year 220AD by an automated timer.
In that same year the three machines would combine together to become more powerful and carbonize the three planets, Avaritia could then restart her plan to create humans making them her slaves once again without any meddling of anybody. Days before the final countdown however, humans will learn about their true origins from ancient scriptures. They would learn that six chosen ones from a prophecy written in the ancient scriptures would try to stop mankind’s demise once and for all. During the events of the three planet’s final days, the scientists of planet Aequora discovered that the DEAL machine was an ancient cosmological mega-structure weapon constructed by an ancient advanced civilization from another universe described in ancient sculptures discovered by Aequoraian archaeologists. They discovered the DEAL machine had a computerized operating system and a timer that would activate the weapon’s converting process of dark energy and start carbonizing planet Aequora.
The archaeologists contacted scientists to immediately notify the federal government that they only has two hours to evacuate Aequora. The Aequoraian government informed President Relius to alert the citizens to prepare for evacuation and go to the spaceport of Primus; the capital city of Aequora. Twenty years ago, a group of aerospace engineers had built starships the size of large cities in case of global evacuation. All the citizens were inside the ships and began to take off when the machine started the process of converting dark energy into beams of dark matter. Two more ships were about to take off when all of the sudden the machine began blasting beams of dark matter on the surface of the planet.
By the time the ships exited the atmosphere, half of the west hemisphere of Aequora was already carbonized but for unknown reasons the machine stopped carbonizing the planet. The machine had just entered into meltdown mode. There was only thirty minutes before the machine collapsed onto itself. Right before the ships entered into the wormhole, the machine began to collapse onto itself creating a black hole. The ships started to activate their warp drives to warp to another part of the galaxy by creating a wormhole.
The ships quickly escaped into the wormhole. The black hole started to consume all the material of the infinitely crushed DEAL machine and of planet Aequora. Everything was gone in seconds. The Aequoraians unsure of where to go next were headed to the unknown of the Milky Way galaxy. For millenniums the Aequoraians had heard about a legendary world described in ancient scriptures and that one day it would be their only hope for survival.
The only thing left from their planet was galactic coordinates that would lead to a mega-structure written in the lost ancient scriptures that could support life. In the year 240AD, the Aequoraians had reached the strange but somehow familiar world called Orbis Rota. The ships landed on an island called Domicilium. They settled down and called Orbis Rota their new home. The Aequoraians technology advanced and had just mastered intergalactic travel, colonizing several planets.
Around the year 355AD the Aequoraians were on the brink of extinction. Eventually other civilizations declared war on Aequoraians due to the religious beliefs of Iratus and Avaritia. The Oblivion gods were actually two advanced ancient civilizations. One of the two civilizations was from another universe. Iratus was the civilization from the other universe and they were the one that built Orbis Rota and the three DEAL machines. Two hundred thousand years ago, the Avaritia civilization declared war on the civilization; the war lasted for five years.
The Iratusians eventually destroyed all of the Avaritiaians, leaving Orbis Rota intact. They stole the machines and hide them inside the three different planets. The only way to deactivate the machines if they were ever reactivated was by finding three key devices. These three keys can only be found on Domicilium, an island on Orbis Rota. By the year 220AD, six chosen heroes, Orbis Rota and the three keys would be the only hope for the Aequoraians survival.
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