So yeah,i decided to try and created a story with many characters.I will do my best on this story and i'm appreciating that some of you reading it and i'm thanking it.So yeah,Enjoy!

 

 

Prologue : 'H'

 

It is the Autumn weather on this Year,2013,but the world was still peaceful.One day at Dawnstar Town,A boy who's walking around the town,carrying a Sketchbook while looking around the area.That boy,was known as Hazimie Azhar,a residents of this Town."I wonder what drawings should i make?..."As soon as Hazimie wonder while walking,he accidentally bumped to the Man in black suit."Oh,i'm sorry.i should've look where i'm going..."Hazimie said as he politely apologize to him.

 

"No,it's okay.Hmm?hey,is that........a Mark on your left arm?"The man said as he pointing his finger at Hazimie's mysterious mark that shaped like a Letter of H on his left arm."Ah,yeah,it is.It was my Birth Mark.To be honest,i don't know how i got this mark in the first place,but i got it when i was a baby."Hazimie said as the man in black suit quickly understands it."I see......very well then,may i ask your favor?"The man said as he approach and give him a mysterious,blue Key."Here,I want you to have this.Let's just say it will be your Lucky Charm.Keep it,you'll be needing it someday..."The man said as he want Hazimie to keep it."Really,okay......and thank you,Mister.....um..."As soon as Hazimie tried to guess what's his name,that man interrupts."Black.Just call me Black..."Black said as he introduce himself."I see,thank you,Black.Oh yeah,i forgot to buy some cake.Sorry,but i think i should go.See you later!"Hazimie said as he leaving Black behind and heading to buy some cake at the Bakery Shop.

 

"You didn't tell him everything...."A mysterious man with White Suit appeared and approach Black."Well,from what i see,he's not ready yet to understand some Fantasy things......White."Black said to the person with White suit that was called White."Still,he needs to know,about his origins...."White said as he need to know something important."Well,let's called it next time..."Black said as he and White began leaving the town with sudden disappearance with a quick glance,only leave a black and white feather behind on the floor...

 

When Hazimie arrived back home on the apartment at night,he began to put the candles on the cake that he buy."Alright,Happy 15th Birthday,Hazimie.....you have been living a good life now.......*Sigh*wish i could celebrate with my family......even though i don't know who they are..."Hazimie said as he celebrate his own Birthday alone on his own home,noting that he has no family."I don't know what happen to my parents,even though i never met them once in my lifetime...."Hazimie said as he ready to blow the candles on the cake."But i wish.....i could meet them someday..."Hazimie said as he blowing it and began eating it.

 

After dinner,Hazimie was in his room and drawing on his Sketchbook."Man,i dunno why,but it's so boring today......hmm?"Hazimie noticed a Key that he got from Black earlier at his deck that put."I wonder why he give this to me....Hmm?"Hazimie saw a lines of words at the Key's skin."What's this?It says....."Fantasia"..."As soon as Hazimie reading the word on the Key,it suddenly glowing."Woah!what just happened?"Hazimie shouted as he confused about how the Key became glowing.

 

Then,Hazimie's sketchbook suddenly have a sentence that he doesn't write at all."Do i have to do this?Well,only one way to find out...."Hazimie as he stand up and begin to do what the sentence from the sketchbook says."The World of Fantasy,I open thee!Gate of the Fantasy,Fantasia!"Hazimie rephrasing that words as he use that Key and pointing forward.

 

Suddenly,a strange Portal open after Hazimie pointing his Key and Hazimie was amazed and shocked."A portal?but how?...."Hazimie begins to getting more confused."Step Closer,Thy Young Knight...."A mysterious voice calls for Hazimie to enter."A voice....hmm..."Hazimie said he feel that he wants to go in there.As soon as Hazimie step closer,the Portal was suddenly sucked him in."Wa--Waah!!"Hazimie shouted as he already inside the portal and it has been closed.

 

 

To be continued...

Edited August 4, 201312 yr by Hazimie

Chapter 1 : The World of Fantasy

 

After Hazimie has been sucked into a portal,he appears at the Sky and falling down to the sea like a meteor.As soon as Hazimie swimming after falling,he arrived at the shore."What the heck just happened?I feel like i'm in another world.....or is it?"Hazimie said as he look in front of and it was a Town that almost like Medieval-like.

 

As Hazimie went through the town,much of the villagers feels awkward to see Hazimie with his clothes,since they never see of that clothes."I guess i'm in a bad start for this..."Hazimie said as he went to the Guild named 'Excalibur' that he just saw.As he arrived,much of the guild members look at Hazimie with curious.Then,Hazimie go to the Bar side of the Guild and approach the Bartender."Welcome,what would you like for drink?Say,you're not around here,are you?"The Bartender said as Hazimie nodded."Um.....can you tell me where i am?"Hazimie said as he asked the Bartender."Well,since you're a person who's not around here.I'll tell you....oh this one's is on me...and call me Joey,by the way."Joey said as he giving him a glass of Orange Juice for free."Okay,for the first start,you're in a World of Fantasy named Fantasia,the World where Fannian lives.These Fannians,including me,are a Race that similar to Human from the Human World,possess a uniquely different powers for every one of us.Right now,you're in the Sanctus Sanctuary Nation of Fantasia..."Joey said as he explain a little details about this World to Hazimie,who is drinking while listening.

 

"Everyone,The Blaze Empire Nation has arrived!"one of the Villagers appear at the Guild from the outside and said that a 'Blaze Empire' Nation has arrived as all the Guild Members begins to head out."What's Blaze Empire Nation?"Hazimie asked Joey for another question."It is another Nation on this World,i hate to say this,but we're in the middle of the War against all the Nations on this World."Joey said as Hazimie understand about the situation that the world was in,since he saw the Guild Members are heading out for the War."Thanks for the drink,i should be going!"Hazimie said as he went outside."Be careful out there!"Joey said as he too,leaving the Guild to get a safety place...

 

As Hazimie run through the town,he saw that a couple of Guild Members are battling against the Invaders from the Blaze Empire.Some of them winning,and some of them are loosing.Suddenly,a Young Man appeared and defeating more Guild Members that the other Invaders did."RUN!It's The King!"The Villagers said as they run away from him,as he being noted as dangerous person."We will take this place by force.All units,Attack!"The Young Man said as his units attack the Guild Members one by one.

 

"I better go--WOAH!!"As soon as Hazimie tries to leave,he was surrounded by the Invaders."You!Hands in the air!"The Invader said as they pointed their weapons to him and Hazimie do what he told him and they take him to the Young Man that they called 'The King'."Sir,this Young Boy was trying to escape from this Town,and he's not around here!"The Units said to 'The King' as they already brought Hazimie to him."Uh.....hai."Hazimie said as he don't know what to say to him."Do not disrespect to the King!"The Invaders said to Hazimie as he rudely to say casual to him.

 

"It's okay,i don't mind..."The King said as he approaching Hazimie."Tell me,are you......a human?"The King said to him as Hazimie surprised that he knew so quickly."How'd you know?"Hazimie asked."By the look of your clothes,it only appears on that World.So tell me,how did a Human like you get here?"The King said as he question him."Well......I,uh...."As soon as Hazimie were trying to say,The King interrupts."All of you,examining him..."The King said as the Invaders are trying to check on Hazimie's body as he used some things that makes 'get here' in this World.

 

Then,the Unit was found a Blue Key from Hazimie's pocket and they found and saw a 'H' Letter tattoo on his Left Arm."SIR!he's got the Knight's Insignia and a Key of Journey!"The Unit said as much of The King and the other Units were surprised."I see.....all of you,stand back..."The King said as the other units do what he told them."I'm sorry to say this.....but you leave me no choice.....prepare yourself!"The King said as he was in a battle stance,that which means he will fight against Hazimie."Hey,what do you mean?why do i have to fight you!?"Hazimie said as he also surprised to this conclusion...

 

 

To be continued...
 

Edited August 5, 201312 yr by Hazimie

Chapter 2 : Unexpected Battle

 

As Hazimie was been dragged into a battle for an unexpected dangerous person,he tries to convince him that he doesn't want to fight."Listen,I know i'm not around here,but i don't want to fight you!"Hazimie said to The King."Why are you denying it?You have that Mark.The Mark of Knight's Insignia....The Letter of H!"The King said as he pointing at Hazimie's Letter H Mark on his left arm."What's wrong if i have that mark?"Hazimie asked on The King."You really don't know?Here,i'll show you..."The King said as he then,show his Own Knight's Insignia,the Letter of K on his left-upper chest.

 

"That mark.....it's similar to mine...."Hazimie surprised after seeing The King's own mark."Whoever have this mark was a sign of a Chosen People......one of the Strongest.....You're definitely one of the Letter Knights.A group of 26 Alphabet-Ranked Knights in total and noted as the strongest Fannians in this World.And since you and I are one of them,i have no choice but to locked in combat with you...."The King said as Hazimie understanding some of the details but still surprised that he has to fight against him.

 

"But still,i don't want to fight you!"Hazimie said as The King begins to charge head on and tries to take a punch to his face.However with miraculously,Hazimie managed to avoid the punch."Good reflex.No one has ever managed to dodge that.It seems you are a powerful Knight..."The King said as Hazimie step back to get away from him."I gotta run!"Hazimie said as he tries to run away from the battle but The King chase him since he can't let him get away so easily...

 

"You're not going anywhere!.Letter's Skill,Ki Blast!"The King cast a Blast that made of Ki and blasting to the trees and it began to collapse in front of Hazimie for not making him go any further."This is far as you can go.Here i come!Letter's Skill,Ki Combo attack!"The King said as he charges towards to Hazimie and try to attack by using his fist that possess incredible Ki with full force."WAAH!!"Miraculously again,Hazimie manage to dodge it again one by one.

 

"Not bad,for a Human though...."The King said as Hazimie was feeling restless."Seriously,how can i dodging like that?It's like i'm moving my body without my own Will..."Hazimie said as he wonders of how he can dodge the attack."Well,no matter.I just have to do it again and defeat you this time!"The King said as he charges again.

 

As soon as The King immediately approached Hazimie,The King suddenly step backs because of an unexpected shooting attacks from someone.Then,The King and Hazimie look to the other side and they saw another two People,a man with White Robe and a girl with Pink Robe and carried a Twin Gun that has been noted that she was the one who shoot at The King."I think that's enough for the day you will rule this Town,Kai...."The man in White Robe said to Kai,the man who is entitled as 'The King'."Yuji Yzelphar,The Letter Knight of 'Y','The Youth',and Misaki Shiki,The Letter Knight of 'M','The Myriad'.......What brings you here?..."Kai asked on Yuji."Well,let's just say me and Misaki,are here to protect this Town.....and this boy...."Yuji said as Hazimie surprised by another two person come by and save him...

 

 

To be continued...

Interesting so far with what seems to be a grand adventure. I enjoyed it, though it needs moderate editing. I highly recommend to not rush so much and try to linger often on setting and details. Overall a nice little read.6/10