My first time writing anything ever. Tell me if you think this is worth continuing or not :huh:

 

Chapter 1 :

" Meet our new member, Number 15 "

I looked around, hood thankfully covering my face, at the others in those weird, super high chairs. How do they even get up there?

The one in the highest chair said something then disappeared into darkness. Most of the others disappered soon after.

I turned around and ran into the guy with the spiky orange hair. What was his name again..? I looked up to see him laughing at me.

I glared at him, and went to walk away but he caught my arm before I could really get anywhere.

" Just where do you think you're going? Didn't you hear Xemnas? It's mine and Roxas' job to show you around. "

" No? " Maybe Xemnas HAD said that, but I guess I hadn't been listening.

He laughed at me again and started to pull me outta the room with someone , who I guessed was Roxas, trailing behind. A voice made them stop, and I turned around to see someone with blue hair talking to Spiky Hair.

" Don't let her out of you're sight for the time being, Axel. You know there are others looking for her. " Others? Huh?

Axel started to say something but I didn't hear any of it. Someone else had steped into the room, and as I turned, my head felt really heavy, and the room started spinning.

I heard someone yell my name as I fell.

 

Not much but I'm not really good at beginnings. I have a good idea for chapter 2 if you wanna see how this turns out...

this is worth continueing :D

Still writing part two. It's kinda hard to write the stupid beginnings, but I think it'll be funny

yah I understand but I hope you'll make it good :D

Ok, I'm not very good at writing, but here's the next part anyway.

 

Chapter 1

 

I walked into the gray area, expecting SOMEONE to be there, but no. The whole place was empty. I fall asleep for a week, and no one is here when I wake up? That's nice.

I was about to head back to my room when someone ran into me. What do I look like to these people? The floor?

" Ow, can't anyone ever look where they're-"

" Sorry," Someone said, helping me up. " I'm glad to see you're feeling better at least."

" Um, thank you? Anyway...where is everyone? "

" My guess? Sleeping, most likely."

" Sleeping? What time is it? " Time is so confusing here. I mean, the sun never rises!

" Somewhere around midnight. "

" What are YOU doing up so late then? "

He was about to say something, but a huge explosion type noise sent us running to see what Vexen blew up this time. I'll never forgive him for trying to blow up that poor bunny...

When we got there, everything was covered in purple goo. Ick...

" Everything is purple "

" Thank you for stating the obvious, Zexion. " Vexen snapped.

Oh, so that was his name then.

They launched into an argument, which lasted a while, well 'till Saix came and broke it up.

When he saw me, he looked shocked. " You're awake? "

" Obviously! If I wasn't, would I be here? No. " I regretted acting like that when Saix glared at me.

" Well since you're up so early, I guess you wouldn't mind going out on your mission early too. I've assigned Axel to go with you. " Saix said, walking away.

Oh great. From what I've heard, Axel is NOT a morning person...

 

Ok that's as far as I've got for now D: But I will post how the mission goes tomorrow.

great hope to see more :D

It was supposed to have Demyx in this one, but I edited him into the next. ( He's like the Demyx from Saix Puppy :DDDDDDDDD)

awesome xDDDDDDD

I like it so far. Some spelling errors, but it's pretty good.

 

Keep writing! I wanna know why the Organization wanted this particular person as a member... And you're not a bad writer. You're much better than I was my first story I ever wrote... Keep it up!

Chapter 2

 

Axel is NOT a morning person. He spent a long time yelling at me, then told me to wait in the grey area, untill he's done with his hair.

So I sat there, waiting. How long does it take Axel to do his hair?!

Just then Demyx comes running into the room yelling, " HURRY PEOPLE! HELP ME FIND MY SNAKE!! "

" Does Xemnas know you're hiding snakes again, Demyx? " Roxas asked.

" Nooooo! That's why I said HURRY! Oh, wait, there he is! "

I screamed and clung to the chair I was sitting on. I'm terrified of snakes. One bit me when I was little, and I've been scared ever since.

Even after Demyx took the snake away, and Xemnas ordered him to get rid of it, Axel still had to tear me away from the chair.

When we were ready to go, finally, Saix stoped Axel.

" Don't lose her Axel. " He warned. Lose me? What am I? Some stupid little toy?

" Yeah like I'D lose her "

 

" What was that about? "

" Nothing you need to worry about. " Axel said as he started on about missions and such. Boring.

I looked around. We were in a little area filled with shops. The sun seemed to be setting, but I never saw it move. Like the castle, I thought. Though, it's a moon there...

I saw a cool little tram heading to a hole in the wall. Shouldn't they fix that? Hmm...unless there's something cool back there...

I took off running in the direction of the hole, ignoring Axel's boring speach about missions.

 

 

 

I'm not sure when I'll post the rest of the story. I've been really busy, and dealing with some issues...

Ok Sorry about posting again, but this is to say that I've gotten a better idea for a story like this. So I won't be finishing this one, but my next story will be with the same character, only different story. ( Better story. My cat even begged to be put in it XDDDD )