Posted August 19, 201015 yr What is life like Deep within a darkened night Where there is not even a single speck of light Might there be a heaven or hell Until I pass, it will be impossible to tell Is there a kind of magic that can enhance such a spell What is beyond a windowsill Is there a duty to fulfull Is is really a sin to kill Are clouds just meant to look fluffed Can you find love if you look hard enough To survive in life, do you always have to act tough Is there such a thing as a perfect song Can you tell if doing something is right or wrong Is a simple month just too long How I wish I could get what I'm looking for I just want to know what there is in store I want to know more and more I want the answers; I need to explore
August 19, 201015 yr It feels like the rhyming is being forced and there's no flow in the poetry at all. Concept is good though
August 19, 201015 yr That was pretty good. Sort of reminds me of the questions I'd ask when I was little.
August 19, 201015 yr Author In response to Hinako_U: It feels like the rhyming is being forced and there's no flow in the poetry at all. Concept is good though The rhyming was forced a bit I do agree; it's not one of my best.
What is life like
Deep within a darkened night
Where there is not even a single speck of light
Might there be a heaven or hell
Until I pass, it will be impossible to tell
Is there a kind of magic that can enhance such a spell
What is beyond a windowsill
Is there a duty to fulfull
Is is really a sin to kill
Are clouds just meant to look fluffed
Can you find love if you look hard enough
To survive in life, do you always have to act tough
Is there such a thing as a perfect song
Can you tell if doing something is right or wrong
Is a simple month just too long
How I wish I could get what I'm looking for
I just want to know what there is in store
I want to know more and more
I want the answers; I need to explore