Keyaku

Good setting. Does require some Kingdom Hearts touch but, from your post, this character development seems quite interesting. There's something that, in my opinion, kills the mood: why can she wield the Keyblade? Who made the Rite of Succession to her? Any specific answer that you'd best keep it to yourself for some awesome plot twist (to avoid spoiling everything for the reader) or just so the character of Neera can build a better connection to the original heroes (this is what sets it off for me)?

no problemo

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I apologize for my confusion: Unless you were mentioning the MUSICAL, which originally spawned the music (and not the movie like I said), I took a quote from the MOVIE that I thought you inspired to post this.Anyways, what's clearly important here are the characters: Kiana (your persona?), Vanity and the many other characters you created made the piece somewhat interesting. I'll be happy to read any character development you'll write for them

Riku's Keyblade is the one Sora's been carrying in the first game, but Keyblades must have a mind of their own as they choose if a person who was chosen for the Rite of Succession (ex: Terra to Riku) should bear it. In case of Riku, it ignored him as long as he was into Darkness and similar drugs. My head hurts.

«Sandy! You can't just walk out of a drive-in!» quote from the same movie that spawned the lyrics you picked for your post.

Kiana! You can't just walk out of a drive-in!

This is an ambitious project of mine and each episode is to contain a lot of pages. Each episode takes place in a separate world and I have plans for many other worlds, some that didn't even appear in the series. These are the Episodes that I currently planned: Episode 1 - Destiny Islands Episode 2 - Hollow Bastion [DETAILS DELETED] Original Post: A fan-fiction of mine, still in the works. [LINK DELETED] There are, however, some rules that I must share before you read the fan-fiction: —I rate this 14+ for alcohol use (although in moderation) and strong language. [DETAILS DELETED]

I currently am, and going to enjoy it further! Thank you for your support! As of now, it's still in its early stages so, if anything, I only want help with suggestions and refinements (which will have to wait until you get a picture of my vision) and I'm going to publish the episodes, one after the other, in these forums. What. Hurt Kairi? What, that little useless ru- Of course, sure. I, uh, will make certain of that!

What is up, fellow Keyblade wielders? Although I've been reading a few stories here and there, only now am I taking my chance to register. I enjoy the first Kingdom Hearts games of the series a lot; in fact, I'm on this quest to write a fan novel (for a fan game) that takes the first three KH games (1, Chain of Memories and 2) in a different perspective, with new characters and a new story, still within the proposed timeline. I'm in an attempt on gathering people to help me create the game as soon as I feel the novel is complete. Putting that aside, I've enjoyed lurking around in this website before my registration so far, so I'll stick around! Also, might I add: so far, Twitter integration isn't working. Just to throw it out there