There is AkuRoku/VenLea ahead. Don't like, don't watch.

These are two MEP parts I made. I want to know which one is better or what I need to improve on it and stuff.

 

(I'll try and give crit but I'm an AMV n00b, so I don't really think I could help much. ;; )

 

The only thing that sort of didn't seem right to me was in the first one. Towards the end, some of the scenes are sort of longer than they could've been. A little cutting would've made them better, but that's really just my opinion (I'm very nit-picky about these kind of things. )

 

Other than that, I think they were both perfect. 8DDD

Thanks DLC! Much appreciated ^_^

I'll try to improve!

They don't really seem to be very heavy on the whole leaxven/akuroku. Mostly on the first one.

The glow effect dosen't seem to fit the mood. That's just me being in a headache most likely though. Sometimes the glow effect just looks sucky though, just a tip.

Many thanks Venny =P