October 23, 201015 yr I've seen that image before. Riku always looked like he enjoyed that paoupu too much The main image is very pixely and I really dont like it. The text doesnt fit. And the colors dont really add anything to it I'm seeing a great improvement in your editing though
October 23, 201015 yr Mostly what Koko said. The image is pixely, text doesn't fit, and the BG is kinda bland. Spice it up with stuff that blends together more. Try downloading text files, they have purty text out there RikuxPaopuwut? lulz
October 23, 201015 yr Author Thanks for the crit. I'm trying to improve, so it's always nice to have some help. <3 Also, the main picture I made on purpose like that, but it didn't turn out very well. @Teddy Bear My computer won't let me download any fonts or brushes or anything. Dx
Crit? x3