Posted December 2, 201014 yr OK this is a test of Tyler Lionheart and Vexin Wolf fang! do in ink and ink is a _______ (enter desired word here). Ty came out great but Vexin not so much. need to work on fur and body.
December 2, 201014 yr Author are those your oc's? they look great! I'm sorry I don't know what OC's are! They look really good. I especially like... Vexin? The wolf guy. Thx! he still a work in progress Never heard of the names, but your marker/ink lines is especially awesome! Thx! and You never heard of there names because they are my characters from a story I've been working on.
December 2, 201014 yr Never heard of the names' date=' but your marker/ink lines is especially awesome! [/quote'] Thx! and You never heard of there names because they are my characters from a story I've been working on. Geez! Seriously? They are awesome, how old are you? If you're 13, in my opinion you'll definitely have bright animation career! Even if you're 18 and up, you're still awesome !! My critique if you want to go professional (doesn't really important if you don't, coz my admiration is for real): 1. The hands are still stiff, you may need a bit of learning to smooth up the flow, though it's extended completely, don't make it look so straight coz it'll make it unlike arms. Wolf-right: the wrinkle in the middle of his arm isn't properly placed, it's supposed to be wrinkled down because it's upper side of elbow Wolf-left: It took me some time to figure out why it is so much shorter, I think you don't need to add semi-circle below his hand coz the proportion is pretty much already fits for 90 degree arm lift Lion-right: The muscle proportion isn't pretty correct, again you missed the upper arm, and the nearest-to-shoulder-muscle (I don't know what the hell it's called) is too big so the biceps is sunk inbetween the next muscle Lion-left: The lower arm isn't in the same line with the beginning of the hand, while you made it straight line, since his hand is turned down, resembling you're right already it should be straight (no muscle (cmiiw) at that side) All in all, first thing you need to do is learn basics of natural arm. You did awesome at clothes proportion already as I think (coz I'm pretty much still gotta work on it -I excel at expression though). And by the way, though it's not my type, the expression awesome too, keep the weird proportion of face as your style, except you want to explore something different. That's all for now, I'm impressed, if you don't mind I want to follow your progress in drawing, especially if you're serious at this. For all, sorry to write too long
December 2, 201014 yr Author Never heard of the names' date=' but your marker/ink lines is especially awesome! [/quote'] Thx! and You never heard of there names because they are my characters from a story I've been working on. Geez! Seriously? They are awesome, how old are you? If you're 13, in my opinion you'll definitely have bright animation career! Even if you're 18 and up, you're still awesome !! My critique if you want to go professional (doesn't really important if you don't, coz my admiration is for real): 1. The hands are still stiff, you may need a bit of learning to smooth up the flow, though it's extended completely, don't make it look so straight coz it'll make it unlike arms. Wolf-right: the wrinkle in the middle of his arm isn't properly placed, it's supposed to be wrinkled down because it's upper side of elbow Wolf-left: It took me some time to figure out why it is so much shorter, I think you don't need to add semi-circle below his hand coz the proportion is pretty much already fits for 90 degree arm lift Lion-right: The muscle proportion isn't pretty correct, again you missed the upper arm, and the nearest-to-shoulder-muscle (I don't know what the hell it's called) is too big so the biceps is sunk inbetween the next muscle Lion-left: The lower arm isn't in the same line with the beginning of the hand, while you made it straight line, since his hand is turned down, resembling you're right already it should be straight (no muscle (cmiiw) at that side) All in all, first thing you need to do is learn basics of natural arm. You did awesome at clothes proportion already as I think (coz I'm pretty much still gotta work on it -I excel at expression though). And by the way, though it's not my type, the expression awesome too, keep the weird proportion of face as your style, except you want to explore something different. That's all for now, I'm impressed, if you don't mind I want to follow your progress in drawing, especially if you're serious at this. For all, sorry to write too long LOL! It OK I'll take it I'm working on a new version so i'll add your tips! and I'm 17!! Thx!
December 6, 201014 yr Author psst....oc= original character OH!... I thought you were talking about the show!
OK this is a test of Tyler Lionheart and Vexin Wolf fang! do in ink and ink is a _______ (enter desired word here). Ty came out great but Vexin not so much. need to work on fur and body.