Posted February 12, 201114 yr Heaven or Hell My heart cannot tell Is this soul just an empty shell? How can I know... When my mind moves so slow. ...This isn't just a phase And you only gave me a single taste Like a drug This new nicotine Why does it taste so sweet on my lips? Addictive and clean Is this what it means to have true meaning? I haven't found anything better That is why I wrote this letter. And no longer am I weathered You were one of my most treasured Our bond was severed By my own blade My own storm of lies With this new heart My love I will tie To the ground With ropes to many to count Like a Rider My loyalty I will mount. Forever the same As if a stone My heart is tamed To you I have shown My heart as if concealed inside a frame Our friendship is the opposite of shame. You know your name Is a beautiful claim One that aids my heart so stained. If you do not understand why I named this poem "Unbreakable." Then don't woryy just ask I and I will explain
February 12, 201114 yr Niec piece Antrium : sentimental and flows well with the rhimes :although such near rhimes remind me of the stupid poetry my class wrote when I was in the 2nd grade they suck , but it has nothing to do with your poem, it's great :):):):):):):):):):)
Heaven or Hell
My heart cannot tell
Is this soul just an empty shell?
How can I know...
When my mind moves so slow.
...This isn't just a phase
And you only gave me a single taste
Like a drug
This new nicotine
Why does it taste so sweet on my lips?
Addictive and clean
Is this what it means to have true meaning?
I haven't found anything better
That is why I wrote this letter.
And no longer am I weathered
You were one of my most treasured
Our bond was severed
By my own blade
My own storm of lies
With this new heart
My love I will tie
To the ground
With ropes to many to count
Like a Rider
My loyalty I will mount.
Forever the same
As if a stone
My heart is tamed
To you I have shown
My heart as if concealed inside a frame
Our friendship is the opposite of shame.
You know your name
Is a beautiful claim
One that aids my heart so stained.
If you do not understand why I named this poem "Unbreakable." Then don't woryy just ask I and I will explain