Just though of something if Riku did get a a nobody. I mean they do all these impossible things anyways so why not? And I am bored so story starts now.

"I feel nothing. No anger, sadness, happiness, just nothing. I'm a shell, something that's incomplete, nonexistent." The nobody landed on the awakening. "I'm nothing but I can make a choice, right?" Make a choice, Take your time. A sword, a shield, a staff appeared. If you give it form, It will give you strength "I remember this he choose the sword" The nobody then started to head over to the shield. "I'm not him though and this seems right in my eyes' She then picked up the shield. "It's light almost like feather" The awakening then shatter leaving the nobody to fall to the next one where a heartless was. "And this a heartless ready to fight well i'm ready" The nobody got in a fighting stance and then the heartless attacked. The nobody held the shield in front when it glowed with a white light. "And now I get..." The lighted faded away and in place of the shield was a key shaped as a demonic wing with a blue eye near the hilt. "Soul Eater" The nobody hit the heartless where it vanished in black smoke. The awakening shattered but this time there where no more under this one. "What?!" Everything went black.

Grammar needs some fixing, not spelling, but sentence order and punctuation.

Also, why is Riku's nobody a girl? o-o

There's nothing against that is there? I know and i'm using this also to get some tips on spelling and to get better since that is my weak subject but hey i'm not the worst on this site.

There's nothing against that is there? I know and i'm using this also to get some tips on spelling and to get better since that is my weak subject but hey i'm not the worst on this site.

 

I don't think it's a law or anything, but IN GENERAL most nobodies look like their others and are usually the same gender. Not all of them (Namine ect.) but most are.

(Well it's mine and I use her as an oc for a lot of things so why not? and on to next chapter. And if you see mistakes just point them out I want to get better.)

Chapter 2

"My goodness that left some marks" The nobody then looked at them self. Nobodies look a lot like there somebodies except a few details right? Well this one was no exception unless you count being the opposite gender being that. She was a flat chest and wore the same thing as her somebody except she had the pants undone at the bottom. "Well this place is familiar" She said will looking at trees and a endless ocean. "I wonder why I landed here" She then saw a memory of a girl and two boys sitting on a tree on the island. "That's right Sora, Kairi, and Riku used to be here." But that was also why she was here. If they hadn't wanted to get off the island maybe she wouldn't have came here in the first place. "I guess all i can do is wait for now." She then sat down on the sand to rest.

Chapter 3

She stayed on the island for a week looking around even though she knew it already. But them a stranger came. Well maybe not that he was a guy dressed in a black cloak. "What do you want?" She didn't like the looks of him. "He then began to speak. "DO you remember your true name?" "True name wait you mean Riku?" "Yes that is it but your not him his nobody correct?" "You know that your a nobody too" "Well how about helping the rest of us to get a heart then?" "A heart.." She said it thinking about and deciding. "Ok" "First a name." An X floated into the air and then Riku went in and spinned forming a name "Rixku" "Come" A dark condor formed and she entered not knowing what was going to happen.