every halloween the monsters come from there hide.they all go to a huge party for there celebration of the wierd.now i come to you to say "ladys and gentle man witchs and mummys we throw our party tonight to prove we can be scary.this year we will have a scary contest for everyone.if you come you are in the contest.now tomorrow night we will gather in our home land for the party please come to meet up with old school partners!"

 

rules

 

1.no god modding

 

2.no f-bombs

 

3. you can inly have less then 4 chars

 

4. have more than one

 

 

char sheet

 

name:

 

what type of monster:

 

age:

 

appearence:

 

bio:

 

friends at the party:

 

party clothes:

 

 

heres mine

 

name: mek

 

type of monster: vampire

 

age:200

 

appearence: she was blood shot red eyes with the same color hair.she wears a purple pair of jeans with skulls on them.her shirt was one of her old drees that she wears for a shirt.

 

bio: she was biten by a vampire when she was 12.after 40 years she found a good monster school.she regestered and became second of her class after a month.

 

party clothes: she wears a red velvet dress with high heels.she also wears a ribbon around her neck and chains around he wrists and ankles.

sigh yourself up wendy amd alex mek said fixing matts suit.mek got up with matt and stared at wendy and alex.you don't have to sgh the sheet to come you know matt said.yep mek said.

Alex: Oh well in that case...

Wendy: We will still sign it.

Alex: Fine.

ok but question how do we look for the party matt asked looking at mek.mek stomped on matt's toe really hard.mek you are so harshhe whispered to mek.mek looked matt who looked at her.mek walked a few steps away.i swear you show off i'm stabing you with a stak matt mek said.

*few feet away allen and yu walk by*

Wendy: So how do we get there?

its only awhile away from right here mek said walking down the path tp where the party is.matt followd.come on this is the way to the party matt yelled

*Wendy and Alex follow*

right here mek said stoping at a door.matt opened up the door waiting for them to go in.

*Alex and Wendy go in*

Wendy: Wow nice place.

yu: hu?

allen: what is it yu?

*yu looked at the 4 at the house*

allen: no sure *looking at them slightly confused*

what matt asked struggling with the door.matt go inside with wendy andalex i'll hold the door mek said puting her hand on the door.matt went inside and sat down at one of the tables.whats wrong allen and yu mek asked.

*yu looks up slightly startled and hides behind allen*

yu: h- hi

allen: hello *smiling*

Hey hey guys, it's cool that you're rp-ing and all, but I have to interrupt you.

 

Before I get to my point, let's look at the Roleplaying Guidelines.

 

- Two sentences is NOT a role-play post. Although here this has gotten out of hand, please try to at LEAST have 100 words. If anything, 5 in-depth sentences. Though that is honestly still VERY small, descriptiveness is key, and paragraphs are golden. Five descriptive sentences = a paragraph.

Now let's look at your posts. A lot of them don't fit this guideline. Some aren't even five sentences. Hell, some of these aren't even sentences, they're just posts in script-form. Those that are, aren't very "in-depth", let alone decent grammar or sentence structure. I'll post a few example rp posts taken from the guidelines:

 

 

 

EXAMPLE(S) OF HOW LONG A ROLE-PLAY POST SHOULD BE:

 

 

What is sight? One of the five senses that most humans have. Was it really that important in the end? Was it worth trying to work for? A girl sat silently in a cell. Not that she could tell what it was. Her eyes were guarded. Unable to see the light or anything close to it. She knew why. The girl was a mutant. The way they had explained these 'things' made her expect to be some sort of monster. She wanted to regain the ability to see. Yet one doubt was hidden in the back of her mind. Was it all really worth it? Of course it was. She felt her skin. It was rough. It was thick. What did it really look like though? She shook her head. Candle didn't need to think of this now. Candle already did today. Sighing, "...At least I can hear my own voice." The younger girl backed up until she felt the wall. Without sight, that only made her ears more sensitive to sound. Maybe if she could hear something...

No. That wouldn't work. It would never work. It didn't matter about what she wanted it to be. It wouldn't happen anyway. Freedom. F-R-E-E-D-O-M. She could only spell it out blankly in the back of her mind. No letters. No visions. Nothing. That's just what seemed to happen to her. Oh how she wished to see these fingers that she had. Candle wanted to see this light she had been able to control all of her life. It didn't matter anymore, because in the end, she would never escape anyway.

Sitting in that corner by her self was the only thing she would ever be able to accomplish.

 

 

 

"You too..." Ryax replied as he closed his eyes and fell asleep...

 

Ryax was dreaming, but his dream was of a memory. It was thousands of years ago, during the final battle of the Keyblade War. He was weilding the almighty X-Blade, which at long last, he had finally completed, and he was fighting against the Champion of the Light, a warrior so powerful he was known as the Light Incarnate, as he was the Darkness Incarnate. The two of them were doing battle, Ryax with the X-Blade, and his foe with the Keyblades Two Become One and Way to Dawn, as he had mastered both Light and Darkness, the second to do so after himself.

 

The battle was intense, and in the end, a strike on the X-Blade shattered the mighty weapon, rendering Ryax defenseless as he was mercilessly struck down. He lay defeated at the feet of his foe when he said with his last dredges of life, "I may have fallen...but one day, there will be a one who will avenge me...his name...is Xehanort!" With that, he released all the power he had, creating a massive surge of energy that completely wiped out all the combatants in the area, causing the Worlds to separate and leaving a massive graveyard, with only the Keyblades of those fallen souls remaining...

 

Ryax quickly woke up again in a cold sweat when he realized it was just a bad dream and fell back asleep without paying it further heedance.

 

However, he was dreaming again, this time of something far different. He had, at one point, loved someone, which he had never told anyone. She was a beautiful young woman named Emily, with red hair and brilliant green eyes. In this memory, the War had just begun, and he was saying goodbye for the last time.

 

"My darling" Ryax said softly, "Remember how I promised you something earlier? Well...this is my chance to fulfill it." "Really? You mean we'll finally be able to settle down, you and me?" she asked excitedly. "Yes, but first, I must unlock Kingdom Hearts, to purify the World of its injustices" he replied, "Once that is done, I will return to you, and I will abandon the Darkness forever." "But...what if you're killed or..." Emily replied anxiously when Ryax placed a finger over her mouth. "I will return to you my love, I promise, and we will be together forevermore..." he replied as he kissed her passionately for several seconds that both wished could last forever, but it wasn't to be. Ryax at last broke the embrace and stepped out onto the balcony. "Farewell my love, I will return..." he said with a warm smile as he openned a Dark Corridor and stepped through. The Corridor closed, leaving Emily alone. "Goodbye...Ryax..." she muttered.

 

Ryax didn't awaken from this dream as he slept, now leaned against a rock, but the memory, his most cherished of all, was too much for him, and caused him to do something he hadn't done in thousands of years. He shed a single tearm which streaked down his cheek and off his chin to the sand below. (I'm sorry Emily...) he thought mournfully (Please forgive me...)

 

(I know, I'm such a Drama King aren't I?)

 

 

 

John winced at the kick, but remained calm. "Hmph. A being of darkness. Dear Nobody, I'm afraid you are slightly misinformed. I AM darkness!" John extended his hand and launched a beam of darkness to counter the light. Holding back a great deal of power, John ensured that the beams would remain even. "This pathetic human thought he could save his home at Destiny Islands by chanelling the darkness threatening it through him. Sadly, he is not strong enough for such power. His mind is gone, and this body is being eaten away by my power. By enveloping the worlds in darkness, I ensure that I remain alive, and prepare for the day that the worlds will return to their original state."

 

 

 

Now, if these kind of posts that you've been doing continue, I'll have to close the rp

*yu looks up slightly startled and hides behind allen*

yu: h- hi

allen: hello *smiling*

 

so this is bad and the everyone else is making is bad

 

in that case we all must have 5 sentances that are sentances

Wendy:*smiles back* So what's up?

nothing matt said.matt looked at mek.if you want to come in then come in mek said closing the door.mek that was rude matt yelled.they can come in when ever so how is it rude mek yelled back.

Wendy: Okay. *looks around*

Alex: Does this place have a name?

no we just found it mek said.mek how are we soppused to have a party with no music matt asked.mek sat down and ignored the question alittle.

Wendy: EVERY PARTY NEEDS MUSIC!

Alex: Whatever.

Exxon came to the party and walked in."looks like im the only demon here"he thought

sasuke you need to make one more person i just noticed

 

hello mek said looking at the guy.she got up and walked to the guy.whats your name sir matt asked poping up behind him.mek looked at the guy and sighed.wendy alex do you think you can keep watch for a few minutes mek asked opening the door.she walked out and quickly ran to her house to get the music for the party.when she got there she grabed the music bow and walked back to the party.het allen and yu won't you come to the party inside mek asked puting her hand on the door.she opened the door up and put the music box on a table.i got the music now we can party when the moon is out mek yelled.

do i have to?im not very good at controling 2 people

sorry but yes i'll help you out ok we'll take turns controling it

 

mek looked out side to se the sunset.one last hour then we can start the party for real mek thought.a hour later.hey guys we can start the party now mek said looking at everyone.she walked outside real quick and draged yu and allen inside but left the door cracked.come on it's a party but if you want we can have it outside.mek turned the music on and everybody started dancing.mek grabed matt and started dancing with him.well i hope everyone has fun matt said looking at wendy and alex.

o tay! but can u make the sign up sheet i hav to go

sure i'll make myself a new one then the one me and you are going to control together.

 

mine and sasukes

 

name:jackson

 

type of monster: witch (he is not a ugly warlock hes very hawt

 

age: 400

 

appearence: he has blue hair with two different color eyes one is blue the other is pink.he has brown shirt and black pants and both have blood stains on them.

 

friends at party: mek matt rose and eevon

 

party clothes: he has a black and blue suit.

 

just mine

 

name: rose

 

type of monster: ghost

 

appearence: she wears a pink dress with purple skulls.her eyes are light brown and so is her hair.

 

friends at the party: mek matt eevon and jackson

 

party clothes: a pink dress with a flower hair tie