Posted March 9, 201213 yr I wrote this back in 2010, haven't reedited it. What do u think needs improvement? I place my wrinkled clothes, Upon the unkempt bed and turns off the lights. Not even a deer, with their rounded globes can see into my darken hold. I keep my bedroom in shadows for I fear someone will see the mess within. For if anyone should have the courage to turn back on the lights, they will hold my heartstrings in their hands-- and my clothes will be neat once again.
March 9, 201213 yr Cool poem! http://kh13.com/forum/public/style_emoticons/default/happy.png Please change the font color, though! It's really hard to read without highlighting all the text or getting super close to the monitor.
March 9, 201213 yr Author Cool poem! http://kh13.com/forum/public/style_emoticons/default/happy.png Please change the font color, though! It's really hard to read without highlighting all the text or getting super close to the monitor. Ah! Sry, there, I changed it to black! Thank u!
I wrote this back in 2010, haven't reedited it. What do u think needs improvement?
I place my wrinkled clothes,
Upon the unkempt bed
and turns off the lights.
Not even a deer,
with their rounded globes
can see into my darken hold.
I keep my bedroom
in shadows for I fear
someone will see the mess within.
For if anyone should
have the courage
to turn back on the lights,
they will hold my heartstrings
in their hands--
and my clothes
will be neat once again.