ya sorry to everyone that wants to join this but this is just a one on one here. but feel free to drop on in and take a look a the story

 

ANYHOW

my person

 

Name: Haven Icipher

Age: 17

Weapon: Zweihänder

Bio: Haven Icipher was the only son of a king and queen in a kingdom that has been plagued by the fact that there has not been a true hair to the throne in 200 years and he would be the first one. still only a prince, he is mostly kept in the castle away from all sorts of trouble so that he would live long enough to become king. but most people dont think he is worthy of really being a king in lacks in experience to lead. he wants to prove all of them wrong but till he can he sits in a chair all day. right next to the king.

Just as she caught up with him he took off running again.

"hey i said wait for me!"

Alice yelled and then started running after him again.

"i can already tell this is going to be a long night...."

(as i reach the camp i look in the nearest tent, searching for any signs of life)

(but it becomes clear that the camp has been abandoned)

Damm, i thought this was really it.... but..

(i lean down to examion the ground that has foot steeps in them ..)

She finilly got to him and tryed to chatch her breath.

"you cant just run off like that you know....."

Alice said looking at him.

"and what are you looking for anyways....?"

She looked around the area and got a small chil down her back.

This is the camp the bandits used...i dont know how i knew it was here..

i just got some sort of vision .... dont know why..

but thats the least of our problem now

(points at the foot prints) they are heading stright to the castle

Alice looks down at them.

"crap crap crap crap!!!! i dont know how to fight!!!"

She swollowed hard her face looking a bit scared.

"i-i-i guess we should go then......"

Her voice was a bit shaky.

First off here

(i pick up one of the swords that was left behind from one of the bandits)

take this and swing it a few times.

(hands it to you)

beyond that there is nothing to it .. now we must get going (starts to run back through the forest to the castle

Alice looked at it and then took it from his hand and blinked a little.

"......."

She just looked at it for a min or two.

"swing it....what if i cut something down!"

She moved it a little and then stoped and saw that he was running off again.

"gha!"

Alice ran to chatch up with him.

(as we run closer and closer to the castle the night air lights up more and more)

this is not good at all, they must of started a fire

(starts to pick up the pace as we inch closer and closer.. the sounds of fighting can be heard.. and it does not sound good)

Aice's eyes widend and ran faster passing him.

"what if there the ones who did it!!!"

She thought to herself and her hand tighted on the sword.

"i wont forgiv them!!! never!!!!"

Alice had anger in her eyes.

(when we get to the castle gates we are greeted by a sight that is not vary good)

(the castle doors are broke off the hinges and lay off to the sides as the bandits fight with in the castle walls)

(fire comes from all sorts of direction, the fire is so strong that a slight tug on the air is felt as the fire sucks in the oxygen to fuel its needs)

(screams encompanies the fire as it seems the bandits work and work their way through the city)

(in front of the castle gates lay a few bandits.. but twice as many city guards)

We are to late. they already breached the walls (runs through the castle gates as i draw out my sword)

(ready to slash the first thing i see as anger runs from with in through my hands)

Alice stops running when she gets there he eyes widen as she looked at the fire.

"........."

Her body trembles as the fire reflecks in her eyes. She looked at the bandits with an angrey look. Alice took off running at them without even thinking about what she was doing. She slashed them accross the chest but then stoped and looked at the blood running down the blade. She glansed up at them and backed away slowly.

"im....im scared......"

She thought to herself.

(the one bandit that took the slash across the chest falls as he slips away from the living world)

(soon the bandits turn see there brother died and the blood on your blade)

(they start to redirect there anger twords you and start to apporch you with there blade drawn out )

Alice looked arouns seeing them come closer to her.

"stay way from me!"

She hels the sword up and backd up more. She felt her back hit a wall and swallowed hard.

"i cant kill all of them on my own....."

She could feel her heart beeting fast.

(from behind the bandits another a slash can be heard as one falls down)

(they start to turn around as i start slashing away from the others trying to distract them)

(they start to step away from you as i continue to fight them)

Alice looked over and watched you then looked back at the bandits seeing them walk away. She wanted to help but the feeling in her told her not to.

"..........."

She leaned agenst the wall and looked at the blade.

"im weak....and usless......"

I continue to fight them off as one bye one continue to fall

but soon the bandits start to move cloers and closer as i start to tired out

"no...i can do this....its fro my bother....."

She felt a small bit of courage go through her as she took off running and hit them in the back taking out a few at a time. She didnt even know what she was doing but it felt that it was right.

"is this.....what it feels like to fight.....?"

She thought to herself taking out more.

as you continue to fight more and more, more bandits continue to fall.)

(soon i am able to continue to fight also and take a few down)

(soon all the bandits left outside has been taken care of.. and lay dead in the ground)

Stops when there all dead and then look around me and drop the sword.

"......there....dead now....Onii-San....but i still dont know if there the ones who killed you......"

Alice looks at all the dead bodys around them.

(the dead bodies are filled witht he faces of bandits..)

(but .. its not just the bandits.... there .. mixed)

(city folk that was just roaming around yesterday lay next to the bandits..)

(the bandits swords... covered in there blood as the dead bodies lay every place.)

no .. no this cant be good no..... wiat .. DAD (i run as fast as i can into the castle )

kicking in the partly broken door and continues in with sword drawn)

Alice had fear in her face still. She held her hands to her head as bed memories flowed through her mind.

"stop......i dont want to be reminded....."

Alice fell to her knees onto the blood stained ground.

as the bodies lay besides you a sharp scream follows from the castle followed by a long nooo)

(it hollows through the castle and its town as the fire burns /.

(nothing moves in the place but the falling wood )

Alice's eyes widen.

"i was....supos to save this place......but i dint do anything......"

Small tears formed in her eyes.

"nothing...nothing.....NOTHING!!!!"

She punched the ground angerly.

(as you punch the ground a small raindrop starts to from the sky .. it falls on your fist)

(soon a large rain shower starts to come down as puddles start to appear around your fist ..)

 

(soon the rain has drenched everything that is not covered up)

Alice doesn't move as she watched the fire go out due to the rain.

"the rain can do more then i can......."

She thought to herself as she got soked.