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ANYHOW

my person

 

Name: Haven Icipher

Age: 17

Weapon: Zweihänder

Bio: Haven Icipher was the only son of a king and queen in a kingdom that has been plagued by the fact that there has not been a true hair to the throne in 200 years and he would be the first one. still only a prince, he is mostly kept in the castle away from all sorts of trouble so that he would live long enough to become king. but most people dont think he is worthy of really being a king in lacks in experience to lead. he wants to prove all of them wrong but till he can he sits in a chair all day. right next to the king.

Alice hears the knock on the and glanses back.

"no.....im not hungrey....."

She had no emotion to her voice. She looked back out the window.

"...................."

Her breathing was soft as she leand forward a little but was still holding on the sides of the window.

(think)that...was .cold ......is everything alrigth??(thinkS)

(knocks on the door a little bit more) Alice is everything alright in there???

(trys to open the door)

She glanses back again.

"im fine.......dont come in here!"

Alice trembles a little.

"everything is ok.......no one would care if im gone....because there all dead!!!!"

Alice's hands losend up on the window.

ALICE come one .(starts to ram into the door)

(then i take a step back and with a more effert kicks the door open)

(the door falls forword as the hinges fly some other way as i look at you) ALICE?!?

Her eyes widen as she glnses back at you.

"i told you....not to come in here!"

Her voice sounded shaky and a little freked out.

"leave.......leave.......go away....."

Alice looks back out the window at the ground.

Alice .. whats wrong .... whats going on here

(a take a look around .. looking at the place that used to be the princesses bedroom)

why you so close the egde of the window?

"nothing....nothings wrong....."

She swallowed hard and didnt look up from the ground.

"because......"

She said quietly.

Because what alice . .. just . tell me .... your not helping anyone .staying quiet..

(i start to take a step forword...but its not like any other time i have walked)

(this step was uneasy, as if i dont know if i should even move...)

Alice looked at him.

"no dont come near me....!"

She steped back on the window a little.

"ill jump!"

Her body was trembling again.

"ill jump....ill die.....ill be with him!!!!"

Why . please just tell my why . whats bothering you

Please (i take one more step twords you)

(in my mind) this is not going to help anything. but what do i do to stop her.(in my mind)

i start looking around the room a little bit as i start to think of the worst case senario)

Alice looks at him take another step forward.

"i...dont...want to be alone anymore....and all thoes people died....they shoudlent have i should have......and maybe if im gone i can be with him....again....like old times...."

Her hands losend on the window.

(in my mind) o no .. these is not good . (sees the hands) shes going to go for it no matter what(in my mind)

(as i see this i dont even both with a answer as i start to sprint to you)

(i run faster then a horse .. in hope that i can get to you before you fall)

Alice let go and closed her eyes tight as she felt herself fall back.

"im sorry....."

She thought to herself.

(running as fast i can i get to you but you are already partly falling)

(at first i grab your arms but they just slip through my hands)

(then i try to grab your cloths but just the same the arms)

(as you start to fall though i grab your feet and is able to hold onto them..)

(but unfourtently, the force drives me over the edge, but i am able to grab the ledge ... barly)

(holding on to your foot as you dangle below me)

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Alice feels herself stop and then looks up.

"what.......!?"

She was confused.

"why......just let me fall......."

She said to him.

"why...did he grab me.....?"

(as i look up at the edge i really start to think.. what do i do now)

(i try to pull my self up but i just dont have the strength in my one arm)

(a look around for something to climb on but there is nothing i can just move to with out dropping her)

this is not good .. no no no (my arm thats holding on to the edge starts to shake a little bit more and more.)

there is no way im getting out of this with out getting hurt...

(i close my eyes and take a deep breath as i with a huge jult of the arm i pull you up a little bit and let go of the ledge)

(the instant i start falling i grab a hold of you better as i pull you over me and by the time we hit the ground)

(i end up taking the major force of the fall onto the stones below .. breaking some and pushing us a little bit into the ground)

"what....no it wasent supos to be this way...i dont want to hurt anyone....."

She held onto his shirt tight and closed her eyes again. She flinshed when she hurd him hit the ground small tears rolling down her face.

"why.......why did he do this......!?"

Alice didnt want to open her eyes she didnt want to see what she caused.

"i mess everything up.......i hurt people without meaning to......."

Even though i lay in the ground with a stright face)

(me eyes tells a differnt story. the tears with in my eyes comes from the pain resepters as if they are over flowing)

(every breath i take in it comes out with a sign of struggle in the breath)

(but even with that .. i hold on to you... my arms around you.)

Alice's brething was shaky.

"i didnt want to hurt you....i didnt......"

Alice sisnt let go of him.

"please be ok.....please......say something.....move.....anything.....this shuld have been me not you...im the one who jumped....."

(with a moun and groin i start to lean forword.)

Alice AAaA A

(falls back down as i grab my my chest.)

Alice opens her eyes wid and looks at him.

"im sorry....im sorry...IM SO SORRY!!!!"

She held her arms her body shaking like crazy tears running down her face.

(i twitch in pain as i try to hide .. but its just to much for me to take)

(i continue to hold my chest but i refuse to let go to your one arm)

alice...Al..ice...

"im sorry!!!!!"

She was freaking out.

"why did you catch me! i didnt want you to get hurt thats not what i wanted at all!"

She looked at your hand on her arm.

Dont .. Dont . leave me .. please....

(my hand grabs the sleeves of your shirt as if im holding onto it with my life)

(my breathing starts to get more heavy as the pain becomes worst and worst)

please.... dont .. gooo.

Alice's eyes widend wonce she hurd him say this to her.

"i-i wont.....i wont leave......."

She held onto his hand as her tears feel onto his chest.

"ill stay.......ill stay...."

A wierd feelung came into her chest.