Here is my charachters and the plot line..

 

Name: Avani Sanskrit

Age: 13 1/2

Gender: Female

Apperince:

(the thing on her head is a jacket and she is wearing a cloth. Underneath the cloth is a green-half sleeved shirt and long brown pants with black boots)

Personality: Anger issuses, Funny, Strong, sarcastic, quiet, loving

Bio: Lives in Republic city alone, avoiding pickpokets. She owns a messanger hawk named Koi. Really mad about the upcomeing war. She figured out that she was the avatar two years ago.

Element: Earth

Weopon: Knife that flips into a sword

 

Name: Loki Scandinavian

Age: 14

Gender: Male

Apperince:

Personality: Quiet, Mysterious, strong, sad like,

Bio: Lives with his dad in Republic city and thrives as Avani's friend.

Element: Water

Weopon: daggers

 

Name: Aria Melody

Age:12 1/2

Gender: Female

Apperince:

Personality: Really sweet, still training,funny,really sarcastic

Bio: Lives with parents and two older sisters, sneaks out at night and trians alot.

Element: Air

Weopoon: Bow & arrow

 

Amon has caused the war and only these three can stop him! Jorney with them to see how they attack him!

Edited May 19, 201213 yr by Axgrce

AzureFlame, Im sorry, but your a really good helper in all but I was gonna have tie to it in an second but ya so, sorry but read this :unsure: .......

 

 

chapter 1: Who I truly am

 

My name is Avani Sanskrit, I bend the element of Earth but until that day. In late April two years ago, they told me I was the avatar. I would not accept this so I ran away to Republic city. Ever since then I have ran from trainers and benders. I met two friends though, Aria Melody, an air bender and Loki Scandinavian. Koi my messanger hawk is not my messanger. He is a hawk. Amon has caused a war of benders. Me and my friends have promised not to use our bending and stay silent around him and his 'friends'. It was very hard at the last bending mach. even though I do not percipatate in them amon was there. He petrified Loki and Aria but not me. I was silent with a huge, narrow rock behind my back, ready to chunk at him. Amon looked at me for a long time, trying to decive the rage in my green eyes. "what are you thinking, pathetic fool of this horrible land?" he asked me one. I crumbled my rock into dirt and dropped the dirt on the ground. I then stood up kicking dirt at his feet, picked up Aria with the slightest bit of air bending and woke up Loki. He and she were okay after that. Koi has been on the lookout for Amon ever since then. I have been lieing here as usaul and wasting my life. But secretly I am really practicing air bending. I enjoy alot that Aria and Loki accept me for who I really am. Ive been so lost until I found them. I love them both and there the best friends a girl could have.One question still rings in my mind. Why is Loki so sad??

 

 

first chapter..

(sorry have not posted)

 

Chapter 2: The truth comes and shatters my heart

 

I walked over to Loki's house aware and sad that pro-bending was shut down. "Jerks!" I heard Loki yell. " What's wrong?" I asked him. "I'm out of money..." he admitted. "Well you know being the Avatar....I don't have money either." I laughed. "SHHHH!!!!" he yelled. " Huh? YOUR the AVATAR??" a random person yelled. "Oh crap.." I whimpered. " Where leaving NOW!" I yelled. Me and Loki ran off. "Hey guys, need some help?" Aria yelled from her Glider. " All we can get." I yelled back. She then pushed an air current toward the crowd then one pushing us toward us. She knocked us in the ocean. Koi was flying above us. " Hold on! " I warned. I made the currents revolve to soften our fall. Loki helped since I was not a good water bender. The crowd was off our tales and we sat on the dock. " So they finally figured out?" Aria asked. " yup. " I admitted.

 

 

(to be continued )

Whoah

What are you doing

Whoah hold on

 

It's impossible for your character to have naturally blonde hair and be that lightly colored and be a descendant from a water tribe member. Even the swamp bender people from Avatar weren't that pale. Heck, Tahno isn't even that pale. :U

 

Despite whatever time period you're basing this in and even if the characters could be mixed races you should really look into the four nations and how each of their races look and take that into consideration before you write any further. :U

... :ph34r: I picked random pictures so idk what you want for me to do but I cannot find any better pictures

Hey, look what I found

GO AWAY SIKOTAAA

Fine...

Okkkayyyy *hides because of Sodom's writing*