New characters mixed with real ones. Just so you know^_^

 

 

Chapter One: Arriving at Traverse

 

Kira walked the quiet alleys of Traverse Town. She was more jumpy than usual. She wasn't used to what the citizens here were. She likes how quiet it was, smiling as she walked. She looked up and saw o shady figure on the rooftop. It instantly dissapeared as she looked at it. 'that's freaky...' she thought. She continued walking down the quiet alleys. She wasn't half way down one when she felt a cold chill run up her spine. She spin around, and to her surprise, saw nothing. She had a scared and confused look on her face as she looked down the alley. She turned around and continued walking, a concerned look on her face. Soon, she arrived at a potions store, but it was closed. She noticed that she had already had enough potions. She sighed as she walked down an alley, stopping at a cloaked figure in front of her...

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Chapter Two: Sora's Help

 

Kira stared at the cloaked figure, a scared look on her face as it put its hand on her shoulder. "agh!!" Kira screamed, pushing away and running in the opposite direction. She tripped on a stray peice of metal, falling on her face as the cloaked figure walked towards her. Then, a young man jumped from the rooftop in front of the cloaked figure. Kira got up and rubbed her forehead. "leave her alone." said the young man raised his keyblade at the cloaked figure. Kira stood up and turned around and looked at the young man. "oh, a keyblade..." said the cloaked figure. Kira slowly stepped back with a scared look on her face. "run. I'll take care of him." said the young man. Kira nodded and turned to run, running down a dark alley...

Great job. I'm waiting patiently... O.o

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Chapter three: Meeting Raxia

 

 

Kira stopped at a dead end in the alley. 'oh man...' she thought. All she wanted to do was get out of the place. She scratched her head as she turned around. She started to wonder what the young man's weapon was. She started to run down the alley, noticing that she was lost. "great... Now what?" she said to herself. She looked up at the rooftop, a shady figure appearing. Kira sighed. She just wanted to get back to Twilight Town. 'why not come with us?' a voice said in her head. Kira eyes widened, a surprised look on her face. She was confused, and a weird feeling over coming her. A dark portal appeared in front of her, a cloaked figure stepping out. Kira took in a deal breath. "LEAVE ME ALONE!!!!!!!" she yelled, the cloaked figure dissappearing. 'thank you...' she thought. "gwarsh, that's a pretty loud voice." something said behind her. Kira spun around, to see a dog with a shield, and a duck with a staff. Kira then fainted, leaving the two there in front of her...

Alright, now I'm going berserk. Great job.

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Chapter four: Aqua's Friends

 

 

Kira soon woke up, quickly getting up. She hit her head on something. "owww..." she said, rubbing her forehead. She looked in front of her. "well, good morning." said a duck. "aaaagh!!!!!!" Kira screamed, jumping up and stepping backwards. She was confused. 'animals that can talk.... IM GOING INSANE!!!!!!' she thought. She felt a hand on her shoulder. Kira spun around, a young boy standing in front of her. He was smiling. "it's ok. There my friends." the young boy said. Kira had a frightened look on her face. 'I'm dreaming... This is all a dream...' she thought. The young man continued smiling. "I'm Sora." he said. Kira smiled, but was still scared out of her mind. "th-the names Kira." Kira said. Sora took his hand off of Kira's shoulder. "my friends there are are Donald, and Goofy." said Sora, pointing to his two friends. Kira smiled. Sora walked away, a bright light sorrounding Kira. She then arrived at a different world. An island. It was sorrounded with palm trees. "hey, where'd you go?" Kira said, looking around her. She looked around and found three people. They were talking. Kira was confused. 'why am I at a different place?' she thought. One of the three people turned, staring straight at Kira. Kira froze, nervous. The person ran to Kira, a smile on her face. "hello. Who are you?" the girl asked, tilting her head slightly. "Kira." Kira said, staring at the girl. "well, Kira, my names Aqua." Aqua said. The two other people ran towards Kira. "these are my friends, Terra and Ventus." Aqua said. "just call me Ven." Ventus said. He smiled at Kira. Kira was confused. First, she was alone, then, she was with Sora, now, she's with three people named Aqua, Terra, and Ven.

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Chapter five: The Kingdom Key

 

 

Kira looked around Destiny Islands. she was confused. This place seemed so familiar. She looked toward the ocean and smiled. The ocean always made her smile. But this time was different. Kira smiled because she had a feeling. A feeling of being in the wrong time. A feeling of being in the wrong world. Kira began daydreaming. The feeling changed. She closed her eyes. She expected something happy. Instead, she was dreaming of a gigantic wave crashing toward her. Before the wave hit, Kira opened her eyes. She fell backwards, hitting the sand hard. Kira blinked twice, the feeling of being in the wrong time coming back...

I can't wait anymore!!! I love it!!!