Because we're all super Zexy. YOU KNOW WHO YOU ARE.

 

ITZ ZEXY TIEM

Life sucks.

 

...She published a story that she wrote like that?

What.

Honestly, I feel bad for this Tara girl.

 

Just... ugh

 

 

 

I was going to quote her "smexy" scene, but I don't want to get in trouble. She can't even write a good smexy scene.

 

Then I looked out the window and screamed… Snap was spying on me and he was taking a video tape of me! And Loopin was masticating to it! They were sitting on their broomsticks.

 

Well, that just happened.

Life sucks.

 

...She published a story that she wrote like that?

What.

 

Well, from what I understand she wrote it and posted it on Fanfiction. net

 

But it was so terrible that is was actually decent. So someone published it.

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Well, that just happened.

 

...I feel really mean for saying this, but people who can't write well or care to write properly should publish their stories. I sit at least two hours a day trying to proof-read mine and make it perfect so people can read it.

...I feel really mean for saying this, but people who can't write well or care to write properly should publish their stories. I sit at least two hours a day trying to proof-read mine and make it perfect so people can read it.

 

I dunno about 2 hours, but yeah.

Well, from what I understand she wrote it and posted it on Fanfiction. net

 

But it was so terrible that is was actually decent. So someone published it.

 

Yup, I bought a copy, lol.

I dunno about 2 hours, but yeah.

 

I'm a perfectionist _ _||

I'm a perfectionist _ _||

 

lol, alright

 

http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/FanFic/MyImmortal?from=Main.MyImmortal

 

this explains everything you need to know, lol.

On a scale of one to twenty, how horrible is this story?

 

I want to be prepared to fall off a chair from laughter.

On a scale of one to twenty, how horrible is this story?

 

I want to be prepared to fall off a chair from laughter.

 

981

 

it is the worst thing ever written.

 

Oh shoot. I'm gonna cry. This is horrible.

 

I can't even get past the few chapters.

 

*goess off to cry in closet*

Do not cry, little one, merely laugh at her outright stupidity.

I should read this story later

*cries forever*

 

Then he put his thingie into my you-know-what and we did it for the first time.

smh.

 

I can't help but cry and laugh at the stupidty. I'm stupid as well, but this amazes me.

Edited September 22, 201213 yr by VanitasisKirby

*cries forever*

 

 

 

smh.

 

I can't help but cry and laugh at the stupidty. I'm stupid as well, but this amazes me.

 

yes, she uses every other word she can say, but won't say these.

*cries forever*

 

 

 

smh.

 

I can't help but cry and laugh at the stupidty. I'm stupid as well, but this amazes me.

 

LOLOLOL What. Now I really want to read this. How old was she when she wrote this?

http://kh13.com/forum/public/style_emoticons/default/ohmy.png Did my quote not appear?! *rage*

 

Uhm, I don't really know how old she might be, but the story was written somewhere bewteen 2006-2007. So I hear

I have no idea how old she was. Hmm. Probably under 18 though.

I have a feeling that she was.

 

The way she wrote some of her words were atrocious. I still don't know how I managed to understand what she was saying.

 

"I sed stup flaming ok ebony's name is ENOBY nut mary su OK! DRACO IS SOO IN LUV wif her dat he is acting defrent! dey nu eechodder b4 ok!"

 

I don't know o.o

 

She had to be at least 14.

Yeah, I would guesstimate at around 14-16

I wonder if she has a Facebook or something.

 

Maybe it could give her age. Not that I plan on actually searching for her or anything.

 

 

But, wow. smh

 

I fell out of my chair like five times today while reading this.

 

 

 

kudos

Ah, it was better yesterday, me, Kakaru (his online name), and Jeff (pronounced "Heff", or at least I do) were gathered around my PC and we read chapters 1-22. We played a modified drinking game using water for 2 chapters. If you played by full rules, you would die, no matter what you were drinking.

Full rules?

 

Sounds kind of fun, though ^^

The My Immortal Drinking Game

 

How to Play the Home Game

 

1) Have one person preparing a tall drink for everyone while a second person explains the rules.

2) Choose the triggers you will use. Those below have been edited from the main Drinking Game page

to be easier to interpret, but they should still be narrowed down to house rules depending on the

audience.

3) Each person must have a drink in hand at all times. If they empty their glass, they must get it refilled.

4) Starting at one end of the room (keep the order simple), have one person begin reading the story.

5) As soon as one of the color-coded triggers is reached, allow the person to finish the sentence and then

take a drink. If, while finishing the sentence, the reader covered another trigger, drink for that one,

too.

6) The next person then starts reading from where the last left off.

7) Repeat steps 4-5 until someone is unable to keep drinking (bathroom breaks don’t count); they may

still take their turn reading, but have effectively ‘lost’.

http://kh13.com/forum/public/style_emoticons/default/smiley-cool.png Continue until only one person is taking a drink every time a trigger is called and has therefore won

the game.

Triggers

Note: Where ‘shot’ is used here, feel free to interpret it as ‘sip’, ‘gulp’, ‘shot’, or any other measurement.

Take a shot each time there's an author's note. Take a shot with every bad pun, two if followed by

‘geddit’.

Take a shot each time the narrative stops to describe the clothing or makeup, two if it's a boy's makeup.

Take a shot whenever fishnets are mentioned.

Take a shot each time a band is mentioned, two if they are going to attend a concert.

Take a shot every time preps (or Hillary Duff) are insulted or are flaming again. Take a shot each time

Ebony gives somebody the "middle finger".

Take a shot for every use of ‘f**k’, ‘666’, or ‘depressed/depressing/etc.’. Take a shot whenever someone

slits their wrists or cries tears of blood.

Take a shot for every overly-long, dramatic pause, as in, "It was................ X!"

Take a shot every time Ebony has sex. Take a shot every time she comments on how hot someone looks,

two if it’s a band member. Take a shot whenever she refers to genitalia.

 

*Misspellings count!*

Oh my gosh.

 

I, uh, wow.

 

 

That must be a lot of shots

 

Now I kinda wanna play. *jelly*

Oh my gosh.

 

I, uh, wow.

 

 

That must be a lot of shots

 

Now I kinda wanna play. *jelly*

 

Yeah, we played with water. We took a SIP from water bottles and it took 1 1/2 chapters to finish it.