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I'm bored so I'm just going to write something.

Well,how to begin?

 

Intro

 

At the year 2015 there were just a few people living in the earth,because most of them had been killed by the wars and natural disasters,finaly the world climate was getting back to normal.

These people had to live in a generally rough form.And in a little village lived a 13 year old boy called Willian.

Willian lived with his family at a little house,he was an only child.Every day he went to shool,but he was different from the other boys and he knew it,he didn't had any friends and when people tried to get near to him he just pushed them away.

One night all the vilagers heard a strange sound at the woods,but it was too dark so they didn't went to look what it was.In the other day when they went to look they found nothing.From this day on people were killed at night by strange beings,that were looking for something that no one knew what was.

On a night these strange beings invaded Willians house and killed his family,he survived but no one knew how.

 

So,that's the begining.What do you think of it?

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A very interesting story indeed. A boy who's family has been murdered by a mysterious creature, he had no friends-no companions and no one to comfort him. He had some strange feeling about him that the other people could sense, but no one, not even he knew what. Please continue the story! :P

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Ok,I'll try

Chapter 1-The strange message

Willian woke up,he was in the square of the city,he didn't know how he managed to survive tha attack of the creatures,but he was alive now.He went to his house,it was destroyied.He didn't had a place to go,so he promised himself he was going to kill the creatures for revenge of his family.

He begun to walk through the city"what'll I do now?"he thought.

Suddenly a creature appeared in front of him and talked to Willian in a strange language"You belong to us,you won't get away,we're going to get you one way or another."Surprisingly Willian understood what it said.Then the creature tried to attack him,but he showed abilities that never knew to have.

Willian ran as fast as he could out of the vilage"what's happening?How could I understand what that creature was talking?And these abilities?I've never had them"

Willian was confused but he kept walking,for his own security he had to get out of that village.

YAY! An interesting story indeed.

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Chapter 2-The new city

Willian walks for days without water or food,he was almost with no forces when he sees a town,with the rest of his forces he gets to the central square and falls without any more forces.

When he wakes up,he's in a room,he don't see anyoone when suddenly someone talks to him:

"Hi,finally you woke up,we were afraid that you wouldn't resist.I'm Joana,and who are you?"

Willian looks at the young girl that seens to have more or less his age."where am I?how did I get here?"

"Don't you remember?we found you at the square and bring you here.So now answer me who are you?How did you get here?"

"I'm Willian,I got here when running away from creatures that were after me."said Willian to Joana.

"So you've met the creatures?Ok,now you can go wherever you want,but i'd love to talk more."

Willian gets out of the house and look to the city,it wasn't so different from his."well,what now?"asked Willian to himself"what did that creature meant when said that strange things to me?I didn't really got it."

Lost in his thought Willian didn't saw the Joana coming."so Willian what are you going to do?"

"Nothing Joana,I don't really know."said Willian getting out of his thoughts.

"You could stay with us untill you now which route to take."said Joana inviting Willian back in.

ROFL, isn't this supposed to be Chapter 2? Nice entry anyways.

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Yeah,sorry for the confusion,Iwere late,my mother was calling me,I edited the post,see?

Now it's chapter 3

Chapter 3-The fire

At that night Willian stayed in Joana's house.It was a quiet night like many others he had with his family at his hometown.But in the middle of the night a sound was heard,Willian woke up and looked around,the house was on fire,he ran to the next room,it was Joana's parents room,he couldn't get in,there was too much fire,so he went to Joana's room and found her faint at the ground,he got her and went to the front door of the house,there was a lot of fire there too,but it was the only exit,he jumped through the fire and fortunately got out.He put Joana at a park bench and went to see how was the house,it was completely destroyied,probably no one survived.He thought it was his fault that that happened,the creatures could have gone after him and destroyied the place where he were.He couldn't stay there either.

In the next morning Joana got up at the square and looked around,she only saw Willian."What happened?why are we here?"she asked."well,there was a fire on your house yesterday,I could only save you,the others probably didn't survived."said Willian going out.

"Wait,where are you going?"asked Joana going after Willian."I've got to get out of here,all of this was my fault."said Willian walking faster."No,it wasn't,how could that be your fault,but if you're going,I have to go to."said Joana keeping up with him.

From that day on Willian would have to be traveling around towns to find his own origin and to protect people from the creature.He was the only one who could do it.

oooooo a wandering hero, escaping his past. Travelling town to village looking for a place to find his origin. This has been one of the most interesting stories i've seen in a long time!

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Chapter 4

Willian now had Joana with him,he was a little bit annoyed with that,but there were nothing he could do.They got to a other village,it was bigger and very different from the other one.

It was already night when they got there.Joana and Willian found a hostel to pass the night.

Willian didn't sleep,so he went out to see the village,it was late and no one was at the street.Suddenly he saw something moving fast towards him. Willian looked to see what it was and realized that it was one of the creatures that killed his family.

"You won't get away so easily.You're ours,we will get you."said the creature in a strange language to Willian,and more creatures appeared around him.He was surrounded by them.So he had to fight against them.After some time Willian got away from the creatures.

He went to the hostel and when he got there he saw that Joana was still asleep"It'd be better if I left her here and went,it won't be so dangrous this way."said Willian to himself."But what did the creature meant?I don't understand,how can I be theirs?This is nonsense."

Willian didn't knew,but he was closer to the truth than he thought.

YAY! I'm a little sad though that no one else is reading this! T_T, you should do what I do and post a link to your story from your sig. So people will notice it and possibly go and read it.

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Are you really liking it?I thought no one would like.I'll be posting the next chapter later.

Is there any reason not to like it? I'm just passing time reading everyone's stories on here while i'm between gifs or waiting for someone to comment on my boring story -_-

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I don't think your story is boring,it's cool.But i've never noticed it,you know,I don't come in the writing forum so many times.I'm usually at the roleplaying

yes well...i'm usually anywhere with an interesting title.

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Sorry,that I'm not posting the next chapter now,it's night here and I can stay for only a few more time,so i'll leave it for tomorrow

whatever works best. I can be patient...for the moment...

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Chapter 5 Willian surrenders

Willian left the hostel,leaving Joana alone.

He walked aimlessly,until he got to a farm,he heard a strange sound coming from inside,and suddenly a shout,he went in running to see what it was,he saw a creature attacking a woman,Willian got infront of her "So,finally we found you,now you'll come with us,if you don't wish that we destroy this farm and the village."said the creature to Willian.

Looking down Willian said"Ok,I'll go,but leave the people alone."going with the creature to outside the house,a strange mean of locomotion was waiting for them.Willian and the creature walked in.

"What do you want me for?"asked Willian to the creature next to him"You're ours and we want you back."said the creature in the same strange language."I'm not from anyone,you've got to understand that."said Willian looking at the creature"Soon you'll understand"said the being.They continued the journey to an unknown place.

I feel a twist coming along! Though thats just a fan's interpretation :P

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Chapter 6

The creature ordered his prisoner to go outside with him,when Willian could see the outside,he didn't believed his eyes,they were in front of a very modern town,beings like the one that got him there where all around,the town had things that he could never imagine.

There was other creatures waiting for them,they guided Willian through the crownded city until they reach the front of a large building,they got in.

It was really modern,something that the world haven't seen for the last years.Into the building there was an impressive person waiting for them.When they stopped Willian asked"Why do you want me here?"

"You're ours,we wanted you back,you got out one time but you won't get out again."said the being looking deep into his eyes.

"I've already heard that,but what I want to know is,how could I be yours?I'm not from anyone."said Willian

"So,you don't remember,do you?You'll see son.But before we need to do somethings."said the creature ordering to the guards take Willian somewhere.

"What are you going to do?Why am I here?"asked Willian trying to escape the guards.But they were stronger and took Willian to a cell.

Willian would have to find out the thruth,but how?The creatures wouldn't tell him anything more than what he knew.

 

Joana woke up at the hostel and searched for Willian,she didn't saw him,a bit worried she went out and asked to the people at the streets if they've seen him,she went asking and asking 'till she got at the same farm where Willian was caught.The woman said to her the direction where the creatures took him,Joana thanked the woman and continued her way.

hmm, lost memories.

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Chapter 7-Strange places

Joana got somewhere unknown to her,it was a huge city,she knew she'd find Willian there,and went in.

 

Willian woke up,he wasn't in the cell anymore,he was in something like a laboratory,he looked around and suddenly heard a voice"So,looks like you're already awake,lets take a look at you now"it was one of the creatures that brang him there.The creature started to use a strange machine,Willian felt asleep.

Joana was walking through the city,she saw that the habitants weren't humans,she was stopped by one of them that just pulled her into a building without a word.

She looked around and asked to the misterious being"Why did you bring me here" the creature looked down to her and said"Your going to ba a test for our experiment,just wait here"finished the creature putting Joana into a small cell.

Ooo, a tingly interest.

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Chapter 8-The strange experiment

A few hours later Joana is taken to a room,she sees Willian sitting on a litter,"Willian!I can't believe you're here"said Joana getting closer"What's wrong with you?Don't you remember me,Joana."

"Sees like our experiment is going well."said a creature coming from a dark corner in the room.

"What experiment?What've you done to him?He's just a normal human!"said Joana looking angry.

"He's not a normal human,this boy that you see infront of you isn't even a human,he's our experiment,and we're are testing it.He won't be answering to you,he only hear his master."

I wonder what Willian could be? Interesting.

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Chapter 10

"Come closer human being,I'll show how it works"said the creature to Joana."Attack the girl!"said the strange creature for Willian.

At the same time Willian got up and attacked Joana with an uncommon strength."Stop!"said the same creature,Willian stoped where he was.

Suddenly regaining consciousness,Willian looked to Joana lying on the floor"What happened here?What was it?"asked Willian to himself trying to reason.

"So,you can control yourself?Looks like not everything went good as expected."said the creature looking to Willian.

Hmm, I wonder what experiments could have undergone.

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