I'm bored so I'm just going to write something.

Well,how to begin?

 

Intro

 

At the year 2015 there were just a few people living in the earth,because most of them had been killed by the wars and natural disasters,finaly the world climate was getting back to normal.

These people had to live in a generally rough form.And in a little village lived a 13 year old boy called Willian.

Willian lived with his family at a little house,he was an only child.Every day he went to shool,but he was different from the other boys and he knew it,he didn't had any friends and when people tried to get near to him he just pushed them away.

One night all the vilagers heard a strange sound at the woods,but it was too dark so they didn't went to look what it was.In the other day when they went to look they found nothing.From this day on people were killed at night by strange beings,that were looking for something that no one knew what was.

On a night these strange beings invaded Willians house and killed his family,he survived but no one knew how.

 

So,that's the begining.What do you think of it?

Ok well me being a writer too I see something that's been missing with most writing these days... Awesomeness!!! Ok I love the concept and I love the whole Idea that he is like a person with no friends. The story really does evolve and I see a lot of potential in the story. All in all I think you have a great idea going on here. Great job and keep it up.

OMG! Someone else has actually commented on the story! (As I had predicted)

Chapter 11

Willian looked behind and saw the creature "What happened?What did you do to me?"

"You're our experiment,but seens like something have failed,we'll have to take a look."said the creature getting closer to Willian.

"Oh no,you're not going to put your hands on me."said Willian starting to run to the door.With s signal the creature called others with different weapons on their hands,he stopped"As you see there's no way you're getting out of here."said the strange creature."Of course there's."said Willian running and jumping through a window,at the same time a shot was heard and Willian felt unconcios on the ground."You should have thought better."said the creature getting Willian's body and taking it to his laboratory.

 

Some time later Joana woke up in the same cell where she was before,she looked around trying to reconcile the ideas "What happened?Why did Willian attack me?It didn't even looked like him."

 

Willian woke up,he was in the same laboratory as before,feeling something hurt in his back,but he didn't mind,he had to get out of there as fast as he could.

interesting.

Chapter 12

Willian looked around,there was only one window."Too easy"thought Willian while opening the window.He got out,then he remembered about Joana "I have to take her out of here."

Willian was outside the building but he could see great part of it through the windows,he went looking for somewhere he could go in.He saw a dark corridor,perfect for hiding.Willian broke the window and went in,the corridor leaded to the cells where they took him when Willian first got there.

A noise was heard,Willian just stayied quiet trying to recognise it,it was Joana's voice,certainly she was there too.Willian followed the voice till he got to a cell."Joana,are you in there?"he asked trying to see inside."Willian?Is that you?"JOana came closer to the door where Willian was standing."I'm glad you're safe.Come on,let's get out of here."said Willian opening the door.

When the two of them got out of the building Willian looked at Joana with a serious expression and said"Joana,go away,get out of this city.I have something to finish."

"But,they're going to kill you!"said Joana trying to stop Willian,who was going in the building again."Don't try to stop me,I have things to deal with,you have your life."said Willian pulling Joana for the side and going in.

 

*now I think the story is getting closer to the end*

wel thats sad. Then again short stories are always the best.

Chapter 13 (Roxa's number )

Joana understood that Willian didn't wanted her around"I'll go Willian,but I'll come back and not alone."she thought while walking in the road.

 

Willian got in the building through the back door,so no one would see him.He had to know his past and the time was now.

He went across corridor till he got to the lab where they took him at the first time.Willian sitted and waited,the creature would be back soon to see how he was.

Some time later the door oppened,the creature went ing,looked at the place where he'd left Willian,there was nothing,looked around the room,surprisingly found Willian sit on a chair looking at him."What are you doing there?"he asked surprised "I want answers,and you'll be answering now."said Willian getting up and going towards the creature "Wait,don't get upset...we'll do something...don't come closer stay where youare"said the creature looking scared.

"Now,say to me,what am I?Why did you created me?"said Willian getting a knife from his pocket. "Ok,I'll tell whatever you want.You're an experiment done by me,we created you as a weapon,to use in wars,if you went right we'd created lots of soldiers like you,but something went wrong and you got conscience and scaped,you stole a ship from our planet and got here,but you didn't knew how to pilot,and crashed here.Them your family found you and took you home."said the creature looking at Willian. "So I was a war weapon?What are you doing here in Earth?Why did you create this city?"said Willian nervous "At the time we're doing more weapons like you,but this time they don't have conscience,they are in production all over the city,and we just needed you to get the model,now you're useless."said the creature with a mischievous look "So,you're going to kill me right?I'd like to see you try."said Willian going through the open door and escaping from the building as fast as he could.

Ho ho ho ho! So he was actually a secret weapon created by them for wars! Such a nice twist to the story.

I like to do that tipe of things,my sister says that I'm good at creating things,but compared to you I'm nothing

Well I don't want to be so pridefull on that. Your just as good of an author!

Chapter 15

Willian was walking behind some houses,trying not to be found,when he passed across an open window he saw something that could help him in what he wanted.He jumped the window and got in,there was a man "Are you a human?I mean,a normal human?"asked Willian looking at him.The man turned around and looked at Willian "Of course I'm a normal human,but who are you?" "I'm Willian,and who are you?" asked Willian sitting on a chair to rest "I'm Albert,a scientist,these creatures got me to help them get a boy that was an experment done by them."said the man looking carefuly at Willian "Well,as you're a scientist you can help me,I'm the one that they're after,they're creating a whole army I don't know for what but I need to stop it,we must destroy the whole city,do you have a way to do it?" the scientist thought for a bit and answered "Well,there's a bomb that can destroy all this city,it's in a compartment under the square,but I know how to get in,I'll help you,this is something that I think I must do."said the scientist to Willian.

Willian and the scientist,got out of the house heading to the square, Willian knew that they didn't have much time,so he was going as fast as he could.

When the two of them got there,the scientist lead Willian to a little house in one of the corners of the square,Albert got some keys from his pocket and used one of them to open the door.When the door was oppened they fastly went in.

"Here it is"said the scientist pointing to a small bomb"Ok,now you can go doctor,I'll activate it and them I'll follow you." said Willian getting closer to the bomb"No Willian that isn't the way it works,when you activate it,it explodes at the same time,maybe with some seconds,but not time enough for you to get out.Leave it to me,you can get out and live your life. said the scientist blocking Willian's way.

"Sorry doctor,but I must do this,I don't have any life out there,I order you to get out of this city as fast as you can,I must end this even if it costs my life,now go,I'll count five minutes,is that enough for you?"said Willian looking serious "Ok boy,if you insist,and about the time,yes it's enough,so I'll go now.Good Luck Willian."said the scientist leaving the compartiment.

 

Joana was walking in the street when she heard a noyse,she looked behind and saw a huge explosion in the city where Willian was,the first thing she did was run away from the explosion,then she looked behind,she couldn't see the city anymore,but she could see someone in the street,she sitted and waited,he wanted to know if this person was Willian,she hopped it was.

When this person came closer she could see that it wasn't Willianbut a man,he came from the city so he could know where Willian was. "Excuse me sir"said Joana getting near the man "Yes young lady."asnwered politely the man "Do you know someone named Willian?"asked Joana looking worried "The young boy,yes I knew him,but he isn't alive anymore."said sadly the man "Poor Willian.What's your name sir?"asked Joana "I'm Albert,and who are you young lady?" said Albert sitting alongside Joana "I'm Joana,a friend of Willians.How did he die?" "He wanted to destroy that city,and he stayied behind to activate a bomb to explode hte whole place.I said to him let me satay but he refused."

I know I'm doing double post,but,I can't wait,I have to finish this story,it's on my head,if I don't write it now I'll forget it.

Ending

It was almost a week since the city was destroyed,Albert now knew all Willian's story,and penalized with the situation of Joana,who now didn't had anywhere to go,left her to leave in a guest's room that he had in his house.Now the authorities where looking for suvivors in the unknown city. Joana was turning the TV channels looking for something to watch when,the news called her attention "Good morning,we're now going to follow the recua of someone that the firefighters found under a destroyed building"said the reporter showing the images of the rescue,when Joana looked at the images she was impressed,the one that they found was Willian,and he was still alive,but how did he survive?

 

That's it.Now I'm finished with this one.

Gizelita, as I always say, you're so creative! I love your stories. AMAZING!!!

Thanks sister

stop telling everyone I'm your twin sister!!! PS:Thanks for registering me!

But,you're my twin sister,there's nothing you can do.And I'm happy that you liked KH13

That was a great story!

I'm continuing it in another thread

Indeed, I shall read on then.