*This story is based off the "supposed" hit anime show Demon king Daimao. The overall show itself had great potential to be a great show but due to the fanservice and rushed story, it didn't go well so I believed it deserves a rewritten plot. Some parts are rewritten, some remain the same.Here is my version:
Chapter 1
The sad fate
It's raining hard in the middle of the night, a young woman wearing a raincoat drenched with water holding a crying baby in the womb of her hands. She took off her rosary necklace, giving it to her baby. "It is best if they don't know of your whereabouts". She's currently standing in front of a orphanage gently dropping her baby in the front gate. "I wish him to be strong and hope for his health till the time he realizes his destiny. Child of our hope." She left her baby at the front gate retreating away.
Seven years later...........
The young boy Sai Akuto running around the church playing with the other children. He had two friends, a young boy named Xeno and a girl named Musubi. Xeno had short brown hair with blue eyes, wears a church uniform, and have tan skin. Musubi had orange hair, green eyes, freckles, and pale skin. While Sai Akuto in the other hand had short brown hair, purple eyes, wears a church uniform and had a shart shade under his eyes.
They all were playing hide and seek around the church, rudely interrupting the Nuns from their daily work.
"1, 3, 3 4, 5.......10!" Musubi ran finding Sai in his usual hiding spot. "Hey that's not fair! You cheated!" Young Sai with a angry grin. *giggle*"Let's look for Xeno." The both of them went searching for Xeno, until Sai passed by something particular. He stopped when he noticed a young eight year old girl with long red hair sounded by nuns. "Is she new?" Sai wondered. "Sai cmon let's go." Musubi interrupted tugging his shirt. "Go without me." He insisted. Musubi made a fit about it but she just had to accept it so she went looking without him.
He walked up to the nuns, staring at the mysterious girl. "Ah you've been wondering who she is huh?" The nun looked at her then said "She's a new member of the church, poor unfortunate family. Her name is Kena." She smiles, "Kena my dear why don't you introduce yourself to this lovely young man?" Kena had a nervous look on her face, she hid her face in the nun's robe. Sai stuck his hand towards her, "Don't worry Kena I don't bite. Let me show you around this place". At last she overcomed the butterflies in her stomach and grabbed Sai's hand blushing.
He showed Kena around the church until he bumped into his friends. "We've been looking for you all over the place! Were were you at-" they look at Kena. "Oh and who is this?" Kena quickly hide in back of Sai. "Oh don't worry about them, these are my friends Xeno and Musubi." They both gave Kena a welcomed expression. Kena walked up to them giving them a bow. "You see I was giving her a tour around." Sai said. They all decided to play hide and seek until it got dark.
All four of them watched the sun set.
Xeno asked Musubi, "Hey what do you want to be when you grow up?"
Musubi replied, " I dunno I think I want to be a government agent".
"What about you Xeno?"
He replies, "I want to be a Teacher for the school of magic arts"
"What do you want to be Sai?" Xeno asked.
"I want to be a high priest."
All three of his friends look at him with astonishment.
"Woah a high priest that's the highest government ranking, do you know what it takes to be one?" Xeno asked.
"Yes I'm well aware that's why I will work to achieve the highest grades. I will contribute to society making the world a better more safer place for me and you." Sai said to his friends with his fist in the air. After that they continue their daily lifes in the Orphanage learning about the word of Christ and the Bible.
Three months have passed.
Sai was packing all his belongings for he was adopted by the Akuto family. Without saying goodbye to his friends, Sai headed out of the Orphanage but then he heard a loud crying. It was Kena watching as he exits the church. He walked up to her with a cold expression on his face. He picked her up by grabbing her hair and gave her a dove hairclip. Sai then turned back heading out without saying goodbye~
*This story is based off the "supposed" hit anime show Demon king Daimao. The overall show itself had great potential to be a great show but due to the fanservice and rushed story, it didn't go well so I believed it deserves a rewritten plot. Some parts are rewritten, some remain the same.Here is my version:
Chapter 1
The sad fate
It's raining hard in the middle of the night, a young woman wearing a raincoat drenched with water holding a crying baby in the womb of her hands. She took off her rosary necklace, giving it to her baby. "It is best if they don't know of your whereabouts". She's currently standing in front of a orphanage gently dropping her baby in the front gate. "I wish him to be strong and hope for his health till the time he realizes his destiny. Child of our hope." She left her baby at the front gate retreating away.
Seven years later...........
The young boy Sai Akuto running around the church playing with the other children. He had two friends, a young boy named Xeno and a girl named Musubi. Xeno had short brown hair with blue eyes, wears a church uniform, and have tan skin. Musubi had orange hair, green eyes, freckles, and pale skin. While Sai Akuto in the other hand had short brown hair, purple eyes, wears a church uniform and had a shart shade under his eyes.
They all were playing hide and seek around the church, rudely interrupting the Nuns from their daily work.
"1, 3, 3 4, 5.......10!" Musubi ran finding Sai in his usual hiding spot. "Hey that's not fair! You cheated!" Young Sai with a angry grin. *giggle*"Let's look for Xeno." The both of them went searching for Xeno, until Sai passed by something particular. He stopped when he noticed a young eight year old girl with long red hair sounded by nuns. "Is she new?" Sai wondered. "Sai cmon let's go." Musubi interrupted tugging his shirt. "Go without me." He insisted. Musubi made a fit about it but she just had to accept it so she went looking without him.
He walked up to the nuns, staring at the mysterious girl. "Ah you've been wondering who she is huh?" The nun looked at her then said "She's a new member of the church, poor unfortunate family. Her name is Kena." She smiles, "Kena my dear why don't you introduce yourself to this lovely young man?" Kena had a nervous look on her face, she hid her face in the nun's robe. Sai stuck his hand towards her, "Don't worry Kena I don't bite. Let me show you around this place". At last she overcomed the butterflies in her stomach and grabbed Sai's hand blushing.
He showed Kena around the church until he bumped into his friends. "We've been looking for you all over the place! Were were you at-" they look at Kena. "Oh and who is this?" Kena quickly hide in back of Sai. "Oh don't worry about them, these are my friends Xeno and Musubi." They both gave Kena a welcomed expression. Kena walked up to them giving them a bow. "You see I was giving her a tour around." Sai said. They all decided to play hide and seek until it got dark.
All four of them watched the sun set.
Xeno asked Musubi, "Hey what do you want to be when you grow up?"
Musubi replied, " I dunno I think I want to be a government agent".
"What about you Xeno?"
He replies, "I want to be a Teacher for the school of magic arts"
"What do you want to be Sai?" Xeno asked.
"I want to be a high priest."
All three of his friends look at him with astonishment.
"Woah a high priest that's the highest government ranking, do you know what it takes to be one?" Xeno asked.
"Yes I'm well aware that's why I will work to achieve the highest grades. I will contribute to society making the world a better more safer place for me and you." Sai said to his friends with his fist in the air. After that they continue their daily lifes in the Orphanage learning about the word of Christ and the Bible.
Three months have passed.
Sai was packing all his belongings for he was adopted by the Akuto family. Without saying goodbye to his friends, Sai headed out of the Orphanage but then he heard a loud crying. It was Kena watching as he exits the church. He walked up to her with a cold expression on his face. He picked her up by grabbing her hair and gave her a dove hairclip. Sai then turned back heading out without saying goodbye~