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Here's a story ive made with my friends Lajixu and Shelbell72 with three different points of view.

 

Walking. I've been doing it for hours now. I've always known there was a village nearby. I didn't think it would be this far though. It's alright though, I don't mind. As long as I get to where I'm going, I'm alright with it. Plus, it's very beautiful out here anyway. Cloudless day, shining sun, green grass. It fills me with joy.

It's been a day and a half since Bartek destroyed my village. I know it's alright, but something inside me burns for revenge. Thinking he took my parents and my home. It's not like me to want that. But I know I need it.

I squint my eyes to see if I can see anything. I think I can make out the beginnings of roof tops. That's good. I should tell of what happened as a warning to keep their guard up. They might need it. This makes me remember.

Fire. Smoke. My mom was yelling at me to get in a cellar for safety. A couple hours I come out, pushing hard on the door because rubble covers it, only to see my village burned down. It looks like black snow. I felt like crying because I knew nothing survived. Not my family, not my friends, not my possessions. Gone. But I knew the best thing to do was go. I left only with the clothes on my back, off to the nearest village to find new life, because I knew I could. That's the one thing keeping my spirits up. And it's the one thing that will for a while.

Before I know it, I'm in the new village. Time to start over. Time for rebirth.

 

Alright. Hope you enjoyed my part. Leave comments on how I did!

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Nice start but you tickled one of my only pet peeves.

Present tense narrative, *hissss*

Edited by cdgerrity

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Yeah, I don't usually write like this..... I don't really like them that much either. xD

Good job.

Nice start but you tickled one of my only pet peeves.Present tense narrative, *hissss*

So that's what that is.

It seems pretty good so far. :) Nice job

don't really see present tense narratives often xD

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