I've been writing songs for a few year but i seem to have the problem of only ever being able to write the first verse and something of a bridge. I always seem to lose momentum around the hook. in this particular song i lost momentum and was wondering if you guys that i should push through the writers block and move on and if so in which direction would be cool.

 

I bum for love like i bum for cigarettes and i drink until i choke

cuz day by day the top gets heavy its so hard to stay afloat

and sometimes, i wish tomorrow wouldn't come

i wouldn't have to get out of bed, cuz im just a nervous wreck

and i'll play your heart like i play guitar but the notes will surely stop

im climbing up through downward spirals tryna make it to the top

and sometimes i wish i didnt have to feel

because i wouldn't feel regret, see im just a nervous wreck.....

 

I'm still learning about writing but thats what i've gotten its just a few lines put together on one of those nights. any advice? i particularly need some help with writing a hook that actaully makes sense, like how would i go about writing that? thanks in advance.

Make that the choir.

Edited April 4, 201312 yr by Sora's Baby

that actually makes a bit of sense thanks brah