Posted May 8, 201312 yr *Special thanks to Javelin434* - TOGETHER - I knew nothing I came to that place with a blank slate In fact, the first thing I remember Is seeing you From then on, it was simple We were all friends. I watched you How you would act Sometimes it was funny Sometimes it was annoying But even with all that I still knew you cared. That's why I was so scared The first time it happened You turned away from me And you were almost gone In the end, though, you came back But then you had to leave again. I waited for you For so long I forget about you But then I remembered That's what made me go I couldn't wait anymore And even though it was dangerous I found you And you found me At first I thought it wasn't real But then I felt you near And I knew that it was. From there, it felt like it was over But then, you left again And I waited Until you came back Without him But now I know Just like before Someday We'll all be together again. Edited May 6, 201510 yr by Firaga Sensei
May 8, 201312 yr Aww, I loved it! It's very song-like, too. I know you can make a song out of any poem, but this one just has a really strong "lyric" feel to it. Depressing, but a tint of hope in the speaker's tone.
May 9, 201312 yr This is... really powerful. Combine with the song really makes it breathtakingly awe-inspiring. Also, Thanks for mentioning me here! It's a real honor!
May 9, 201312 yr This is great! Very nice work I'm going to be honest I thought of Soriku while reading this and based on the title
September 26, 201312 yr *Special thanks to Javelin434* TOGETHER I knew nothing I came to that place with a blank slate In fact, the first thing I remember Is seeing you From then on, it was simple We were all friends. I watched you How you would act Sometimes it was funny Sometimes it was annoying But even with all that I still knew you cared. That's why I was so scared The first time it happened You turned away from me And you were almost gone In the end, though, you came back But then you had to leave again. I waited for you For so long I forget about you But then I remembered That's what made me go I couldn't wait anymore And even though it was dangerous I found you And you found me At first I thought it wasn't real But then I felt you near And I knew that it was. From there, it felt like it was over But then, you left again And I waited Until you came back Without him But now I know Just like before Someday We'll all be together again. This is a wonderful poem. :') *Crack* ....FIRETRUCK! THE FEELS! T~T
Edited by Firaga Sensei