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A weird kingdom hearts bbs story: The birthday! (contains spoilers.......maybe)

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This is a really weird story I came up with. I know it's not very good but I just felt like I should put it up...

 

This is a story about Ven and Vanitas' birthday.

The story has absolutly NOTHING with the original story of bbs....... Well maybe a little, but the plot is turned around... Anyway let's get back to what I was going to say.

In an altrenate timeline where master Xehanort dies at the hands if Terra, and Master Eraqus is alive, Ventus and his dark side Vanitas are having their 16th birthday, and like I said earlier this has nothing to do with the original plot of the story the two get along and act as if they were brothers.

Enough with my rambling! Let's get on with the story!

"Terra!!" Aqua yelled out. She was looking to see if either Ven or Vanitas was coming her way. She didn't want them to see the party decorations.

"Where are you?!"

Just then Terra ran through the door as shutting it behind him.

"I-I got the plates!" he panted, "What is it?"

Aqua looked at him, clearly worried about something. "I'm afraid one of them will come in here and see everything!"

"Don't worry Aqua," Terra said reasurring "They are both on that hill outside, I saw them, and remember Ven HATES beig inside and so does Vanitas. So I seriously doubt that they'll see this."

"Yeah," Aqua still had that look on her face, "But what if they come back? I really want this to be a surprise."

Terra smiled "Then we'll distract them! Lets just consentrate on getting everyting ready okay?"

Aqua nodded then said, "Okay, you stay here and get everything ready while I go and get the cake."

"Fine." Terra said.

Aqua ran out of the room and shut the door behind her, while Terra started getting the snack table ready. Then the door opened.

"Oh shoot!" Terra thought, "They're going to see it!" but to Terra's relief it was only Master Eraqus, though he hadn't seen the decorations either.

"Woah! When you guys said you were going to throw a party you ment it!" he said in amazment. "But Terra I'm still not sure about you bringing people from other worlds here. It's not natural."

Terra sighed "Relax! It'll be fine, and Ven will love it! Both of them will!"

"But Vanitas doesn't know any of them, so it won't be as fun for him."

Terra shook his head "Vanitas has just started to learn about friendship. So for him to meet new people will be good."

Master Eraqus sighed "I guess...."

"This is what I need you to do for me," Terra said "Aqua is out getting the cake, so I need someone to watch the stuff and make sure that neither Ven nor Vanitas comes back and sees everything while I go and get everyone. Can you do that master?"

Master Eraqus nodded "Yep, you can count on me!"

ooo

"Do you want to go back?" Ven asked Vanitas softly.

"Hmmm? Oh yeah okay." he responed.

The two started walking home, until Vanitas said "16 huh?"

Ven nodded "Yeah I guess so."

"Can't believe it's already been a year."

"A year since what?" Ven asked.

Vanitas smiled "Well a year since I came here. I'm really surprised that Master Eraqus actually let me stay and with open arms too. After all the things I did to you guys I really don't deserve it."

"Don't worry about it! That's over and done with, and don't forget you were forced to do those things." Ven reasurred him.

"But I had my own intentions." Vanitas told him.

Ven patted his back "Hey! Like I said before, that's over and done with. So you don't have to worry."

Vanitas smiled again "Yeah... Thanks Ven"

"Anytime!" Ven said happily. They resumed walking toward the castle.

When they reached the courtyard Ven ran inside and yelled "WE'RE BACK!!!!!!"

Up in the party room Master Eraqus was double cheking everything when he heard.

"Oh NO!" he thought "I have o get them out if here!!!!"

"Master? Where are you?" Vanitas called out. Master Eraqus ran down the stairs to find them, but then tripped and fell. Ven and Vanitas both ran over to him and helped him up.

"Master! Are you okay?" Ven asked, concern washed all over his face. He helped Master Eraqus to his feet. "I-I'm fine, but you know what would make me feel even better?"

"What?" Ven and Vanitas both asked.

"You know those healing leaves you can find in the Enchanted Forest?"

They both nodded.

"Those would be terrific right about now, because I hit my knee really hard."

"Be right back then! C'mon Ven!" Vanitas yelled, running out if the room. Ven followed.

 

 

 

Woohoo done with chapter 1! Yea I know it's not perfect, but I'm trying :) I'll try to get chapter two up as soon as I can.

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LOL! Very nice! I liked it... ;)

I would work on the dialouge... their words tend to just drone off and be bland... but thats really it! Can't wait for chaptuh two!

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Yeah i know i typed this on my itouch so i knew i would miss some things, thanks for letting me know!

No prob... ^~^

  • 4 weeks later...
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I don't think I'm going to continue with this one :( Can't get anymore ideas

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