Something about this sketch seems off... I'm about to start coloring, so I need some help fixing whatever it is bothering me...
(I think it's the anatomy? Or maybe the composition... ._.))

EDIT: URGH the file won't load let me try again...

 

 

Edited July 3, 201312 yr by Noby Raghavan

First off, looks nice so far. I love Legend of Zelda/Link art. I'll just rattle off some things I noticed, I hope they help:

 

-Look at the eyes. They seem to be a bit off perspective-wise, almost to the point where it looks like they should be swapped. 

-The sword is a bit short, and looks like it's held at an odd angle. If you're trying to make its point be on the ground, try making it a bit straighter.

-Going off that last point the whole position Link is in is angled slightly. I'd straighten his left leg a little to give him more balance.

-Bring out some definition in the arms. He doesn't have to be super muscular or anything, but arms are straight tubes either. Also, the left forearm is looks longer than his upper arm.

 

Keep up the good work!

First off, looks nice so far. I love Legend of Zelda/Link art. I'll just rattle off some things I noticed, I hope they help:

 

-Look at the eyes. They seem to be a bit off perspective-wise, almost to the point where it looks like they should be swapped. 

-The sword is a bit short, and looks like it's held at an odd angle. If you're trying to make its point be on the ground, try making it a bit straighter.

-Going off that last point the whole position Link is in is angled slightly. I'd straighten his left leg a little to give him more balance.

-Bring out some definition in the arms. He doesn't have to be super muscular or anything, but arms are straight tubes either. Also, the left forearm is looks longer than his upper arm.

 

Keep up the good work!

Thank you! =D 

First off, looks nice so far. I love Legend of Zelda/Link art. I'll just rattle off some things I noticed, I hope they help:

 

-Look at the eyes. They seem to be a bit off perspective-wise, almost to the point where it looks like they should be swapped. 

-The sword is a bit short, and looks like it's held at an odd angle. If you're trying to make its point be on the ground, try making it a bit straighter.

-Going off that last point the whole position Link is in is angled slightly. I'd straighten his left leg a little to give him more balance.

-Bring out some definition in the arms. He doesn't have to be super muscular or anything, but arms are straight tubes either. Also, the left forearm is looks longer than his upper arm.

 

Keep up the good work!

 

This seems pretty damn accurate. The only thing I would add is that his left hand looks very rigid considering it's resting on his leg. Maybe play around with the curvature of the forearm/wrist and the fingers themselves. Coupled with straightening/bulking out the legs will set this right, methinks