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(Okay, to those of you that haven't read the prologue, here's the link: http://kh13.com/forum/topic/60318-nine-heroes-prolougemy-idea-for-a-video-game/. It's not required that you read it, but I'd appreciate it if you did. Also, this RP takes Christian religion, and kinda twists it and turns it into something you may not like. If you're a fan of Disgaea, you probably won't mind. Even still, I needed to put that there, because there's the chance that one person would be offended. Anyways, let's start this off!) (By the way, Red Text is out of context...text. Basically, I, the writer, am speaking directly towards you, or whatever. You probably know what I mean!)

 

 

 

  This story starts in the Northern continent of Purgatory, where the Angels reside.(Yup. We're starting off like this already. See what I mean? I just think it sounds a bit cooler...that, and I'm too lazy to come up with a proper title, and "heaven" as a continent wouldn't do good.) In this world, there is no single dominant race. Each race gets a chance to rule the world of Kalodia every five years. Each one rules differently, but all of them are in ways that keep peace. Angels, for example, don't command everything of every continent. Instead, they bless people with help, physical or mental, when they are in need of it. They help the dead pass on into the afterlife, and just help people in general. They make the world peaceful. This tale follows one angel, Tesse, a newly "created" Angel of the high city of Philia, a beautiful city of peace and love, much like most cities in Purgatory. She is training under her teacher, Nikolite, who has the highest title in the Continent of Purgatory, God, which is Purgatory's term for their king. We start following the two in their private classroom.

  "Nikolite, sir, what will you be teaching me next?" Says Tesse, very eager to learn from her teacher. "The ways of life of other races? Why we must help pass the dead onto the afterlife?" Then Nikolite sighs. "Please, Tesse, calm yourself down. Let's see...there is something I should be telling you about. It's about the monsters that have been attacking." What Nikolite is talking about are the strange occurrences of monster attacks, all around the world. "Oh yes, please explain! I have been curious about that, every since the repeated attacks against our city gates!" Tesse exclaims, pulling out a notebook and a pencil. "Yes, very well..." says Nikolite, in a dreadful kind of manner.

  "It all started only a couple of years ago, when Angels took over as Rulers. Before the attacks, monsters were peaceful creatures, that would even help with the affairs of the races of the continents. However, they one day started attacking many people. On that day, 12,586 people died all over the world, from monsters of all sizes. Big, small, strong, weak, all sorts of monsters killed and pillaged. This, continuing to today, is the War of the Creatures. Right now, the war is in a stalemate, neither side winning or losing. However, if we wish for peace in our world again, we must win this war, with as many contributions as possible!" Nikolite finishes by slamming his fist into his desk, which then cracks. Then Tesse finishes up writing in her notebook. "Wow, we should really be doing something to help!" She exclaims. Nikolite looks at her for a while, then says, "Yes, we will. Which is why we will be putting off our current lessons, and be moving on to a unit of lessons, regarding killing monsters, their weaknesses, and working with others to take them down. We must contribute to the war as much as possible!"

"But sir," she says,"I was only created a week ago! I can't just fight right away!" She says this, but she has the appearance of a 13 year old girl. "Yes, this is true," says Nikolite, "But wars go on for many years. You will be able to put effort into this war within the next year. Now, it is time for you to go. Tomorrow, meet me at the practice arena, where I will give you your weapon." He then proceeds to leave the room. Tesse then gathers up all of her stuff, but with hesitation. She's never been violent before, and she's never been in a situation where she could've been violent. She went through everything Nikolite said, and decided she wasn't looking forward to tomorrow. She would tell Nikolite that she didn't want to fight. Hopefully he'll understand...

 

 

 

(Kay guys, that's it for what I have. To tell you the truth, it's exhausting to do this for an extended time. Now I know how actors and teachers feel. :/ Anyways, thank you for reading, and Chapter 2 will be coming at some point. Also, sorry if it was kind of...boring. I didn't want it to be too long, and this is my first time doing something like this. But if you just give feedback of any kind, then I'd appreciate it! Alright, seeya!)

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Funny you mention Disgaea, my brother's playing that near me right now. xD

Good start! It was a little short for me to give too much advice, but you might want to break up the paragraphs a little bit more so it doesn't look like one big wall of text. The story's interesting and original, though, which is great! :D 

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